Mary Lou beats down two goons after her Pa's land.
By Crohnsman2 Crohnsman67216@yahoo.com


Mary Lou works over two hired goons trying to force her Pa to sell his
land after oil is discovered on it.

After Mary Lou's Ma recovered from her illness, she became stronger every
day. Mary Lou still ran the family, because the woman never seemed to get
back the fire in her heart, that was evident when she ran the family with
an iron will. But her passion for Mary Lou going to school and getting an
education, was still there. She wanted her daughter to have the best
chance possible to make a better life for herself. A few months after she
had gotten better, she told Mary Lou she wanted her to go back to school.
She would not take no for an answer.

Now Mary Lou liked going to school, but thought she was needed at home
much more. But her Ma was adamant. Mary Lou was going back to school, and
that was final. Every argument Mary Lou came up with to convince her Ma
to let her stay home, was shot down. Mary Lou loved and respected her Ma,
so she gave up and agreed to retu rn to school. Her Ma was happy.

When the mine had collapsed, there were Geological Survey teams spread
all over the County. Their job was to test the soil, and check the
underground fault lines, to see if it would be safe to reopen the mines.
One of those teams, surveyed the land that was owned by Mary Lou's Pa.
One man on that team found something very interesting. Millions of
gallons of oil rested beneath the surface on her Pa's land. He didn't
report his find to anyone.

He was under the assumption, that the people who lived in these Tennessee
hills were poor, dumb hillbilly's. So all he had to do was offer the man
a great deal of money for his land, and he would jump at the chance to
sell it without asking to many questions. He didn't take into
consideration, how proud and family oriented the hill folks were. He soon
realised his mistake, after being turned down three times by her Pa.

Mary Lou's Pa didn't have much, but what he had was his. This land had
been in his family for many generations, and he planned on passing it on
to his sons. So selling it to anyone, was totally out of the question. No
matter how much money they offered. Now the surveyor wasn't a violent
man. But fortunately for him, he had a cousin who was a drug dealer, gun
runner, pimp, and all around shady character.

He contacted his cousin and explained the problem he was having with the
old man, and w hat was at stake. After a very lengthy discussion, they
entered into a partnership. The cousin was to find a way to force the old
man to sell his land, and put up the money. He would take care of getting
the drilling equipment and crew, and show them exactly where to drive the
shaft. A 50/50 split satisfied the two men, and cemented the deal. There
was millions to be made.

The cousin sent his two best men to force the old man to sell. He didn't
care how they accomplished it, just get the job done. Sol and Vinnie were
your typical muscle for hire. Big, strong, and dumb. Their way of doing
business, was straight on with brute force. They grabbed the old man on
his way to the sawmill to work one morning, and beat him half to death.
But he wouldn't sign over his land.

They beat him so bad, that he had to be put in the hospital. And he was
in such bad shape, that he was not able to tell anyone how it had
happened. Sol and Vinnie's next idea, was to grab up the old woman, and
force her to sign over the land. But the old woman never left the cabin.
The men folk hunted and fished for their meat, and the old woman grew
their vegetables in the garden out in back of the cabin. The few
essentials that they did have to bye, was picked up by Mary Lou on her
way home from school.

So the large goons came up with a fool proof plan. At least to their way
of thinking it was. Kidnap the daughter on her way to school and threaten
to kill her, if the old woman didn't do as she was told and sign the deed
over to their boss. Hell, it was real simple, easy , and couldn't fail.
What could possible go wrong with such a brilliant plan. Nothing, right?

So Monday morning, the two men set up their trap and waited for Mary Lou
to come down the road. Sol was standing outside the van with a map in his
hand like he was lost. When Mary Lou came along, he hailed her over to
ask directions. While she was pointing at the map to show him where he
needed to go, Vinnie sneaked around the back of the van and dropped a
pillow case over her head. Sol grabbed her legs and they threw her in the
van and tied her up. So far their brilliant plan was working perfectly.
It didn't stay that way.

Sol checked the telephone book to get their phone number, so he could
call the old woman and tell her they had her daughter. They soon found
out that Mary Lou's folks didn't have a phone. OK, no problem. They would
email the woman and let her know Mary Lou was in danger if she didn't
comply with their wishes. But alas, they had no computer either.

Then it was a simple matter of writing her a note and mailing her the bad
news. But that idea blew up in their faces too. The mailman only
delivered to the hill folks two times a week. On Mondays and Thursdays.
By the time they had Mary Lou and got her tucked away in the house they
had rented, the mailman had already left. Now they had to wait until
Thursday, or think of something else.

The only option left to them wa s to hand deliver the note. Sol sat down
and thought out what he wanted to say, and carefully printed it down.
When he was through, he gave it to Vinnie with instructions to wait until
it was dark. Then tie the note around a rock and get close enough to
throw it at the door of the cabin. Vinnie was pissed he had to do the leg
work, but finally agreed to deliver the note.

Just after it turned dark, there was a loud noise outside the cabin door.
Caleb opened the door and found the rock with a note attached. He took it
to his Ma, who was frantic over the fact that Mary Lou hadn't come home
from school yet. She had sent Carson and Caleb out to look for her, but
they came back empty handed. She peeled the note off of the rock and sat
down to read it.

The note was addressed to her. "If you ever want to see your daughter
alive again, do as I say. Bring the deed to your land, and meet me at
noon tomorrow, at the end of the road where you turn toward town. Come
alone. And no cops or she is dead." She knew her husband would never sell
his land. But she couldn't lose her only daughter. He would understand,
that she did the right thing. She had to get Mary Lou back.

Mary Lou was lying in a bedroom on a mattress they had thrown on the
floor. It was the only thing in the room. She didn't know why the two
guys had kidnapped her. Her folks didn't have any money or anything else
of value. The only thing her Pa had that he owned was his land. And she
couldn't think of any reason they would want that. It wasn't much good
for anything, especially to tw o guys in suits. It didn't make sense.
What the hell could they want.

She thought at first they were going to rape her. When they put her in
the room, they had removed her shoes, socks, shorts and top. But as soon
as they had her undressed and down to her white bra and panties, they
tied her back up and left the room. So she figured they only took her
clothing in case she was able to somehow escape. Wearing only her bra and
panties and being barefoot, they probably thought she wouldn't get to far
before they could catch her again.

She had managed to get herself untied and removed the pillow case they
had put over her head. She seen there was one window in the room, but it
was boarded up from the outside. The only way out was through the locked
door. She set her brain to working, to devise a plan of escape. She
didn't know what the two men wanted, but she had seen their faces when
they undressed her. She was sure they wouldn't leave her alive after they
got what they were after. What ever that was.

Sol was waiting at the end of the road for the old woman. He had left
Vinnie back at the house to watch over Mary Lou. Vinnie wasn't the
smartest guy in the world, so he didn't want to trust him with grabbing
up the old lady. The young girl was tied up and locked away in the
bedroom, so he surely couldn't screw anything up by keeping an eye on
her. Soon they would have what they came after and could get out of these
damn hills. He hated the rocky country here.

Mary Lou's Ma came strolling down the road. She seen the big man and his
van waiting for her at the turn. She quickened her pace, in a hurry to
get Mary Lou back and safe. Sol was glad she was finally there. "Did you
bring the deed to your land old woman?" "Yes, yes I did. I don't know why
you would want it so badly, but I have it right here." "Never mind why we
want it bitch. Just do as you're told and you get your daughter back.
Understand?" "Yes, I understand. Just please, don't hurt her."

They both got in the van and Sol drove off. He called Vinnie on his cell
to let him know they were coming. "Should I whack the young broad now
Sol, or wait until you get here?" "Nah! Hold off on that Vinnie. We'll be
there soon." "OK Sol, what ever you say." Vinnie hung up his cell phone
and decided to go check on the young bitch. It was to bad they had to
kill her so quick. He would have liked to get a piece of that sweet ass
first. But business was business.

Mary Lou heard him coming toward the door, and readied her 5 foot, 6
inch, 117 pound young body to fight her way out. Thinking she was still
tied up and no threat, Vinnie's 6 foot, 2 inch, 233 pound frame, wasn't
prepared for her attack when he opened the door. The door opened inward,
so Mary Lou positioned herself to be behind it when it came open. Shock
registered on Vinnie's face when he seen she wasn't lying on the
mattress. But before he could do anything, Mary Lou struck.

She grabbed his right wrist just as he turned loose of the door knob.
Pulling on his arm and turning her well formed young body, she spun him
around and sent him back pedaling toward the wall. She charged after him.
His back hit the wall hard.."SLAM!"..and slightly shook him up. Mary Lou
kicked out with her right leg as hard as she could, and slammed him right
in the balls.."WHAM!"..Vinnie doubled over in pain.

SMACK..an uppercut landed on his chin, snapping his head back into the
wall.."SLAM!"..her hard feminine fists went to work on his pain stricken,
surprised face..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..he managed to
get his large arms up and shove her away, before he reached into his suit
coat for his gun. Mary Lou quickly regained her balance, and went back on
the attack..SMACK..a solid right landed on his right arm muscle, turning
his arm numb and making him drop the glock. Mary Lou kicked it away and
smiled.

"Afraid ta take me on without a gun huh?" "Fuck you you little bitch.
I'll rip your head off." "Then come on fat boy, lets see what ya got."
Vinnie looked at that fabulous body and decided he would get him a piece
of ass after all. Just as soon as he beat her fucking head in, so she
wouldn't be anymore trouble. He went at her with a large smile on his
face. Mary Lou was grinning also. Big boy didn't know it yet, but he was
about to get his large ass kicked.

Muscular male arms began chucking large male fists with body damaging
power behind them. One after the other they came at Mary Lou with
menacing speed, to beat her ass to the floor. Dodging and weaving, she
eluded them all, and waited for her opportunity to strike back. After
about fifteen punches, it came. SMACK..SMACK..SMACK.."You're not doing so
good fat boy. Maybe you should change yer line of work. They need burger
flippers down at Burger Haven. Or ya could become a Florist. Cause ya
fight like a sissy."

SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..Vinnie was confused as hell. No broad had
ever picked a fight with him before. He was just to big. But this little
bitch knew how to fight, and she hit awful damn hard. Still, she was just
a female. It was only a matter of time before he had her in the floor,
fucking the shit out of her broken body. Just a matter of time.

SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK.."What's the matter wimp? Are ya so scared ya
fergot how ta speak?"..SMACK..SMACK.."Ya better find yer voice and start
beggin pansy ass."..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK.."Cause I'm gonna beat ya so bad,
ya'll think ya was trampled by a
horse."..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..Vinnie couldn't seem to get away
from any punch she threw. And he couldn't land anything himself. She
fought like a demon, and he was getting a little worried.

Mary Lou was having a ball. His large beefy face was changing colors and
swelling up nicely. He would soon be at her mercy. But she wasn't going
to show him any. What ever the two men wanted, they weren't going to get
it if she had anything to say about it.
THUD..THUD..THUD..THUD..SMACK..SMACK..Mary Lou worked over his mid
section a little, then sent and a right left combination to both eyes.
Vinnie went down.

He looked up from the floor and shook his head to clear it. A God damn
female was standing over him in her underwear. And as hard as it was for
him to believe, she had knocked him down with her fists. What kind of
fucking female could do that. Were they being born with super powers or
something now. Hell, every female he knew was totally helpless. They
couldn't do shit without a man there to help them. What the fuck was
going on in the world these days.

Mary Lou laughed at the lost look on his face. "Can't figure out what's
going on, can ya wimp. Well I can help ya with that. Yer gettin yer ass
whupped by me. And it's been real easy too. Now get yer ass up, so I can
finish ya off." Vinnie climbed to his feet. It's a fucking girl, he said
to himself. Quit fucking around and knock her ass out.

His thick, muscular arms went to work with that thought on his mind.
Heavy handed punches were fired at Mary Lou, with head splitting power
behind every one of them. But they were so pitifully slow, that Mary Lou
could easily avoid them. Vinnie began to tire out, so she opened her own
offense with much better accuracy..SMACK..he heard the small bones in his
nose crunch..SMACK..he felt his lips swell from her punch..SMACK..his jaw
turned numb.

SMACK..SMACK..both eyes were in pain..SMACK..SMACK.. both cheeks were in
pain..SMACK..SMACK..both eyes swelled..SMACK..SMACK..both cheeks
swelled..SMACK..SMACK. .SMACK..two teeth flew out of his mouth as it
busted wide open..THUD..THUD..SMACK..his stomach hurt like hell and his
chin felt like it had moved from it's socket.

"OK little man, time ta put ya ta sleep. Yer partner will be back soon,
and I want ta be ready for him. So say yer bed time prayers wimp, cause
yer going nite nite.."SMMM..AACCKKKK!"..Mary Lou's right cross exploded
on his jaw. His large muscular arms dropped to his sides as his eye balls
rolled back in his head. His bulky body rocked up and down a few times,
before it slammed into the floor at her bare feet, sound asleep. "Ya
didn't say good night little man."

Mary Lou tied his arms and feet with the rope she had been tied up with.
When she had him securely hog tied, she dragged his sleeping body over to
the corner by the door. When his partner opened the door, he wouldn't be
able to see his buddy all tied up and beaten, until it was to late. Mary
Lou went looking for her clothes and shoes, but couldn't find them. They
must be in the van they used ta kidnap me, she thought to herself. I'll
get em later.

Mary Lou heard Sol enter the house, and flattened herself against the
wall by the door. "Sit down there and sign the land deed over to us, old
woman." "NO! I'm not signing anything till I'm sure Mary Lou is alright."
OH MY GOD! Mary Lou said to herself. That's Ma's voice. Now they have her
too. What in the hell could they want. "You can see your precious
daughter, then I want that deed signed, or else." "VINNIE, WHERE THE HELL
ARE YOU MAN?"

Sol grabbed the old woman by the arm and dragged her back toward the
bedroom. He opened the door and shoved her in. Just as he followed her
through the doorway, Mary Lou blasted him in the face with a solid back
fist..SMACK..He stumbled back into the hallway, completely taken by
surprise. He quickly got over being startled, and reached inside his coat
for his gun.

Mary Lou was on him in a flash. "WHAM!"..she drove her bare foot up into
his balls as hard as she could. Sol grunted in pain and bent over
clutching his balls. She grabbed his right arm and whipped it behind his
back in a hammerlock. Clutching his right shoulder with her right hand,
she drove his head into the hallway wall.."SLAM!".."SLAM!".."SLAM!"..Sol
dropped to his knees, groggy and disoriented.

She quickly reached inside his coat and removed the gun from his shoulder
holster. Turning toward her Ma, she handed it to her. "Take care of this
fer me Ma, while I beat some answers out of this sissy ass city boy."
"I'm so glad yer alright Mary Lou. You had me worried sick." "I'm fine
Ma. We'll talk later." Mary Lou turned back to Sol and smiled.
"WHAM!"..her bare foot exploded in his face, knocking him over to his
back. "You got some explaining ta do wimp."

Sol ignored the pain in his balls and head, and kicked at Mary Lou to
back her up. He climbed to his feet, with rage spread all over his face.
"You're dead you little hillbilly bitch. I'm go nna rip you apart with my
bare hands." "OOOHHHHH! I'm so scared." Mary Lou shot back at him while
laughing. "Ya have ta do better then yer buddy in there, cause he fought
like a pussy. It was real easy ta beat him silly."

Sol had heard enough. No woman talked to him like that without getting
beaten half to death. Smacking women around was a favorite pastime of
his. He loved it when they were crawling on the floor and begging him to
leave them alone. Their faces all puffy and bloody, turned him on. He was
really going to enjoy giving this little bitch a beating. And he would
enjoy killing her, after the deed had been signed.

His 6 foot, 3 inch, 241 pound muscular body, leaped at Mary Lou with both
massive fists blazing. Each punch was designed to wreck havoc on her
pretty face and destroy her young female body. Ham like fists, attached
to thick male arms, were repeatedly fired at Mary Lou. They kept coming
like a machine that was set on automatic. Mary Lou smiled and danced.
Punch after punch after punch was evaded by the agile brown haired
warrior, until his stamina began to fade.

Finally, Mary Lou blocked his last three attempts and set her own offense
in motion. "My turn wimp. Lets see if ya can last longer then yer pansy
ass buddy." SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..Sol was staggering
backwards down the hallway. She kept him off balance with straight hard
shots that easily found their mark..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..Sol was
just as confused and lost as Vinnie had been.

The scantly clad female fighter didn't give him the chance to get his
bearings or catch his breath. His large face, was quickly turned larger
from swelling. It ballooned up to over twice it's size in a matter of
minutes. Mary Lou beat him all the way down the hallway. Just as they
reached the living room, she blasted his chin with a solid right
cross..SMACK..and he flopped to the floor.

"You city boys are plumb pitiful at fist fightin ain't ya? Maybe I should
get my Ma ta tie one of my arms behind my back, so ya could have a better
chance of whuppin me. I really don't think that would help ya though. Ya
fight like a sissy." Sol climbed to his feet, more determined then
before. The little bitch won't be so cocky, when she's lying in the floor
bleeding. He thought to himself.

Sol went back on the attack with renewed energy. He was sick of hearing
her fucking mouth run, and couldn't wait to shut her the fuck up. Massive
missiles of destruction went flying at Mary Lou, with bone crushing power
behind everyone of them. Rights and lefts of all kinds were thrown by the
large muscular man from every angle. One solid connection, and the mouthy
little bitch would be singing a different tune. But he continued to miss
his targets.

Mary Lou was ducking and dodging like a pro. At one point she got so
bored, that she yawned right in Sol's face. This pissed him off even
more, but it didn't help his accuracy. She avoided everything he threw,
an d taunted his feeble attempts to hit her. "You boys need ta take some
fightin lessons. Cause the way ya fight is pathetic. Hell, I could fight
better then that when I was six years old."

Sol's determination and energy soon ran out. He could hardly lift his big
muscular arms, and his mouth was wide open, trying to catch his breath.
Mary Lou decided it was time to put a stop to his futile efforts, and
show the big city boy how to punch with authority. "OK you pathetic
loser, pay attention. I'll show ya how ta fight, Tennessee hill style. I
should warn ya though, this is gonna hurt."

SMACK..Sol's nose was badly broken. "I told ya it was gonna
hurt."..SMACK..his mouth split open and blood gushed out. "Ya see how
easy it is if ya know what yer doing, ya wimp?"..SMACK..SMACK..both eyes
swelled further, and the skin above the left one was cut open. "OHHHHHH!
That's a bad lookin eye ya got there city boy."..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..his
cheeks swelled up and turned purple, and his chin felt like it was lose
from it's socket. "Purple is a nice color fer ya pansy
ass."..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK..SMACK.

Sol was completely helpless against her barrage of hard feminine punches.
His eyes were swollen so much, that he couldn't see where or when her
next one was coming. His thick, bulky legs started to shake, while Mary
Lou beat him senseless. She seen he was totally defenseless, and was
enjoying herself immensely. Unable to put up any resistance, Sol could do
nothing to stop her from doing as she pleased.

Mary Lou grabbed his right shoulder with her left hand, and began to turn
his stomach into mush. "What do ya say we work on that tummy of yers fer
a while wimp?" THUD..THUD..THUD..THUD..THUD..THUD..Sol doubled over in
pain, while trying to suck air in his lungs. With his chin exposed, Mary
Lou took advantage of it.."SMM..AACCKKK!"..he collapsed at her feet,
sound asleep. "That was fun." She said laughing.

"Mary Lou, you are such an incredible young lady. It is simply amazing
that you could beat up these two big men and make it look so easy." Ah
heck Ma, it weren't nothin. These two city boys are just big wimps. What
do they want anyway? Why did they grab you up too?" "They want yer Pa's
land. Though fer the life of me, I don't know why they would want it."
"Me either Ma. What would two city boys want with rocky mountain land? It
ain't much good fer nothin. I guess I'll have ta wake one up and ask
him."

Mary Lou placed Sol's arms on his back in a double hammerlock and knelt
down over his shoulders, trapping them there with her knees. When she was
ready, she reached back and slapped him awake. Sol tried to struggle when
he seen the position he was in, but she had him securely pinned. He soon
realised it was useless to waste his energy. His arms were trapped and he
couldn't buck her off of his shoulders. He settled down and gave up
trying.

"OK city boy, it's time ta answer some questions." "I ain't telling you
shit you fuc king hillbilly bitch." Mary Lou took hold of his right hand
pinkie finger. "Ya better start talkin wimp, or I'm gonna break yer
fingers till ya do." "Go to hell bitch, I ain't saying nothing." "OK city
boy, I warned ya.."SNAP!" "AARRGGHHHHHHHHHHH!" "YOU BROKE MY FINGER YOU
FUCKING BITCH! I'LL KILL YOU FOR THAT!"

She took hold of his left pinkie finger. "Ya got nine more ta go wimp,
are ya ready ta tell me what I wanna know?" "You're dead bitch. You hear
me, you're dea...."SNAP!".."AARRGGHHHHHHHHHH!" "YOU FUCKING WHORE! I'LL
CUT YOU UP IN PIECES!" "You're talkin wimp, but ya ain't sayin what I
wanna hear. So yer ring fingers are gonna be next." "FUCK YOU BITCH!"

"Ya sure are stubborn ain't ya pansy ass. But I think yer gonna change
yer mind in a bit and tell me everything." She took his right hand ring
finger and wrapped her palm around it. "Ya ready ta talk city boy, or do
I break number three?" Sol lie there, not saying a word. "Have it yer way
wimp. It ain't hurtin me none." "SNAP!".."AARRGGHHHHHHHH!" "I'LL KILL YOU
YOU BITCH, I'LL KILL YOU!" She grabbed his other ring finger. "Number
four comin up wimp. Grit yer teeth."

"SNAP!".."AARRGGHHHHHHHHH!" "YOU FUCKING WHORE!" Mary Lou got a good grip
on his right hand middle finger. "Ohhhhhh, this is a big one. I bet it's
really gonna hurt." Sol felt her tense her arm to break another one of
his fingers, and his will caved in. "WAIT! WAIT! I'LL TALK! PLEASE DON'T
BREAK ANYMORE FINGERS!" "That's what I wanted ta hear city boy. Now tell
me why ya want my Pa's land."

"Oil. The surveyor found oil on your property when he was testing the
land to see if it would be safe to reopen the mines." "OIL!" Are ya sure
bout that? I ain't never seen no trace of oil round here." "That's what
my boss said, when he sent us down here to force you to sell the land."
"Well I'll be damned." "Hey Ma, did ya hear that? We got oil on our
land." "I heard him Mary Lou. But it's hard ta believe."

Her Ma called the Sheriff on Sol's cell phone, and they came and took the
two men away. They were going to be charged with kidnapping and attempted
murder, so they sung like the proverbial canary to get their sentences
reduced. Their boss and the land surveyor was implicated and sent to
prison along with the two goons. Mary Lou's Pa got the County surveyor to
confirm the story, and he reported that oil was sure enough under the
ground.

When all was said and done, Mary Lou and her family were multi
millionaires. They are worth about one hundred million dollars to this
day. But they didn't let that change their lives. Her Pa built a nice
home on the mountain for his wife and kids, but couldn't bear to tear
down the cabin. It still stands about a mile away from their new home.

The old man still works at the sawmill, because he couldn't stand to be
idle and not doing anything. Mary Lou and her Ma still grow their own
vegetables in the bigger garden out back of their new home. The only two
that aren't really happy, are Carson and Caleb. They still hunt and fish
for the families meat, even though they could bye what ever they wanted.
They thought they were going to have more time for fun and games, since
they were rich.

Mary Lou finished High School and went to College at the University of
Tennessee. She met a young man from Illinois that was studying
Agriculture there, and they were soon married. They have had only one
martial spat during their marriage. The young man learned early, that it
was a very painful mistake to make his wife angry. But other then his
fear of getting another senseless beating if he screws up, he loves Mary
Lou with all his heart. And she loves him dearly. As long as he behaves
and obeys her.