NEW YORK TALE PART 6 BY THOMAS WHITFIELD Dame Tom xena said I love that. what an ending. Zorra came up to Tom and said. our love brought you back to life give me one of those magical kisses now. just then she kissed him very deeply as becky his wife looked on, this bothered him couse he thought she would get pissed but no. She liked it and started kissing zorra and me. This was really getting out of control. He knew nothing of thier plans or anything what the hell was going on and how could he find out? Elektra then asked. Well who is this Mysterious Valkyrie queen who pops out in the story . The one you went on the net to meet in a chat room in your story. She is the one i write for. I got this notion going in my story that, her stories on her site become reality. and She is like this mysterious gooroo that makes it all happen. So wear are you going with it. xena asked? I am not quiet sure yet Tom replied. I'll know when i write it. What? becky asked hows that? Well See i write out the emotion in my head at the time. say I was sitting in front of the computer typeing this story right now! Meaning our conversation Zorra said? Yes tom replied say I was doing that. I wouldn't really know what the hell my next sentece would be let along wear the story is going I let the story tell me wear it wants to go! Zorra said then So what your telling me is, that you don't even know wear part 6 is going yet you have no clue at all. yep thats pretty much it. no clue. somtimes i get an idea for a story line and write it in but other then that no. Becky said Well Tom the pubisher will meet us at 12 pm for lunch what the hell are you gonna tell him about wear the story is going he will want to know. Well if he likes it so far then he won't bitch about it. couse my style wrote the first 5 didn't it. Look we came a long way to help you get this story moving. we gotta have some input into it. if you don't know then we will have to help you zorra said. Tom replied good then part 6 is up to all of us then we'll see how your fans like it when we all write the next story. Well look its 5am now tom said its kinda late to start one now. No its not becky said. Look trust me. after we are done part 6 we'll go get the low daown from the publisher that way we can tell him somthing. that way we got somthing to show him. ok. Ok lets do it then. PART 6 It took all of the 2 weeks for TJ to recover from his Injuries. But was doing very well With it couse of his lady loves. But TJ's life was going to take yet another serious turn. he was about to meet up with the sole survior from his past. He didn't know it yet but his life was about to get a hole lot harder. He was a quick healer so his injuries did not bother him anymore. so he began to make appearences on TV again. Now some sort of icon. surviving the match that killed him. people wildly cheered him for doing the impossible. and some how in the eyes of the fans He was a hero. The guy who takes that impossible and makes it very possible. His match with xena was comming up the next day on thier new Monday night program. a real ratings buster. the show ended with him in an interview saying that he was gonna walk out with his title. well here is the interview. So TJ some say that You were lucky to even servive let along walk out. What do you think. I think I am the champ Lora. Listion I won for all those out thier who lived a dream just to see it smashed. I live for the fans by the fans and with the fans. and yes I would die for my fans. Xena Your a very tough fighter. but in order to take this title you will have to be willing to die yourself in order to take it. I already have are you ready for that. I don't think so. So TJ whats this mean for tommorrow night. Simple I'll take it a new level. If i win, when I win I will dedicate the match to all of you out thier my fans who see me thew this impossible dream. but if I loose I will step down not only from the title but from ICW. I will retire indefinatley. Just Then Xena comes storming out saying What the hell is this. What do you mean retire. You think Just couse of tht win you are so big You can thow your carrer on the line. Whats that say about me TJ. We are suppose to be lovers. You really think I am that week. No Xena its not about you! Ya well you could of fooled me TJ. Xena Listion the fans need to know I live for them and do the impossible for them so if i loose I give up my title and my soul. xena dumbfounded says Soul? what are you talking about? Its been ordered Xena? by a higher power that I do this. maybe I'll loose maybe i'll win bt I will do it never the less. What Higher power? The Valkyrie, I know what you 3 women are and I know i been living on one hell of a lucky streak. Why have I I don't know yet. but thier is some reason behind it all. something that needs to be know to me and everyone. I died Xena Last sunday I died in front of millions to be brought back. TJ It was our love that brought you back Not some higher power You said it yourself Love conquers all even death, But thier is more to it. What TJ What more is thier? Zora then came out holding a microphone Saying ya TJ what could thier be what reason? what fantastic Power allowed you to do What you knew was impossible? I wish I knew. Tj replied! Thier is no power TJ you got lucky thats all. I didn't hear the ref count or reliese your arm was over me. That was the power you spoke of. Luck TJ. aand What of the word valkyrie? You think That word is Luck Too! Concerened she askedWear did you hear that Word from? See I have this hobby I like to write and everything I wrote started comming true. Buts thats not what gave that word to me It was this. He held up his diary. Its all here our adventure together. I was told to write it. ordered too. By whom Zorra asked. Your queen valkyrie Diana. ring a bell? So I wanna know right now am I the next fantastic story for your pages of your sight. I figured since hell I can't controll my life I mid as well get the message out. See everyone thier is a place wear you can read all these storys of powerful women who crush men. and it happens. It happens for real. They seem like stories and when they are done these men end up gone forever. Am I next. Hell I was told I was the exception. How do I know. Damn it I already lost everything I knew. I lost my family in a plane crash imagine it. everybody you knew on one plain. You didn't go you were gonna pick up some stuff for the party. and just when you go to get on the plane. The tv says flight 121 out of Philadelphia crashed. It dropped out of the sky like a ton of bricks no servivors. but me. why for some fucking story. or what. What the fuck did you people do with my life? Calm down TJ zorra said we did not do that. that was life itself we came in after remember. Ya you were chosen! Cause your true. You are a good man so we gave you the impossble the spirt unleashed inside to do what no other has ever done beat one of us. ME! You happy now! Everybody knows, Is that what you wanted Well I hope so! Are we mad No Maybe thats why you won To be here today to send out this message. ya everybody Zorra said its 1999 and for the past 5000 years we walked this earth in secretcy. now its time For us to live again. All threw history David and golath ya ok. Goliath was not a man it was godeva she was the 9ft tall women who stomped armys with only her hands. and david no david at all it was Davina. names changed to protect manhood. They couldn't explain it so they made then men. It was like the garden of eden adam was not the inocent one he pulled the apple and when god spoke down to them eve took the wrap out of love couse adam was weak. It started way back then. Men were shoved into thinking they were the power and protecters meanwhile we sat back and watched. We knew. but didn't care. till now. The valkyrie's website is our bible. Its a record of us setting what right. evil men fall at our feet they get quashed. And how can we bring that to everyone with you. The one man we ever seen in history that showed true power from your pathedic group. power of the mind. You won couse they chose you to win. your no sacrifice your the power the voice. couse think about it. How could one of you males ever understand the power we have. unless you lived it. as you stand right now you realise you should of lost. and how is that. Your purpose to give yourself to us. as our slave. A slave who will be loved and taking care of. One who will be tortured but will ask for more couse he craves it. cause he wants it. You will be immortal you will be ours. Heaven is run by 2 gods a man and his wife. the man had the power of the lead for long long time and now wants his wife who knowone ever heard from or even knew exsisted to bring the truth to this world. TJ says ok then Tomorrow night. she brings her best as do i no tricks just human to human. if she wins I follow you. But if I do then I will tell you tommorrow after the match what I want. Zorra said Done then. FIGHT NIGHT TJ was Waiting in the ring while being very nervious, he thought if he should have even gone this far. should have he even said he knew. but some how in his head. He knew This story was playing out just the way they wanted it too. Xena got into the ring. and the bell sounded. she grabed him up quickly and powerbalmed him then kicked him send him chrashing into the corner upsidedown. he fell flat on his face wear she laid on his back and pushed his arms to the ground then smashing her wieght down on him by jumping up and landing flt on his back with all her wieght. knocking the wind out of him. she then scooped him up and back suplexed him. as if he were a toy. she then climbed to the top rope wear she came off and splashed down on him. she went for the pin and only got 2. Then with her great strenghth and his week body she climbed to the top with him in front of her as if to piledrive him his legs were over her shoulders and his head was between her legs she jumped off but instead of driving his head into the ground she landed on top of him full force knocking the wind out of him making him unable to kick out she got the 3. It was quick and brutal. he truly had no chance just as he thought. Then a light came down from the ceiling then a winged women appeared glowing from the light. she assended down to the ring. everyone just looked on in amazment. just then she landed at TJ's feet. The women spoke with her flowing golden blonde hair. and her muscular frame. saying now its time TJ for you to prove your worth. You survived the first of 7 trials. The Trail Of victory and defeat. You have 6 more so come with us. If you should pass all 7 you will be our treasure for no man has ever done so. Inface no has gotten past the first trial. Only the true of heart could servive. and what treasure awaits. The love of a true valkyrie in this case 3. maybe a 4th. depending on your next trail. Forth? Whats this? The trial of Past. Who What he blabed out not knowing what was going on. she waved her hand and he was no longer in the ring. He was in a white room with a brilient light it was so blinding all he could see was a huge figure comming at him. It kepted getting larger and larger till it was so big his neck hurt from looking up. he came up to the navel of this amazing creature. but as of yet couldn't see the face for it was lost in the great mist above. she lifted him up to her face to reveal who she was. He knew it had to be someone he knew considering It was called the trial of past. then as the mist grew clear and her face came to light OH My God is all he could say when it was revealed as his Wife Becky who too was on that plane. but she was huge now. She said if you survive this trial I will come back to you. and live again. Its you love for me that can make you survive this trail. then a huge bed as big as the room materialised from under thier feet. all exits to this room were now walls with no windows or ways out. In life she was a blonde hair blue eyed women with an hourglass shape 5-9 about 185 lbs. now imagine that same figure on her now 9-5 body. with her new height she was now at a mind blowing 650lbs Then the wall as well formed into matresses. I am the true size now of my ancesters. In the past we had a rule a man could only be deemed unkillable if he first was able to bed down with us. He thought for a moment. Ok that shouldn't be too bad he thought. Then she spoke again. We the valkyrie always are on top. and we love to show are men why we are in control and why they are our slaves. she picked him up and threw him into the wall he bounced off several feet thick of matress pading and then bounced of the ground. then of again till he reached the far wall not hurt do to the matress but very worried nontheless. He saw her massive fram strip down to nothing. and it was getting hotter in here by the second. must of climbed to 95 in that room sweat was pouring off both of them. she announced the heat always makes a valkyrie horney. The sweat being licked off by your love slave hhmmmmmmm god thier no other feeling. Her now sweat filled body was all heated up. and ready for her slave. this trial will last 72 hours. if you live by the end of this trial you will make it to your 3rd trail and i will go await the outcome of the rest of the trials in your world. You can't turn away from the trials now they started. all you can do is try to survive them. I am here to love honer and torture you. you will feel me on top of you you will taste all parts of me. and you will obey my every wish or be crushed. lets just say Its also the trial of true love. you giving your every ounce of yourself over to me. in hopes i will show you my passion. You will not even breathe unless I permit you. Now strip, and come over here to pleasure me. so reluctenly he did as it started to sink in he would have to play this thier way or he would die. so he striped down and came over to her as she requested. lay on your back and i will sit on your face from thier you will pleasure me. boy he'didn't like the sound of that giving the fact she was now 9-5. When he walked over to her he for the first time noticed that she was 3 ft 7inches taller then him. He looked eye to eye with her massive belly being eye level with her belly button. As a sign of his submission he kissed her stomach. witch in live had a bit of a poof sticking out now was like the great wall of chyna. she grabbed the back of his head and pointed it upwards to his head and she said. yes TJ I am still your wife and I love you but what i do to you now is not out of mercey and will crush every inch of you If you do not do everything I want. Her massive body started growing more. till he was face to face. with her pussy. Lick me she commanded. so he took one step forward and comenced to licking her. This did not last at all. She quickly ordered him to lay on his back. You didn't react when i first asked. Now you will pay for that mistake. 3 such will mean your life. he laid down. and becky started to think of a game they used to play. when she was alive. TJ was always kinda out thier and liked odd things. as he laid thier she decided to get on top of him leaning down and kissing him while she mounted him. she was careful not to put all her wieght on him couse she new it would kill him. but wanted to put enough to pay him back for his earlier disobedence. when she sat on him her massive body engulfed him from a sitting position. her belly was covering his face and her ass ended at his knee's. and her snatch was right on his cock she grinded hard and diliberate. her massive thrusts shook his body under an earthquake of skin. she rested some of her now over 700 lb body on him knowing what he could take before every bone in his body would crack. With every thrust sent a crushing wave of skin that avalanched his body under her soft exsterior. He grunted and growned and wanted to plead for his life but that would of been mistake 2 and he didn't wanna risk it with now 70 hrs to go. every once of hair left his body with every one of her titanic thrust. she started to come to orgasm unleashing a flow of cum that ran straight from her twot up his chest pouring on his face like syrup. forced mouthfuls of her juice filled his mouth. as his miniscul load went out hardy even wetting her twot. It was the most outragious feeling he ever felt. someone so huge just taking over on him. of mythical size. she sun around and decided that he was gonna eat her massive ass she so loved that in life. when he saw her huge ass cheaks open his eyes filled with fear. and her ass grew larger and larger before his eyes. Till her ass was the size of a bilboard on the highway. her ass hole itself was the size of his head. He went in and when he went to stick his toung up hit he had to shove his face up her sweaty fart smelling ass. he would feel his face getting soaked in ass juice and it acted like a suction cup sucking his face into it and she reached back with one finger and pushed his head completely up her ass. He heard her now echoing god like vioce saying lick me. and he did licking the inside of her ass while his head was now up her ass. she began cumming to a second orgazm. and a ruch of cum showered his body engulfing it in goo. from the neck down. totaly slimed by her twat. he found himself being relised. falling to a heap on the ground she said get rest i'll wake you in a bit. her fell right asleep out of exhuastian. she woke him up annoucing he survived the first 12 hours. and had 60 to go. he saw she returned to her orginal 9-5 size and wanted to wrestle with him. she grabbed him and put his head between her legs she was still naked as was he. she used his head like a hand to finger herself with his face. making him beg for air. and he had too couse for several min he was almost all the way up her snatch. then she strattled his face for more fun grinding his face as if it were a dildo. then inevedably she made him eat her ass while she sucked on him. she was very flexable and was able to bend in suck a way to read his cock that was not near her mouth level. He noticed her belly was crushing his chest and he couldn't breath but dared not complain and snuck breath whenever she moved right. she was far more aggressive then she ever was in life. and he figured it had to be them guiding her. he eat her pussy and ass for well over 4 hours. as he grew exhusted he dismounted off of his cum covered bady and smiled taking him into her arms sitting him on the coutch thier she made out with him like a teenager kissing and touching him for 4 more hours. after this she just held him in her massive arms almost like a child. he fell asleep after another exsusting 12 hours. he woke up after 12 of sleep and was relieved to learn it was half over now. She now grew playful. as somtimes she did in life tickling him couse he knew he was very ticklish he did resist but this was not held against him. cause she knew how ticklish he was. with her size she easyly trapped him and tickled him pinning him with one hand and tickeled with the other. he laughed insainly as she wouldn't stop. see in life he was big and after a few moment could get away but now in this possition she was helpless. He endured this tickleing for about 20 min be for she tired of it. But still pinning him down she played another game they often played. he saw her toung come out and she started panting like a dog lieing thier being held he knew what was comming as she put his rock hard cock inside her. she started licking his face but she didn't stop as she used to in life she took long strokes up his face. and soaked him he came to orgasm rather quickly as he always for some reason liked when she did this to him. They made love for about 4 more hours and for a long time afterwords cuddled and fell asleep together when he woke he only had a few hours left and with it she decided to let him explore her as he saw fit for listionging the rest of the time. He finally started realising the more he listion the funner all this was gonna be. she told him that he now had to go to trial # 3 the trial of present. but would be allowed to clean up and eat and relax a bit first for doing so well. when he got thier to trial 3 It was a huge version of Zorra's apartment and out they came all were 9-5 except Xena she was 10 ft tall. they told him he was in for hell and weren't gonna be as easy as his wife was. he knew they ment it. Now back in the real world The now 4 girls told Tom to get ready cause they wanted to leave for the publishers dinner. about a half hour they all left. Tom met this gentalmen Who was flabergasted by his story saying This what everyone asks for and no one has writtin yet. You wouldn't beieve the phenominon going around about women takeing control being dominate. I like what you have done in your later chapters.. The size fantasy. and your depth bringing the writers perspective to life as he lives the tale he writes. But we need somthing. we need more raw exp in the human world the story thier is good but you need to somehow make life imatate art more. How he said. You girls are gonna have to do things for him to write about in life we need drama. Here is the contract for a new york tale sign it. It will give you a 50,000 dollar advance on your book. just sign here. so he did with out a second thought. also This ICW is a great concepte see if you could talk to some people to make it happen for real. It would lock both stories together. I know you been writing your life aspects of it now its time to make life as good as art. Hell becky said he'll have plenty to put in chapter 7 when we are done with him tonight. they took his hands and dragged him out of the restarant he was wondering what the hell they were gonna do.. so he asked what are you gonna do to me tonight. Believe me Tom when I tell ya Zorra said. You never wrote about what we are gonna do to you tonight.