Be Nice To Your Sister
by Madison Marbury
A Comic Script 



madisonmarbury@hotmail.com


Panel 1

Parents are leaving the house, talking to their kids, 15 year old Billy, 13
year old Spike, and six year old Kit.

Dad: OK, Billy, you're in charge 'til we get back.

Kit: Moooom!

Mom: Do what your brother says, Kit.  And boys, be nice to your sister!

Billy and Spike: [looking at Kit evilly] 'Kay.


Panel 2

As soon as the door closes, Spike slugs Kit.  She cries.

Spike: Baby!

Billy: Stop crying, baby!


Panel 3

Billy has Kit over his knee, flips her skirt over to reveal her butt, and
spanks her.  SLAP!  SLAP!  Kit bawls in pain and humiliation.  Spike twists
her nose for good measure.

Billy: What a bad baby!

Spike: Whatcha gonna do, baby?!


Panel 4

Billy puts his bawling sister in a high chair.  She's much too big for it.
Her arms are pinned to her side,  helpless.

Billy: Let's put baby in her high chair!


Panel 5

Spike slaps a bonnet on her.

Spike: Let's dress baby in her bonnet!


Panel 6

Billy holds Kit's mouth open while Spike scrapes the contents of a plate
into it.

Billy: Let's make baby eat her spinach!


Panel 7 - Two parts

7a) Bill forces her mouth closed.  Kit swallows.  GULP!

7b) Kit grits her teeth and raises her arms to her sides, exploding the
high chair apart and knocking her brothers to the side.  Her forearms are
huge.


Panel 8

Kit flexes.  Her bulging bicep's head is bigger than her head's head.  It
has the tattoo of a spanking paddle on it and a label reading, "The
Punisher!"  The bonnet is still on her.  Her shoulders have grown broad and
her back wide.

Kit: Now we see who's the baby!

Billy and Spike: Ulp!


Panel 9

Kit delivers a stunning uppercut to Spike.  It launches the bully like a
rocket.  "WHAM!" Billy looks on, petrified.

Kit: Upsy daisy!


Panel 10

Close on Spike's wincing head, as it CRACKS the ceiling.


Panel 11

Kit uppercuts the falling Spike to his stomach with enough force to double
him over.  "THWOOP!" Spike limply hangs over her fist, vomits in agony.
"BLLLAAAAUUGH."

Kit: Oo, baby all urpy!  Better put baby down!


Panel 12

Close on Spike's head as his eyes roll back in his head and he drops into
his own muck with a splash.


Panel 13

Kit is slowly advancing on Billy, scowling, rolling back her sleeves from
her bulging frame.  Bill backpedals, terrified.

Billy: You-you-you keep away from me!

Billy: [second balloon] You have to do what I say!  Mom said!


Panel 14

Kit jumps onto Billy's head.  Her right fist pounds his face like a piston.
 SMACK!  SMACK!  SMACK!  SMACK!  Teeth are flying everywhere.  Billy flails
but he's helpless.

Kit: Oh yeah?!

Billy:  Aaugh!  Stop! Get off!  MOMMYYY!!



Panel 15  - Two parts

Panel 15a

Legend: "Later."

Kit and Billy's parents come in the front door.

Dad: Hi, kids!  Hope you had a good-


Panel 15b

The parents flip out, shocked at what they see.

Dad and Mom: HUH?!


Panel 16

Billy is bawling, jammed into the high chair, naked except for a baby
bonnet and diaper.  His mouth is wide open so we see all his teeth are
broken off except one.  He has black eyes.  Kit is spoonfeeding him from a
big bowl labeled "Creamed Liver".  She's still buff.

Kit: [winking] Sorry mom.  The BABY needed CHANGING!


END