Mistake
By Alamsci
A fictional story of revenge and confusion

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Jeffrey walked home with enthusiasm. It was Friday and his flat mate was out of town 
for the weekend. This was going to be his weekend. His girlfriend was coming over 
and, well, they were going to have a blast, no two ways about it. 

He made his way up to his fifth floor apartment, but as he approached he spotted an 
unfamiliar figure standing in front of his front door. He uncomfortably scrutinized the 
figure in front of him, but had no idea who she was. She looked young, most probably 
in her late teens, about 18 or so. She was wearing a dark blue tracksuit and was 
impatiently tapping her right foot.

As he was taking his keys out, trying to be nonchalant about the situation, the young 
girl looked over at him, with a somewhat disturbed look, she picked up her black 
worn out duffle back, with one hand and put her other hand on her waist in a 
confrontational matter. He looked into her confident, yet, provoking brown eyes, but 
could not hold her gaze, he quickly averted his gaze to the door and quickened his 
pace, "Well, its about time!" She loudly said.

"Excuse me, do I know you?" Jeffrey shot back.

Her expression was no longer confrontational, but it now conveyed anger, "I'm 
Sandra's sister, don't tell me she didn't tell you I was gonna spend a few days with 
you two?"

That bitch, Jeffrey thought to himself, how could she, she didn't say a word. "Well, 
you know Sandra's out of town till Monday, bu.."

"Well, I guess that'll give us some time to get to know each other." She interrupted. 
As Jeffrey was opening the door, the young lady forcefully pushed by him and 
entered the apartment, "Where's my sister's room? Oh, how rude of me, I'm Eva by 
the way." 

She said as she stuck her hand out, and clasped Jeffrey's hand with a pretty tight grip. 
"Ahh it's the room on the right."

Jeffrey could not believe the contrast between Sandra and Eva. Sandra was a diffident 
young lady, who really depended on others. After all he couldn't stand her, she had no 
personality and was basically a high maintenance flat mate. They had argued a lot in 
the past, at times he had made her cry, but they stayed together out of necessity really, 
neither could afford to move out. One of the reasons she had gone away for the 
weekend was to get away from him. 

Eva, on the other hand, seemed confident and in a lot better shape than her sister. 
Jeffrey could not make out what she looked like under that tracksuit, but she was 
definitely in better shape than her sister. Both girls were about 5' 6" and had dirty 
blonde hair. Eva's was straight and shoulder length, while Sandra' was longer and 
curly. Eva had a skinner face, high cheekbones and a small pudgy nose, which 
seemed to point upward. Sandra had a chubby face, and blue eyes, eyes, which 
seemed weary and suspicious. Other than being sisters they did not seem to have 
anything else in common.

Now, Jeffrey was in his late twenties, stood about 5'9", had short black hair, and a 
radiant smile, which girls loved. The thing about Jeffrey was that he did not feel or 
understand the effect he had on women, which many of them actually appreciated. He 
himself was not in great shape; he was an average young man. He too was a bit on the 
chubby side, like his flat mate.

Generally speaking he was a nice guy, but for some reason Sandra had rubbed him the 
wrong way. He had a feeling that Eva knew about the way he treated her sister, but 
was hoping it would not come up.

Well, his girlfriend was planning on coming over about 8, but since Eva was here he 
decide that it would be best for the two of them to go out for the night, and then make 
there way back, when the time was right. 

As he was about to leave he knocked on Eva's door, Eva had not left the room since 
she arrived, "Hey, I'm going out for the night, do you need anything?"

"No, I'll be fine, I need to rest up, and we can chat tomorrow."

"Sounds good, bye!"

Jeffrey and Samantha, his girlfriend of six months, went out and had a blast, just as 
Jeffrey planned, then they headed home and had a night filled with hot steamy sex. 
The next morning the young couple got out of bed and headed to the kitchen, 
Samantha, in one of Jeffrey's oversized t-shirts, and Jeffrey in his boxer shorts, hand 
in hand, fondling and kissing each other. 

As they entered the kitchen, Jeffrey suddenly remembered that Eva was staying in his 
apartment and felt uncomfortable at seeing her preparing breakfast in the kitchen.

Jeffrey, took one look at Eva, but simply had a hard time registering the sight in front 
of him. Eva had her back turned, most probably washing something in the sink. She 
was wearing blue jeans, and a sleeveless yellow turtleneck. What surprised Jeffrey the 
most, was this young girl's upper body.   She had broad well-rounded shoulders, a 
broad looking back, and muscular arms, arms that were characteristic of a competitive 
gymnast, who tended to spend a decent amount of time in the gym.

"Who is that?" Samantha shockingly let out.

Eva turned around and looked at the couple in front of her, with a mischievous smile, 
damn I though he was in better shape…hah and just as I expected a cute little anorexic 
girlfriend, not even cute, black hair, beady eyes, and sunk in cheeks, what a site, she 
thought.

"You didn't tell me your girlfriend was coming over!" Eva sarcastically said

"I'm Sandra's sister, I'll be staying awhile!" She mockingly said as she glanced at 
Jeffrey.

"Sheesh Jeffrey, put a shirt on, before that gut of yours spills out!" Eva bellowed, then 
began laughing loudly.

"Hey.. watch your mouth young lady!… I'm not"

Eva ignored him and simply walked up to Samantha, "How long have you been going 
out with Jeffrey? You look like a girl that needs a lot of attention and care.  Jeffrey 
can barely take care of himself, look at him" 

Samantha let out a giggle to Jeffrey's dismay. 

Jeffrey stormed out of the kitchen and went to put on a t-shirt, he was embarrassed 
and well, a bit intimidated.

As he re-entered the kitchen he noticed Eva sitting next to his girlfriend, slowly 
flexing and unflexing her bicep. Wow he thought, as he saw a well-defined baseball 
shaped bicep form, "Jeffrey, why don't you feel her arms, damn their awesome!" 
Samantha blurted out without taking her eyes off Eva's biceps.

"Actually, if you know what's good for you, you'd stay where you are!" Eva sternly 
said.

"What the hell is going on!… I won." Before he could finish Samantha jumped up 
and covered her boyfriend's mouth with her small tender hand. Then she whispered in 
his ear, "Honey, I know this is a bit embarrassing for you, but trust me this girl can 
whoop your ass….be nice…. Its for your own good."

Jeffrey looked at Eva's flexed arm, then at her smiling face, then back to her arm, and 
even though he knew this girl was shorter than him and he most probably outweighed 
her by 30 to 40 pounds, she looked a lot stronger than him, her arms were bigger than 
his and obviously thicker and more defined. On top of that, she looked tough and 
confident, two attributes he lacked.

So he grumpily sat down at the breakfast table and stared ahead, "Good choice 
Jeffrey, glad Samantha talked some sense into you." Eva assertively said.

Then she roughly poked Jeffrey in the chest with her index finger, "There's something 
we need to discuss, but let's leave it for later, now let's have some breakfast!" 
 
Jeffrey felt uneasy throughout breakfast. He could not take his eyes off of Eva's 
dancing biceps, which seemed to bulge every time she lifted her spoon. He remained 
quiet while the two girls made small talk. After they finished they all remained seated. 
Eventually, Eva turned to Jeffrey, "You know, I've been sticking up for my sister for 
as long as I can remember and you have been giving her a hard time, I really don't 
like it when my sister calls in the middle of the night crying because you've been 
calling her names and giving her a hard time."

"But…"

"SHUTUP… I'm not done talking yet!" She shouted in an intimidating tone. 

"My question to you is why?"

Jeffrey could not answer her question and just stared at her. He honestly had no idea 
why he treated Sandra badly. It may have been because she was weak. He had never 
treated anyone as horribly as he treated Sandra, it must've been some sort of comfort 
for him, a way of taking out his frustrations, he was simply confused.

"Thought so!" Eva angrily stated. Then she firmly grabbed Jeffrey's wrist, and 
roughly squeezed it. Jeffrey winced in pain and tried to loosen her grip with his free 
hand, but Eva quickly grabbed his other wrist, with her other hand and began 
squeezing. Next, Eva repeatedly slapped Jeffrey across the face with both of his hands 
as he helplessly tried to stop her. She, then pulled him up, released her hold and 
roughly shoved him; he stumbled back a bit and looked at her with a fearful 
expression, "Why don't you try calling me names?" She growled.

She then shoved him roughly into the wall. Eva looked into his scared face and felt a 
bit sorry for him. After all, she did not like getting into fights, but she had to for her 
sister's sake. She felt responsible for her sister and the only time she ever fought 
someone was for her sister.

She wanted this confrontation to end here. She was hoping Jeffrey would realize that 
he had no chance and would let it go for now. She was planning on slowly changing 
his attitude, but without having to send him to the hospital or rearranging his rather 
cute face she thought.

Jeffrey did not make a move; he stood there timidly looking at Eva. "Now get out of 
my face before I decide to get serious!"

Jeffrey quickly walked towards his room without turning back. He collapsed on his 
bed, took in a deep breath and thanked the lord that things didn't get out of hand.

A few hours later Jeffrey emerged from his room. He looked around the apartment, 
but could not spot his girlfriend, only Eva lazily watching TV. "Eva, where's 
Samantha?"

"She's taking a nap… don't wake her."

"But we are going out to dinner tonight."

"No, Samantha is staying in tonight."

Jeffrey just stood there, not knowing what to say or do.

"Do you have a problem with that!" Eva firmly said.

Well, Jeffrey, was even feeling smaller than he had earlier, so he just quickly got 
dressed and left the apartment. He wanted to forget about what had happened so he 
decided to get tanked, with a few of his friends.

Around 1 am Jeffrey stumbled home. He quietly opened the door to his apartment, but 
as he looked in he saw Samantha and Eva cuddling on the couch. Eva was no longer 
wearing a turtleneck and jeans, but she was actually in a tank top and panties. Her 
body was fully exposed, those firm and hard curves were now fully exposed and 
oozing with power.

His girlfriend was only wearing a g-string, which exposed her skinny yet appealing 
form.

The two girls did not even look up at Jeffrey. Samantha's head was comfortably 
resting on Eva's strong and protective shoulder. While Eva's hand was protectively 
caressing Samantha's abs and her other hand was seductively playing with 
Samantha's hair.

Samantha's attention was fully focused on Eva's arms, as she coquettishly ran her 
hands up and down her curvaceous tricep and thick forearm.

Jeffrey was furious, this bitch, comes in and takes over his apartment and now his 
girlfriend, this had to stop.

"Take your hands of her… you bitch!"

Eva suddenly stood up and turned around to face Jeffrey, but just as she turned around 
his shoulder connected with her midsection sending both of them crashing to the 
floor. Jeffrey landed on top and furiously began swinging his fists towards Eva's face, 
but she quickly managed to block most of his punches with her raised forearms. In 
any case, Jeffrey managed to land a wild punch on her temple, while another grazed 
the side of her head.

Unfortunately for Jeffrey, well, his body was perfectly positioned between Eva's steel 
like thighs, as soon as she had gained her composure; she quickly wrapped her thighs 
around his midsection sending him into a fit of unyielding pain, but before he could 
let out a scream, she deftly wrapped her arms around his head, his face being roughly 
planted into her bulging bicep. 

Eva was damn angry, so she powerfully squeezed Jeffrey's body. His legs and arms 
helplessly flailed in the air.

Samantha was looking at this spectacle enthusiastically. The moment she saw Eva she 
could not stop thinking about her. She had simply melted at the sight of the strong 
confident lass. It was as if a power from up above had taken a hold of her. All she 
wanted to do was be with this young powerful beauty. Feelings for her boyfriend had 
instantly disappeared. She had either fallen victim to a strong, yet, newly surfacing 
desire, or her boyfriend had not meant that much to her. It was probably a 
combination of both, but the former playing a stronger role, simply pulling her with 
greater strength.

As she watched her boyfriend's efforts quickly waning and his whimpers becoming 
clearer, she could not help realize that she had no sympathy for him, she was fixated 
on Eva's body, her bulging arms as they held Jeffrey's head captive and her muscular 
thighs turning his mid section to complete mush. Then she gazed at Eva's face and 
could not sense weariness, only determination.  

Samantha's animalistic desires were taking over, there was no room for sympathy, she 
felt guilt, but that feeling was overrun by a surging desire, which was slowly melting 
her away.

Eva released her grip and pushed Jeffrey's limp body off of her. She slowly stood up 
and looked down at his fearfully shaking body. She did not say a word, but instead 
listened to his pain filled whimpers. Then she evenly said, "So is that all you got 
boy?"

Eva watched as Jeffrey struggled to his feet, at least he's got some guts, she thought.

Jeffrey, on the other hand, had no idea what he was doing, he just knew that he 
couldn't stay down, this girl was too much for him, but he had to fight back.

As he got to his feet, he lunged at her, but she quickly put him in a half nelson and 
tossed him to the ground.

This time and to her amazement he got up pretty quickly and swung his fist at her. 
She quickly avoided his effort and roughly powered her fist into his exposed gut, 
instantly, sending him to the ground. Now, he was simply trying to catch his breath, 
he felt like vomiting and crying, but he did not have long to think as her foot began 
grinding his face into the carpet. 

She then stepped back and looked at him, tears slowly dripping down his face.

She just turned around and looked at Samantha, who began quietly clapping as she 
ecstatically gazed up at her pumped up lover. Eva went into a few poses, showing off 
her muscles to Samantha, but Samantha could no longer lustfully stare at Eva's 
magnificence, she had to feel Eva so she jumped up into Eva's arms, Eva tightly 
hugged her and then carried her off to bed.

As the door closed behind the two girls, Jeffrey slowly and agonizingly tried to make 
his way to his room, but before he could stand up, Eva came towards him. She 
roughly grabbed him by the collar with both hands and then slammed his torso against 
the wall. "You only have yourself to blame for what happened today! You better get 
some sleep because tomorrow you have a lot of ass kissing to do, to me and my 
sister." 
She then loosened her grip as he tearfully and slowly slipped to the floor.


The End