More then a misunderstanding
By The Kid



About the Author : "The Kid" over the yrs enjoyed watching movies that 
involved women who fought , not only with other women but testing thier 
thier fighting abilities , against men , and winning . His earliest 
viewing of such films , were a tv series called Honey West , and an 
action adventure series titled The Avengers , starring Diana Riggs who 
played the role of Emma Peel , a British undercover agent . And since 
those days "The Kid" has always enjoyed such female action . Not only on 
screen , but in Art and Novels . So now he's found a new pasttime 
writing short storys on these Wonderfull women of fighting . Preface of 
Story : This is a short story of fiction, the events in this story do 
not relate to any real living person . The story is about a pickup of a 
young 15 yr old girl who was selling herself at a young age . 
Unfortunely for the John , he was flat broke . So guess where that will 
leave him . Remember this story is of an adult content , and should be 
read by an adult of legal age .   The poor john , who suffers throughout 
this one , and it is fiction , with myself not having any desire to be 
in this guy's situation 


Now let's take a little ride around towne and see who we can pickup for 
the night . I think maybe you just might rather listen , because you 
more than likely don,t want this pickup . Hey reader I told you once it 
is safer for you to just listen and read this story . now close my car 
door and get back to your computer and read . You'll save yourself alot 
of healing if you do .  It was just an ordinary summer night , and I was 
out cruising looking for a good time , or a hot date , prefferably a hot 
date . The time was nearing midnight , when I noticed a young woman 
walking heading towards town . as I upon her she appear to be waving me 
over . Slowing to a stop , I said " Who me " . "Yes you " she said " who 
else would I be talking to . " " Do you see anybody else around " " No " 
I replied " Smiling ever so sweetly She said " how about we take a drive 
in that car of yours , and have some fun . " Hottdamn !!! I,m landing 
one . " Sure get on in " missy I said opening the passenger side car 
door . The girl was petite she must have stood 5'4" . But man was she 
built . Wearing a tight red halter tank top that accentuated her two 
little lovelys . Too little oh no just how old is she I thought to 
myself ? Then I asked her " by the way how old are you honey " She 
replied " just 19 " " people mistake me for bieng younger though ". Well 
you had me fooled " I said " to her smiling . But thinking to myself I 
would swear she was only 15 . And later on I found out that was all the 
older she was , as this girl was a runnaway . She looked at me and faked 
a frown , and said " I'm not having any fun yet , are you " ? " No not 
really " I returned quickly with an answer . " What do you have in mind 
" I asked ? " Well why don,t we take a ride down into the park " and let 
me show you how we can have fun " she said . Sure sure thing sweetie , 
thinking to myself I thought what are we going to do play on the swing 
sets . Because I swear this girl is looking 15 every time I look at her 
. I should have asked her if I could just take her home , but something 
else was thinking for me , and it was definately leading me into trouble 
.  Driving through the park now she pointed over to a parking area near 
a cluster of trees , that would block any view of people driving by . " 
There will be good " she said smiling ever so sweetly again at me . 
Coming to a stop , I turned off the ignition silencing the car . Without 
hesitation she pulled my hand's to her young suppled breast's . " Wait a 
minute " I said . " don't you want your money first " . Trying to take 
my hand's off of small ampled breast's , she stopped me , having a firm 
grip on both of my hand's . My was she strong , her grip was beginning 
to hurt a little . This girl was hungry , and definately a rookie , as 
most smart hooker's always wanted thier money up front . So I guess she 
trusted me to pay her when she finished her job . Seeing that I made the 
attempt to pay her that was enough to satisfy her . Fondling her breasts 
, through her tanktop she stopped me , loosing all of my sense's now , " 
I asked her " is there a problem " ? , wanting to get back to what I was 
doing . " No no problem " she said " taking off her tank ," now isn,t 
this much better " . she said smiling at me again . I cleared my throat 
and " said " yes yes it is " Taken by surprise at how much better they 
looked without the shirt . " Then sastisfy them " she giggled " as I 
must of appeared to be a school boy to her , with my awkwardness . 
Putting my hand's back on her little twin's , she took them off , " and 
said " No no no , not that way silly , with your mouth " Man this was 
like taking a dive off the highdive for the 1st time again . Then I 
obliged her her with following through with her request . And as I did 
she was unzipping me , and rub- ing my most prized possession ever so 
gently , bringing it to an erection . I still remembered what do at this 
point as I dropped my hand's , allowing her to drop her head into my lap 
. Now I know that I,ve lost all my sense's not even worried now about 
how old she could be .  Slowly she took me in inch by inch , I had drop 
back seat's in my car , as I quickly reached to the side of my seat and 
pushed the lever , and did a drop back . She must be enjoying this , as 
she took her time giving my cock , a mouth massage , drawing me in and 
taking me back out , and repeating this method , with slow stroke's . I 
could feel myself nearing the point of explosion , and was having some 
considersation for her , not know- ing how she liked it , " she said " 
I,m not finished yet, and niether are you " Then without saying anything 
else she went back to finish me off , and did it quickly , with long and 
quick stroke's of her moist mouth . Wham bang an ex- plosion went off in 
my head as I came . I let out a loud grown of pleasure . Layed back in 
my seat with some sweat rolling down my forehead , trying to savor this 
moment . " Now you can pay me Mister " she said ". Bringing me out of my 
state of enjoyment . " Sure sure thing " " how much do I owe you " I 
asked ". 50 will do " she answered " "What 50 dollar's " ? " isn't that 
a little steep '? I asked " . Then looking at her I knew for some reason 
she needed the money . " Sure sure thing, let me get it for you" 
reaching for my back pocket for my wallet , what , I thought no wallet . 
Now I was thinking she ripped me off , and reconsidering her age as 
bieng older now , I began accusing her . " What is this "she said 
angrily " are you looking an excuse not to pay me . " If you ripped me 
off your already paid . " I told her ." I,ve been ripped off once before 
, for the ammount of a week's pay , and it's not going to happen again" 
. with some anger in my voice . " I didn't take your wallet buddy " now 
pay me or else " she said " with even more anger in her voice . I can,t 
pay you now can I if you have my wallet now can I " girlie ? WHAMM ! 
Another explosion went went off in my head , and this one was a far cry 
from bieng as good as the first that went off earlier this evening . Her 
fist collided hard to the side of my head , slamming it into the window 
. " Now pay me , you cheap bastard " she said " with even more anger in 
her voice . " Sorry " I can't I don't have my wallet " I said to her not 
bieng so bold towards her now . WHAMMM !!! Her fist shot straight back 
into my face , snapping my head back quickly ., and before I even had a 
chance to recover she drilled me several more time's to my face , 
busting my nose and mouth wide open . She then ceased herself from 
hitting me . Tilting my head back with my hand's over my nose and mouth 
I was trying to stop the bleeding . " Please I said " can,t I just pay 
you when I see you again " ? Then it was her turn to answer , " No that 
won,t do " she said" . And without saying another word she grabbed the 
back of my head by the hair and began slamming my head into the face of 
the steering wheel . If your wondering why I wasn't trying to stop her 
from beating me this way , is because I,m not one prone to hit a woman , 
or a young girl as this one appeared to be . Releasing her grip from the 
back of my head . She snatched the car key's from the ignition , and 
quickly got out of the car . Pulling my badly beatin face up off of the 
steering wheel . I saw her storming around to my side . Trying to avoid 
what was coming next , I slapped the door locks down , locking the car 
doors . " GET OUT...GET OUT OF THE DAMN CAR NOW " She SCREAMED !!! No 
way I thought to myself , She's nut's . Then she started to calm down . 
looking at the key's in her hand , she waved them in front of me through 
the window . " One more time " she said asking " now get out of the DAMN 
CAR " . And yet I sat there . " Well that was your last chance to do it 
yourself " she said " unlocking my door . I tried to pull the door shut 
again , but she grabbed me , and quickly jerked me out of the car , and 
having me by the collar of my shirt , she kicked the car door shut . " 
Now I,m asking you one more time , PAY ME" !! She shouted into my face . 
I,ve got to stop her some how , but at the moment , fear was beginning 
to oversweep me. I couldn't even answer her . And bieng quite to her , 
angered her even more . Enough to where she slammed me into the car 
stiil having a hold of me she brought her knee into my groin ... My Gawd 
, Where was this girl getting all of this strengh from . She was only 
5'4" and didn,t even looked like she wieghed more than 105 lb's . Here I 
was a man that stood 5'11" wieghing 197 lb's . Hell I even worked a good 
part of my life as a heavy machine operater. And yet this small girl was 
treating me as if I was the weaker sex .  She let go of her grasp . 
Trying to stand erect " No not that " The pleasure part of this story is 
over reader ". I wish now I would have let you in the car , we could 
have went for some brew " . And I might have never ran into this little 
HELL...CAT........ AAAaaahhhggg !!!  Another shot to the crotch , but 
this time with one of her girlie boot's , quickly I double over , and my 
face was introduced to a hard right uppercut , that sent me back into 
the car .. bouncing forward off the car I fell to the ground . Somehow 
and I don't know how , but I was still consience . Must have built up 
all the stamnina from all those years of hard work , but this young girl 
was takung it away , and taking it to me . And for some dumb reason I 
felt I had to stop her , thinking I enough left in me .  She pulled me 
to my feet and shoved me against the car again this time not so hard . " 
She said " again " Pay me " a little calmer this time . Trying to gain a 
little more strengh back I didn,t answer her soon enough as she was 
reaching out to grab me by the collar again , I felt it was time that I 
had enough catching her by the shoulder's , my plan was to toss her to 
the ground and try to restrain her from there . Quickly she swung her 
arm's upward and in between mine shooting them outwards breaking my grip 
that I had on her shoulder's . She then did this spinning type of kick , 
to where she spun completely around and caught me in the midsection . 
Dropping me instantly to the ground . I never cried much as a boy , and 
rarely would you see me cry as a man , I felt that men weren't to be 
seen crying . But I was beyond that type of thinking now as I layed on 
the ground clutch- ing my stomach and breaking out in tears .  " 
AHHhhh... Poor little man boo hoo hoo .... he's crying " she said 
sarcasticly ". Guess you should pay me now " ? Not knowing what to say 
to her she reached down and pulled me to my feet . Yes reader again now 
aren,t you glad that your not involved in this . Now quit asking 
question's and let me finish telling the story. What's that reader ? " 
you think your helping me by stopping me from finishing " ? " Do you 
think that I want this girl to continue thrashing me " I want the story 
to end so I can recover from this whipping " Now please let me finish ". 
Thank you . Grasping me she pushed me against the car and held me there 
. Holding me there , She drew back her fist as she still had me firmly 
pressed against the car with her other hand . " Ok ok " I said " I'll 
pay you " whimpering as I spoke . " But 1st I,ve got to go to my bank at 
the drive thru and withdraw your money ." " And how are you going to do 
that without your ATM card " she asked ? There's a new system that thier 
trying at our bank , all you do is press a button and speak into the 
automated teller , voice regonition , I believe that's what thier trying 
to do with the new withdrawel system ".  " O.k ok" she said " as she 
dropped her fist to her side ." But I,m going with you ". she said" 
could I stop her " No NO Reader I wasn't asking you " . Just commenting 
to myself , and trying to make this story interesting to you " Oh by the 
way reader what is it about reading of me getting my ass whipped by a 
young girl , how doe's that interest you " ? And whats your name maybe I 
can cast you in my next story . No you sure "? O.K think about it then . 
Now let me get this girl her money so I can dump her off where I picked 
her up ". Thank you . " Just so I know your not lying to me ". she said 
" smiling , glad she's smiling again . What who's that ? The young girl 
said looking around . Oh that's just reader he's wanting to know your 
name " ? I SAID Tell him for me that he's keeping me from getting my 
money and if he keeps it up I,ll find out who he is , and whip his ass 
like I just did to you ". She said " Did you hear that reader ". ?" I 
thought so " Now maybe I can finish this story we shouldn't hear from 
him for the rest of the night ".  We got to the bank , and the voice 
activation thing was working , I payed the girl her 50 and dropped her 
off at the bus stop she explained to me I was going to be her last guy 
she would have sex with for money , 50 dollar's was all she needed to 
have , to get back home with . But why would she pick me to be the last 
guy ? Reader ? Now I'm talking to you reader ? He must have went to bed 
, or maybe the girl scared him off . Oh well Maybe he'll e-mail me so I 
can cast him into my next story . LMAO .... LOL  A story that Rod 
Sterling should have wrote , but  done By "The Kid" THE END READER E-
Mail me with any comments or suggestions you may have . desio@jbic.com