Donna vs Sue-Moo By Montrose Donna is put through hell and grows stronger So, last time I dictated a story, you heard about big Jenny and the poker night, which is also, like, the title Montrose gave the damn thing. Original, right? He's such a weird old deuce bag. Sometimes I'm tempted to slap him around, but I think he might enjoy it too much. Anyway, THIS story is a little harsher for yours truly, but I'll tell it anyway, cuz it's important. Okay? So listen up. Me and Jenny are, like, seniors in this really Podunk, crap-hole of a high school. Jenny hardly ever shows up for class. Me, I go cuz I totally wanna go to college and wrangle me a boy with high earning potential. Right? But that's got nothing to do with this story. Let me get back on track. I'm in the girl's room, avoiding clouds of smoke and touching up my lip liner. When Sue (a Korean girl everyone calls Sue-Moo - when she's not listening - cuz she's so big and fat), grabs my arm and spins me around. She's a senior who flunked a few times, so she's like, almost of legal drinking age (21) but still in High School. Dumb as a rock, but big and strong. Not as big as Jenny and not near as cute. "You're that Donna slut, right?" she barks at me, real loud. "Back off, Sue-Moo," I spit back. Most girls know I'm friends with Jenny and leave me alone. But Sue-Moo aint that bright. She back hands me in the mouth. "Don't call me that!" I taste blood and get mad. Now, I've been practicing my punching on that poker guy, so I know how to bring it up from the ground. I lean into one, right at the side of her big head. One just like it had landed poker guy at my feet only two days ago. Sue-Moo's head snaps to one side, then she snarls and looks down at me. "You got a lotta balls. Too bad I'm gonna knock 'em out of you." I punch her again, this time in her big belly. Nothing. Sue-Moo grabs my hair and starts throwing me all over the bathroom. Girls are running to get out of her way. I'm flying into walls, and over sinks. I'm holding her hands cuz she's pulling my hair out! Finally, I go flying into a stall. I feel my head and scream when I see tufts of my hair still in Sue-Moo's hands. She shakes it off onto the floor, then waves me on. I charge like a bull, dropping a shoulder into her fat gut. This backs her up two steps, then she bends over, grabs me around the waist with my arms pinned to my sides. She stands up and now she's holding me upside down, face out, in a bear hug. I CAN'T BREATH! Sue-Moo is laughing as she walks me back into the stall. "We're gonna have to call you Swirly Girl after this. Then she squats and dunks my head in the toilet. She sits on the back of me, keeping my head under as she flushes, over and over. Not my finest hour. When she gets up she asks, "Want some more, Swirly Girl?" "No," I sputter, spitting toilet water. I'm sopping wet and my hair is ruined. "Do I own you?" she asks. I don't answer. Sue stuffs my head into the toilet again and holds me under until I'm sure she's gonna drown me. She yanks me back up just in time. "Who owns you?" she asks patiently. I can tell she'll dunk me again if I don't speak up. "You do," I gasp quickly. "You." "That's better. Now, can we have a conversation now, or do you want more pain?" I nod. "We can talk." "For some reason, my baby brother thinks you're hot," she tells me. "So you're gonna be his new girlfriend." "What?" I'm getting to my feet. I knew who her brother was. A chubby slob no taller that me - 5'6". Heaverie than me - maybe 180 pounds to my 135. Greasy. And a freshman at that. "You're going to make him feel like a big man - hot stuff." "Are you nuts? No way am I letting him touch me." That's when she grabbed my tits and twisted. I fell to my knees, screaming. "Tonight, you're going to give him a ride home and suck his dick," Sue-Moo said calmly, over my screams. "And you're going to tell him he is the only man for you - and you're going to mean it." "Please!" I shouted. She twisted harder. "Okay!" "You will swallow? You will lick his asshole and say 'yummy'?" "Yes! YES!" She let go. "If he comes home and tells me otherwise, I will get rough with you. Now go fix yourself up and go find him. Remember - you are his girl as of now." Just then Jenny walked in. One of the other girls had gone to get her. Sue-Moo backed away. "This is between me and Donna," Sue-Moo yelled, backing away. Jenny towered over her and flexed her big arms. She looked down at me and back to Sue- Moo. "So it is," said Jenny. "WHAT?" I yelled. "Jenny! Kick her fat ass!" "Jenny smiled at me. "This is your fight, Donna. You've gotta live it." Sue-Moo laughed with relief. Jenny turned back to her and stepped closer. "If I ever have reason of my own to be mad at you, however, Sue-Moo, you had better leave town. Got it?" Sue-Moo nodded. "Understood." She was trembling. Then Jenny left. Just... left! Sue-Moo, flushed and trembling, turned to me. "Remember. You suck off my brother, Dan today." "Sure, Sue. I promise." What else could I do? I am a fan of big dick. HUGE, would be the word. Love it. I once dated a chess club geek just because he had a 14" bone. Now here I was reaching down the pants of a flabby freshman dork (older than his fellow freshman because of flunking, but still a frosh) - me, one of the most sought after hotties in the school - and convincing him that he was man enough to step into my car for some fun. The poor kid was scared. I promised him I wouldn't bite unless he liked it that way. The dork actually came on my fingers right there in the hall while I was whispering in his ear. I pulled my hand up from his pants and licked his goo off my digits right before his startled eyes. "Yummy!" I purred. "I can't wait to get some more right from your snake this afternoon. See you then." I cleaned off the rest of his goo on his shirt and jiggled my way down the hall so he could watch me walk. He didn't answer. He couldn't. Whatever. So I get Dorky Dan in my car - an aging Cadillac that Jenny made my Daddy buy me. We drive out to the woods and I park. From there I get him in the back seat and give him the best blowjob he will EVER have. I mean, he will be telling his grandkids about that blowjob. After I sit up and swallow the last of his load, I start telling bullshit like, "My god, Dan! You are so incredible! You make six inches feel like twenty! My jaw is so ripped from your meat. Can we do it again? Please?" I thought he would be spent, but the little fucker, in extreme excitement, grabs my ears and pulls my face back to his sticky groin. He's giving me a face full of sweaty scrotum. So we do it again. This time, I end him with a tit-fuck. "You're an animal, Dan! A real animal!" I lie as I wipe his load off my face and into my mouth. There was barely any cum to swallow that time, but I act like it was gallons. "My god! What a man!" Whatever. I just don't want any trouble from Sue-Moo. But, how humiliating! "You like it?" Dan finally has the confidence to speak. "Oh god yes! But now, I guess I should get you home..." "You like it up the ass?" "What?" He blushes. "It's just that... I had this dream... with you and me... and we..." He's trembling so bad I almost feel sorry for him. Plus, I need him to give a good report to Sue-Moo. I look down. Damned if he aint stiff again. But, like I say, he aint the biggest log in the wood pile. So, what the hell - how much could it hurt? "Would you, please?" I turn around and offer my ass to him, sliding my panties to my knees. In for a penny, in for an ass pounding, you know? The chubby dork jumps up and crams it up my rump, slapping my cheeks and humping happily away. His drool forms a pool in the small of my back. I moan and yell like he's busting me apart. I shudder from the disgustingness factor. Eventually, he's too winded to continue. Whatever. "Wow. Dan," I monotone as he slumps over onto my back. "That was... great... really. Can we go now?" He nods yes and pants and sweats. I shove him off and yank up my panties. I park in front of his home. "Feel free to tell your sister how much fun you had." He gives me a funny look and shugs. "Sure. Bye, hot cakes." He reaches over and gives me a big, wet kiss. His tongue is way bigger than his dick, and he crams the entire thing down my throat, choking me! We both pull away. "Your mouth taste like ass," he tells me. "Bring gum tomorrow." "Great idea, Dan," I growl. "Thanks for everything." I wipe his spit off my face and speed away. * * * Who meets me at my locker the next morning, but Sue-Moo. "Nice job on Dan!" She pinches my ass so hard I cry out. She laughed. "He couldn't stop talking about it. To hear him talk, he gave you the ride of your life." Then she leaned into me, cramming me into my locker. "And that's exactly the rumor you're going to spread around school. Got it?" "Sure, Sue. Anything you say." "Good answer." She slams my locker door, locking me in. I spend first period in that locker. Someone finally hears me knocking and lets me out between first and second period. I totally know how to spread a rumor. I stuck my nose into a gaggle of pom-pom girls and told them I could hardly walk for the pounding I got from "Big Man Dan." They were all, like, Dan who? "Sue's brother." They are all, like, not believing it. I remind them of my chess geek, who they all took turns on after I was done with him. I say, "Dan is twice the man, and way better." Now they're hooked. Am I willing to share, they wonder. I'm all, like, there's no way I can satisfy him all by myself. He needs more! By third period, I see him strutting down the hall with the entire pom-pom squad in his wake, pawing at him. He stops when he sees me. "Donna, baby. You and me. After school. Don't be late." I'm all, "You got it, Dan-Man." Pom-pom girls gave me evil looks. As I'm about to leave to meet Dan by my car - queue heavy sigh - I'm faced with this mousey chick I never saw before - the kind that blend in everywhere. "You stole him!" she rants at me. "Who?" "Dan! I've been... lusting after him for years!" "You want him? Take him," I tell her. "Right," she smirks. "With you and every other hot girl in school all over him? I can't even get near him!" "You're not so bad," I tell her. "If you fix your hair... and stop dressing like a boy orphan... and maybe stuff your bra..." "He told me you made him dizzy, you were so good." She was crying, for gawd's sake! I sigh, again. Did I ask for this? Then I get an idea. "Why don't you come along? I'm about to give Dan another go." "WHAT?" She gasps. "You wanna learn how to do what I do? Come and watch." I can see she's horrified, but intrigued. "You know you wanna. I'll teach you everything I know." "Really? Well..." Before she can refuse, I grab her little hand and march to my car. Dan looks confused to see her, but it's obvious they know each other. I tell him she wants to watch. He seems to like that idea - a lot. Mousey Girl blushes and gets real quiet. So we start off with Dan and me in the back seat and Mousey Girl watching from the front. (Taking NOTES!) I let Dan snuggle my hooters and signal Mousey to watch my left hand, which I'm using on Dan's nutsack. I drive him to brain-dead erection in no time. Mousey nods and writes it all down. She even illustrated her notes, like a field guide. Geeks in the mist. Dan's pants are off now and I'm licking his average pole, making sure that Mousey can see everything I do - keeping my hair out of her way. I'm starting to feel like cross between a porn star and a lab rat. Mousey keeps writing, but now she's sneaking a hand down to her own groin. Masturbating on the sly, the little minx. I show her I can make him cum on command by counting down "3... 2... 1..." Blam! He blasts his first load in my mouth. "How does that taste?" Mousey asks. I sit up and grab the back of her head. I lean in and give her a kiss, transferring most of Dan's load into her mouth. "Jesus!" gasps Dan as he watches this. I pull back and look at him. His eyes are wide and he's looking at... Mousey Girl! He has total lust dog written all over him! I look at her. She's got some of his cum dripping down her chin and her cheeks are burning red. "You look so HOT!" he says. And he's looking at Mousey! "Why don't you join us," I ask her. "Oh... no... I couldn't." Please?" says Dan. Mousey's eyes grow wide with hope. "Come on," I say. "I'll walk you through sucking off this big boy." "Would you?" she asks. "I mean, I wrote it down, but a little hands on might..." "Climb on over." So now Dan has my tongue on one side of his bone and Mousey's on the other. She's a real good study. Damned if after 10 minutes she's doing advanced stuff I aint even showed her yet! Dan is going ape-shit, of course. After he cums all over Mousey's face, he wants to fuck her. I offer to stand in for the rough stuff, but he wants Mousey - and Mousey is already rolled over on her back and saying, "Yes! Please!" I shrug and fit a glove over Dan's crank. He slides it home and Mousey acts like she just got a freight train rammed up her hole. She clawing at his back and screaming so loud I muffle her with her own panties. She's either a better actress than me, or too fucking tight to be believed. Tight little Mousey Girl! Dan humps away just like he did on my ass - without a clue. I get an idea and slide in behind him. I grab his hips and whisper, "Like this." Now I'm controlling his strokes. Mousey's eyes roll back in her head and I can see she's already topped off one orgasm and is reaching for a second. I work her, using Dan's cock for almost an hour - moving his hips in ways he never had. "Oh my GOD!" shouts Mousey, banging the seat and the door. "That's right, baby," purrs Dan. He's actually starting to pick up on how to fuck a girl crazy. I can see Mousey motivates him. He's not just in it for his own pleasure. By the time I give Dan a reach under and make him cum, they're both covered in sweat and red faced. Dan falls forward onto Mousey, still inserted. I look her over. With her heels up by her ears, cum all over her face and her hair a wreck, she actually looks hot. I mean, world class babe-age - superstar sex goddess hot. Who knew! I slide into the front seat and start driving. The kids in back start going at it again - Mousey on top this time. Mousey gives Dan some pointers, and he takes them - they both have a great time. I drive around town until they scream like loons through another mutual-O. "Donna?" Dan pants. "Yeah?" I ask over my shoulder. "I hope we can still be friends." I smile. "Big Dan, you are more of a friend to me now than ever before," I tell him. He's all right. Too bad his big sister is such a twat. "Thanks Donna," says Mousey. "You're a good sport." "I'll get over it, eventually," I promise them. "Should I drive you guys home now?" "Just keep circling the woods," says Mousey. "Dan, can we try it where you eat me this time?" She's already sliding up to sit on his face. "Love to," says Dan. Good boy, I think, as I turn onto a secluded road. I drive for hours. * * * The next day, Jenny sits with me at lunch. "I see you got Dan off your ass already, literally." She smiles at Dan and Mousey sucking face a few tables over. "No thanks to you," I snap back. "You still want revenge on Sue-Moo?" she asks. I grunt but don't answer. "Then do something about it." "Like what? She's got over a hundred pounds on me!" "Work out. Learn some moves. I could have you ready to take her down in a couple weeks." She looked me over. "Maybe a month. Depends on how hard you work." I eye her. "You think I could take Sue?" "Not like you are, but sure." "If I can take down Sue-Moo," I tell her. "I'll be your sex slave." Jenny smiled. "You already are." "Please," I beg. "I'll work hard!" Jenny pulled out a three page set of directions. One sheet for workouts. One for diet. One for wrestling moves. "Start tonight." * * * To speed things up, let's just say that in two weeks I got real sick of protein drinks and bench presses. But I did like some stuff, like getting to be able to do a ton of perfect one handed push ups. And how rippled and buff my arms and back got. Jenny and I sparred every night. I never beat her, but after a week I could actually make her work to beat me. After two weeks, I actually had her in a head scissors for a few seconds! She may be big, but she's not anywhere near as fast as me. Then she had me go downstairs and pick a fight with my Daddy, who's about the same size as Sue-Moo. He doesn't beat me up anymore (ever since Jenny kicked his ass), but he never is nice. Picking a fight was easy. He didn't know Jenny was upstairs. I walked into the living room where he sat watching football. "Hello, Ugly Fuck," I told him. Without looking up he growled, "Get the hell out of my face." I smacked him in the mouth. "That's for being so damn stupid." I told him. "You don't talk back to me. Got it?" He sat stunned - staring at me slack mouthed. I snatched the remote out of his hand and changed the channel to a romance movie. "Go get me some popcorn and a soda, Ugly Fuck," I told him, as I hauled his lard ass out of his chair by his shirt front. "Why you!" He grab for me, but I wasn't where he grabbed anymore. I tripped him up with my legs and spun around until I had him in a quick figure four. I held that while he cried out in pain. "Submit and I'll let go so we can fight some more." He snarled. I increased the pressure. "I submit!" he howled. I let go and jumped up. He staggered unsteadily to his feet. "You bitch!" He tried to slap me, but I ducked. I ran behind him and kicked him in the ass, laughing all the way. "This is fun!" He swung around. I ducked again, slid in and grabbed a leg. I tipped the big, stupid old man over on his head and stood back. "Get up and fight!" I yelled down at him. This time he charged. I hopped up and clamped my legs around his neck. He fell with a crash. One arm flailed to get at me. I took it in mine and bent it around until tendons popped. He cried for mercy. Instead of letting up, I tightened my scissors. He bucked and choked until he passed out. "Nighty-night, Daddy." It was crazy-easy! I emptied his wallet and kicked him in the face, just for old times. Give him a missing tooth and fat lips to remind him it hadn't been a dream when he wakes up. Jenny came downstairs. "I guess you're ready for Sue-Moo." * * * I found her in the girl's room talking things over with her girls - a bunch of big fat jerks who hang out with her like she's a queen bee. "Hey, Sue-Moo," I yelled. "Front and center with your big butt!" She stood up straight - she was a few inches taller than my old man, and a bit thicker in the shoulders. "Swirly Girl? Are you asking for trouble?" she snarled. I gulped, but kept going. "No, I'm here to dish it out. And don't call me Swirly Girl..." Sue laughed. "Sue-Moo." When I called her that, she stopped laughing. "That's it, bitch. I'm done taking it easy on you!" She charged. I hopped up and clamped my legs on her neck just like I had on my Daddy. Only, Sue didn't fall down. As I choked her, she ran around bashing me into walls. After about 40 seconds I had to let go. I fell into a corner, dizzy. Sue fell to her knees, gasping for air. We both got to our feet at the same time and circled each other. One of her girls suddenly jumped me from behind and got me in a full nelson. I broke it easy, turned and smashed her nose flat. She fell backwards, out cold. The other followers of Sue came at me. "This is between Sue-Moo and Donna," said Jenny, just coming into the can. "Anyone else wants a fight, can take it up with me." Now they all backed far away, into a corner. "Ladies..." Jenny indicated us and waved us back into the center of the room. Sue faked a grab at me. I dodged - she was real slow. She tried a real grab for me and I landed a punch to the side of her fat head. It was cool how little it hurt my hand, on account of all that fat on her face. She staggered back. I followed it up quick with three more, snapping her head left and right and left. Sue-Moo fell to one knee, but bounced back up. She had her fists up, but looked like she was out on her feet. I rained as few more thundering blows to her big fat head, but she wouldn't fall down! Too bottom-heavy, I guess. I slid around behind her and jumped, planting my feet in her back, driving her face first into a wall. I hit the floor and watched as she bounced off of it and fell backwards. If I hadn't rolled out, she would have flattened me. As it was, I jumped up into the air and landed on her boobs with my ass - all 140 pounds of me. I jumped up and did it again. It was fun and bouncy, you know? When she started coming to, I slid forward and clamped her face to my groin with my legs. One of her arms tried pulling my leg free, so I bent that arm until her shoulder popped. She was bright red and begging for mercy when I asked. "Do I own you, bee-atch?" "YES!" she yelled into my vagina, which made sweet vibrations. ;-) "What is my name?" I demanded of her. "Donna!" "Right, but not to you, Bee-atch. To you, I am Mistress Squisito." I tightened my hold on her face. "Say it." "Mistress Squisito!" Her reply was muffled by my muffin. "Well done, you big fat pig slut," I told her, as I patted her head. Patting her head reminded me of something. I took two hands full of hair and yanked. Sue-Moo yelped and I came up with two fists full of straight black hair. I went back for more until the sides of her head were snatched bald. I stuck the hair into my skirt like a scalp. She was almost out cold, so I let up enough for her to get one gulp of air, then I tightened back down. I reached behind me and twisted her tits. Hard. Tears ran from her eyes as she screamed into my groin. "I want you to do something for me, Sue-Moo." I said sweetly. "Anything," she cried. "Moo like the stupid cow that you are." "Moo." "Louder." "Moo!" "LOUDER!" "MOO!" MORE! KEEP IT UP!" I stood up. "MOOOOO! MOOOOOOOOOOO!" wailed Sue on the floor between my feet. It echoed all the way down the hall and into various classrooms. "MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" I looked at her gaggle of followers. "You spazoids catch that?" "Yes, Mistress Squisito!" they intoned. "MOOOOOOOOOOO! MOOOOOOOOOOO!" "Any of you want some?" I raised my fists. "No, Mistress Squisito!" they intoned, backing away. "MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" I put a heel on Sue-Moo's face to shut her the fuck up. "Now go give yourself a swirly until I tell you to stop. You got that, Swirly Sue-Moo?" "Yes, Mistress Squisito," she mumbled around my heel. I took a moment to click a picture of her with my foot on her face for my cell phone wallpaper before letting her up. She crawled to the stall, dunked her head, reached up and flushed. Over and over. I took another snap of that and sent it to everyone I knew. "Keep it up. I got shit to do." I left her to it and went to steal a boyfriend from one of the pom-pom girls. Not that I wanted him. I just wanted to show her I could have him cuz she's an uppity cunt, you know? I mean - I caught her trying to steal Dan from Mousey Girl! Anyway, once the pom-pom cunt saw her boyfriend with his face in my crotch under the bleachers, I dumped him. Even Dan was better at eating hole than that guy! So what if he's cute! And no, it wasn't a fluke that she caught us. How could it be after I texted half the school about it? And sent her a snap of it for her cell phone wallpaper. When I came back, two hours later, I pulled Swirly Sue-Moo's head up out of the toilet bowl. "You can stop now, Swirly Sue-Moo." "Bless... you... Mistress Squisito," she spluttered. I let her kiss my butt-hole with her cold, wet lips, and that was the end of the humiliation of Swirly Sue-Moo. * * * That's the story of how I got strong and learned to really fight. Cool, right? I mean, at 140 pounds and 5'6", I can kick ass on any guy within 100 pounds of my weight! That includes you! Poor poker night boy never knew what hit him after that. OH! And Mousey Girl has totally done some sort of Egyptian thing with her mascara that is driving boys nuts. And now that she's wearing skirts, the world has noticed that she has killer stems, so Dan is running to keep up with her, now. Cool, right? Later! LOL! ;-P Donna Squisito