Closing the Deal
By Crossman 
An estate agent thinks that he's onto a good sale, but when it come to closing the deal he realises things aren't all they seam


By Crossman at - crossmanx@hotmail.co.uk - comments welcome

Closing the Deal

For the past six years James Allen had been an estate agent; he had started
at the Valedale Estates Company aged 18 after leaving college with a
business qualification under his belt. Now he was the senior member of the
sales staff, well that was after Patrick, the owners nephew, get rid of him
and he would be No 1, all the prime sales would come his way and so would
all that commission.

Tuesday morning and the door went, James was at the far end of the office
and couldn't quite see who came in, but he noticed Patrick almost jump out
of his desk, he may be a prat but he had an almost 6th sense about people
with money. James had to get this sale, fate must have been on his side as
Patrick in his hurry hadn't noticed the box of promotional flyer on the
floor and ...  CRASH! OUCH! That probably hurt! But what the hell, James sized
the chance to jumped in and grabbed the sale.

The woman who had walked in was oblivious to the goings on behind her; she
had gone to a display of new properties on the market "Good morning can I
be of assistance to you today?" The woman turned around removed her
sunglass and looked at James, tallish, early 20's, some would say handsome,
not her, by looks of it a fit body under that suit and a salesman! "Yes I'm
looking for ...   ... "

James looked into the eyes of a mature, petite and very attractive woman
with short fair hair. She wore a long leopard skin pattern coat with fur
trim. But there was something about this woman, something that made his
cock twinge straight away. He had never really been into older women, but
his woman was different, 40 something? And yet so ...   ...  desirable! There where
faint lines around her eyes, not the unattractive type but they made her
eyes stand out more, very sexy eyes, a subtle shade of pink lipstick on a
pair of thin, but not too thin lips, the age showed in her face but in a
way that ...  in a way that made her look so attractive and very sexy!

"Yes I'm looking for ...   ... " the woman carried on and James listen with his
'how much commission can I make on this sale' ear, but also he was
captivated by this mature sexy woman. They sat down at his desk "what price
range was you thinking of Mrs? Miss?" "Price isn't that much of an issue,
my late husband's life insurance takes care of that and it's Miss
Heartless". His was obvious taken aback by such a name for an attractive
lady "I'm sure your not" how corny was that? She held out a gloved hand as
it was now a formal introduction, he took her hand, her eyes where so
intense that he couldn't break away from them, there was something about
this woman. "James ...  James Allen I sure that I can find the right property
for you Miss Heartless, it will be my pleasure to help you" she smiled "I
know it will be!"

She gave James her details and requirement, a large property on the
outskirts of the city or secluded area, four bedrooms and with a large
basement. James had brought together three possible properties to be
viewed, the first two where doubtful but number three was going to be the
killer. It had been on the firms books for ages and no one had been able to
sell it, not even Patrick!

Next day James had meet Miss Heartless at the first property and as
expected she had not gone for it, too small and other properties too close.
The second property was well outside the city but with only a very small
cellar rather than a full basement. At the third property James hopes grew
he was sure she would go for this one, on the outskirts down a private road
with only three other properties all set back from the road and each a good
distance from the other, large walls and high tree lines also gave good
seclusion to the property. But at a price!

As they arrived at the property James pulled up first in his mini, he
thought he looked 'cool' in it! Then Miss Heartless in her Jaguar JK
convertible, now that is cool. She got out, James admired her again, as he
had done all day, even after a number of hours driving and looking around
houses she looked good. Dressed in her long leopard skin patterned coat,
which was  undone to reveal black boots that stopped just under the knee,
blue jeans, and another leopard skin patterned top. Some may have thought
it tacky but on her it wasn't, she looked sexy a real woman. She must have
been a good 4" - 5" shorter than him, a small framed body, but a good body,
from what he could see, her breasts seam to be large and full for her small
frame.

They did the tour of the house, James was getting the feeling that
everything was heading towards a sale here. "Yes I like this place so far ... 
Now show me the basement" "Yes the basement it's a large one. Please this
way". There was a spring in his step 'the basement would be the thing that
closes the deal!' In the kitchen James opens a door flicked the light
switch and descended, it was a large open area with three equally sized
rooms at the far end, the main areas empty apart from a couple of old
fashion tea chests. "Yes I hope this will meet your needs. It's a rather
large basement runs the length of the house" he laughed "someone could live
down here and you wouldn't know about it upstairs". Miss Heartless smiled
"yes that exactly what's going to happen". "Oh ...   ...  you're going to convert
this to an apartment area for a  ...  a relative or som ... " "Just the odd slave
or two". He was a bit taken a back "er ...  sorry I thought you said ...  slave?"

She turned to him and looked in a way he hadn't seen before "yes slave!"
"Why Mr Allen would you like to become one of my slaves?" I ...  er ...  I ...  I'm not
too sure what you mean" "slave Mr Allen I am in charge and you are my
slave!" she started to walk towards him, he stepped backwards. "er  ...  Miss
Heartless ...  I ...  I'm ...  OOWW!" James had been 'pushed' back against the wall, he
could retreat no more. She stood hands on hips smiling in a very seductive
way "Come on 'James' I've seen you look at me, you want me don't you? You
want to serve me don't you?" "I ...  I ... " he felt his cock reacting to her yet
he felt intimidated by her, she excited him!

"The only thing is James is that my slaves are not only my entertainment
but also my sparring partners!" "What ...  what do you mean?" His cock grew
even harder "we fight my slaves and I, I win they serve me, if they win
they get an even greater prize than being able to serve me ...  they win me!"
He was shocked "I ... I don't understand you're the prize Miss Heartless!" She
placed a hand on his cheek "yes James me. Anyone who can fight me and
defeat me wins me! I'm theirs to do with as they like!" He felt her breath
on his face and she could see the excitement in his eyes "would you like me
James? To do with as you like" he couldn't believe his luck, or so he
thought "y ... yes I do want you" she laughed "good then all you have to do is
fight me. You look the fit type James you can fight can't you" "I ... I ...  have
boxed and I play rugby ...  but ...  I can't fight a woman ...  it would ...  SMACK! Miss
Heartless slapped the younger man.

"YO ... YOU ... " SMACK!" She hit him again "oh I'm sure you can fight you just
need some encouragement, her coat fell off her shoulders and landed on the
floor, he watch it as it fell. "James" he looked up at her he looked at her
body, swallowed hard CRACK! THUD! Two more strikes by the older woman
connected, he staggered and fell to the floor. She grabbed his tie, dragged
him up SMACK! SMACK! "Stop ...  stop.." no good SMASH! Her fist hit the side of
his face; he was shocked by her hitting him, she pulled his tie and him
downwards CRACK! Her knee came up and connected with his chin, his head
bounced back. She released her grip,  he fell to the floor, he tried to
take make scene and take in some air AAARRRHHH! She grabbed a handful of
hair and dragged him onto his knees he lashed out widely OOOFFF! He caught
her in the stomach, he tried to stand but CRACK! The older woman used her
foot and took this legs away THUD! He landed back on the floor.

She pulled him back onto his knees CRACK! Her knee found its mark in the
side of his head, THUD! THUD! A couple of kicks to his abs AARRHH! He
rolled over in pain, but she didn't care "come on boy up you get" AARRHH!
She dragged him up by the hair again hard and quick onto his knees and all
the way back onto his feet, he was shock up and disorientated THUD! THUD!
THUD! As she brought her knee up into his gut in quick succession.
AAARRRHHH! Bent double he raised a hand to try and stop her "p ... p ...  ... ple ... 
PLEASE" a powerful uppercut CRACK! He dropped to his knees "up you get boy"
she pulled him up he tried to focus, could just see her outline, but she
moved to quickly. Grabbing his arm, turned and WWOOSSHH! THUD!
AAAARRRRHHHH! She throws him over her the shoulder; he lands on the hard
concrete floor.

Pulling him up again; she could see the fear in his eyes, which was always
good "CRACK! CRACK! A couple of good punches to the ribs, he was bent
doubled she grabbed his head and SMASH! She throw is head onto her up
coming knee, his head bounced off he was sent flying backwards. The wall
stopped him "st ...  stop ... PLEASE STOP" as if she was going to listen to his
pleas SMASH! THUD! CRACK! SMACK! She let loose with her fists he tried to
protect himself but with no affect, THUD! THUD! THUD! She drove her knee
hard into his stomach, he was going to fall to the floor she grabbed him by
his collar and tie and BANG! Slamming him hard, back against the wall.

SMASH! SMACK! TWACK! She slapped him hard and harder still across the face,
she released her grip on him and he slid down the wall, still conscious but
beaten.  Miss Heartless walked away produced her mobile and dialled out
"yes I'm here the place is exactly what I want ...   ...  you know the address  ...   ... 
see you then". Arrrhhh James moaned as he looked up to this woman that had
just beat the crap out of him, 'how could a woman beat him? A woman! She
could have been twice his age how could she beat him?' "P ...  ple ... please ... " she
walked over WWOOSSHH! CRACK! She kicked out, her boot connected with the
side of his head, he never felt or saw it, just a bright light and then
darkness.

"Yes a really good size" "here would be the cells" "how long before we can
fill them" laughed followed. James was coming round he could hear two
voices and see the out line of two blurred figures. He mustered some
strength and crawled to the new figure, perhaps they could help him! "Oh
look he's awake" he got to the figure the haziness was clearing yes it was
another woman; he remembered Miss Heartless on the phone was this who she
spoke to?

He was on his hands and knees in front of this knew woman, he looked up at
her "p ... ple ...  please" he garbed onto her legs to steady himself and climbed
up her to bring himself to his knees. "P ... please ... " he held onto her hip, he
could smell the leather of her trousers, he looked up, she wore a dark crop
top, he could see a large pair of breast and make out dark long hair but no
clear features of her face. Which was mostly obscured by her ample chest.
His face was close to her bear midriff his nostrils filled will her smell,
her body, her perfume. "Aarrhhh isn't that cute he wants me to help him"
she ran her figures through his hair "he looks a bit like Mr Fay from
school, now he is cute but not as strong as this one from what you've said ... 
can I play with him?" James could tell from her voice that she was a lot
younger than Miss Heartless! Miss Heartless he had almost forgotten about
her "maybe sometime later but for now CRACK! AARRRHHH!

A sharp pain ripped through his back, Miss Heartless had kicked him, he
fell against the other woman, who stepped back letting him fall to the
floor. A hand grabbed him by the hair and dragged him up to his knees.
SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! She slapped him hard "on your feet boy" Miss Heartless
pulled the younger man up THUD! A hard punch to his gut OOOOHHHHFFFF! He
doubled over; she grabbed his head pulled him up THUD! Another punch
OOOOHHHHFFFF! He gasped for breath. A phone went off.

Miss Heartless let go of him, he dropped to his knees she turned to the
other woman who was talking "yes that's the address ...  you will the first  ...   ... 
be here quickly you don't think that she will wait around for you do you?  ... 
 ...  Yes like I told you get here quickly". "He'll be here soon" Miss
Heartless smiled just enough time to put this one to sleep "James" he
automatically looked up, only to see Miss Heartless knee crash into his
chin, darkness engulfed him as he crashed back down to the floor
unconscious.

James came round OOHHHHH! His body hurt, god did it hurt! "Oh good your
awake" the young girls voice filled his head AARRHH! She dragged him
upwards from the floor, she was sitting on one of the tea chests, she
pulled him back against it. She rapped her legs around his neck, he
instinctively held onto her legs to try and protect himself TWACK! TWACK!
She hit his hands with a piece of wood or something AARRHHH! "Don't touch
boy" sternness in her voice he wasn't going to argue with, he could smell
her distinctive perfume again and her leather trousers, followed by a
twinge in his cock. "You're just in time to watch your Madam in action".
"My Madam?" the girl leaned forward, he still couldn't see her face "yes
boy we have had a chat I'm going to be your Mistress from now on and that
gorgeous creature out there will be your Madam ...  what do you say slave?"
"Tha ...  Thank you Mistress" "good boy" she ruffled his hair, like the pet he
now was "now kneel there, shut up and watch your Madam"

The haziness had almost cleared and James could see two people in the
middle of the room, his Madam and a man. Miss Heartless had changed her
cloths she was wearing a tight pair of white trousers, almost like riding
joppers! On top she was only wearing some kind of sports top! It had a
zebra stripped pattern; she must like animals he thought, leopard and
zebra! He vision was now fully back, she looked even more gorgeous than he
had thought, he could see her toned body, the muscles in her arms and abs,
this mature woman was beautiful, strong and deadly. The man was black, tall
maybe 6ft, stripped to the waits, in what looked like a pair of white
martial arts trousers, bald but with a muscular body. The pair faced each
other each with fists up like a pair of boxers, but without the gloves.

The black guy punched out first a left followed quickly by a right Miss
Heartless easily dogged both and dogged a couple of more from her opponent.
She hit out connecting with his chin CRACK! James saw his head bounced back
CRACK! Again as she connects with her other fist he staggered back a few
steps his Madam dropped her shoulder got low and THUD! THUD! Two hard
punches to the stomach OOOOHHH!  OOOHHHH! Staggering back some more "BITCH"
James knew the black man he had made even a bigger mistake saying that
TWACK!  A well delivered kick by Miss Heartless to the area of his knee cap
sent her opponent down. He was on his knee, she seized the moment CRACK!
SMASH! CRACK! SMASH! She rained in a volley of punches that all connected
with his head, blood tricked out the side of his mouth.

Miss Heartless' opponent was dazed and didn't see the knee that came in and
CRACK! Right into the side of his head, a tooth flew out, James' cock was
reacting to the sight of his madam beating her opponent with ease, she
gabbed his hand, put him in a 'gooseneck' applied pressure AAARRRHHH! His
head natural came up WWOOSSHH! CRACK! A perfect kick to the head, wasting
no time she pulled him up onto his feet TWACK! A hard punch to his gut,
then grabbing him by the arm she easily throws him over her shoulder THUD!
James felt his Mistress thighs tighten around his neck as she got excited
watching the fight.

Miss Heartless pulled him up again, THUD! She throws him once more. Once
more she dragged him up SMACK! SMCK! A couple of slaps across the face to
try and get a reaction from him, this time THUD! She throws him a lot
harder CRACK! AAARRRHHH! Something broke probably a rib or two! James
watched as his Madam dragged the man up again and THUD! CRACK! AAARRRHHH!
The house echoed with his cry, more ribs broken, He lay there in agony Miss
Heartless stood over him; she lifted her leg and THUD! AAARRRRHHHH! With
great force she drove her foot into his crouch! James winced at this sight,
how much pain was she going to put him through THUD! THUD! A few kicks to
his chest, to help with his cracked ribs.

"Time to finish you off" Miss Heartless got her victim up onto his knees
SMACK! SMACK! CRACK! A few more fists to his head, blood ran from his nose
and mouth his eyes where puffed up and closing. She managed to get him up
onto his feet, not that he knew where he was or what was happening at this
stage. The madam took couple of steps backwards then WWWOOOSSSHHHH! CRACK!
She delivered a roundhouse kick that sent the man off his feet, he flew and
CRASH! Straight into the wall, like a bug hitting a windscreen at force he
was splattered! His body slid down the wall into a motionless heap on the
floor.

His Mistress clapped and cheered "well done 3 minutes and 23 seconds" "not
much of an opponent didn't even last 5 minutes" she stood there and looked
at James "come to Madam Heartless boy". His Mistress released her legs from
around his neck, James crawled over to her "you lasted a lot longer" she
gabbed him by his hair "on to your knees". SMASH! SMASH! She slapped him
hard, he could smell the sweat on her body he was inched away from her bear
flesh, she placed her foot on his crouch. "I excite you don't I boy" he
couldn't deny it she could feel his hard on "y.. yes Madam" she laughed
"stand up". It was difficult for him to stand his body felt like it had
almost been destroyed by her. He stood there unsure on his feet he wobbled
a bit SMACK! CRACK! THUD! SMASH! She hit him again and again, he was
powerless to stop her or do anything. He staggered she was now just a blur
to him THUD! THUD! OOOFFFHHH! Her knee connected hard into his stomach, he
stood there almost toppling over, but something kept him on his feet, just.
"Time to say goodnight James" WWOOSSHH! CRACK! A high kick from the older
woman found it mark, his chin! His head bounced back and front and back
again, by some miracle he stood there for a full second before collapsing
straight down into a heap. Like watching a high rise tower being demolished
CRASH! Down he came.

James came to OOOOHHHH! AAARRRHHH! 'OH CHRIST!' His body had never hurt
this much before, there was no sign of the woman, and he breathed a sigh of
relief at that. He looked around the black man was on the floor where Miss
Heartless had destroyed him, James thought twice about going to check on
him. He dragged his beaten body out the basement, out of the house into the
drive way it was dark outside he didn't have the energy to check his watch,
Miss Heartless' Jag had gone, there was another car parked there, must
belong to the poor guy in the basement!  He got into his car and locked
himself in, he closed his eyes and felt safe, he opened his eyes to see a
large note stuck to the steering wheel. James swallowed hard as he read it,
fear and excitement engulfed him!

   THE HOUSE IS JUST RIGHT
   BUT TO EXPENSIVE!
   YOU WILL GET THE PRICE DOWN
   BY AT LEAST 40K!
   WE WILL BE IN THE OFFICE ON MONDAY
   TO SEE YOU!
   AND EXPECT TO HEAR GOOD NEWS!

  YOUR MADAM AND MISTRESS