by Leonard Thrope
(What follows is
an expanded re-write of Gribble's "Dream Machine," with all due credit for the
characters, situations, and turns of phrase.
Contains explicit sex, so the usual caveats apply. If you ain't 18, beat it, Jack.)
first quad: a dream come true
one-one
It started out simply enough, at least on the
surface. He had a machine, a machine
that looked like a camcorder, only it didn't seem good for making tapes. When he pointed it at his wife and pressed
the record button, a bright, mottled beam shot out from the lens, striking her
in the abdomen. Under its prodding, her
body began to grow, her shirt and jeans first bulging and then splitting,
followed by her bra and panties. Her
fleshy, unassuming middle-aged physique steadily hardened and swelled into that
of an athlete, then a superwoman, then a goddess, and David's first thought
upon waking that this dream must have been borne of exaggerated longing: on that same day Linda had bailed out of the
fitness regimen he'd set up for her, claiming she was too tired, but really
just depressed and discouraged by her lack of results. As he pointed out, she'd only been at it for
two weeks, and couldn't expect to see visible results for a couple months or
so; but she didn't want to hear it. The
whole reason he'd set up the program was that she was always complaining of how
fat and unattractive she felt, and anyway the thought of getting her as in
shape as he was had excited him a little.
But she didn't want to, and it wasn't like he could handcuff her to
their Airdyne.
"It's
just so much time, so much effort," Linda complained when he pressed her, her
short temper starting to rise to the surface (though it never really went
far). She wasn't really obese or
anything, just getting plump and saggy with the onset of middle age. And her face, fair skin and blue eyes framed
by short red hair, was still perfectly attractive, David thought. "I just wish there was some way to - I don't
know - push a button, or something, and get into shape." She'd gone on to talk about getting
liposuction, but David only listened with half an ear. He made decent money at Hookey's Appliance
Repair, but not enough to blithely throw down several grand on such a tawdry
shortcut. And anyway he kept thinking
about that phrase: push a button and get into shape.
The idea was silly, of course.
And even if it hadn't been, well, he was no inventor. He knew how to fix VCRs, washing machines,
and even those little laser pointers easily enough, but what she'd implied was
thoroughly beyond him. He told himself
this as he settled beside her in bed that night, thinking the matter
closed. If there's one thing you need to be thinking about right now, he
told himself, it's how to persuade her to
get back into that gym. He closed
his eyes, and then sometime in the wee hours of the morning he'd had his
strange little dream.
Had
David been the mystical type, he might've been hesitant to pass off what he'd
experienced as simply a dream. It'd
been extraordinarily vivid, for one thing, more like he'd been awake and
watching a movie than lost in the muddled incoherence of sleep. For another, the feelings of exaltation he'd
felt while watching his wife grow were so intense that, had he been awake, he
surely would have wept.
And for a third, there had
been the dream's strange ending. As
though Linda's changing body could no longer contain the force which was
filling it, there had been an explosion.
Afterward, David had seen a circuit, jumping out at him like something
in that Captain EO movie he'd seen at
Disneyland. He had seen it very
clearly, and it seemed to hang before his eyes even when he woke up. He dismissed it, though, as he always
dismissed the scant, nonsensical memories he took from his dreams. In the circuit's case, it had such alien
contouring that it nearly hurt his mind to consider it, and he was sure that if
he actually constructed such a thing it would do nothing.
It could have ended there,
but he had a similar dream the next night, then the next, and so on for more
than a week. The sequence of Linda's
growth changed every night: different
clothes, different proportioning, different sizes when the beam finally cut
out. In some of the dreams the story
continued further. There were some in
which she pulled him up and cradled him tenderly in her sinewy arms, pressing
her massive breasts into his face.
There were others in which she went berserk, throwing furniture through
the ceiling and bashing gaping holes into the walls. Sometimes, the next morning, the crotch of his boxer shorts was
sticky, like he'd had a wet dream, while other times his cheeks were moist,
like he'd been crying. But the
(vision)
dream always ended with the
explosion, and then the circuit rotating against a black background, looking
somehow tantalizing, like a carrot dangling on a string. And the image of the circuit would remain
lodged in his brain like a piece of corn caught between two teeth. Finally, he did the only thing he could think
of to get it out of there: he went into
his workshop and he built it.
He
hoped that would be the end of it, but the next night he had the same dream
over again. Only, this time at the end,
there was a new, equally alien component, along with an image of it connecting
with the first. David did nothing about
it, hoping that this new dream was nothing more than a sort of a subconscious
aftershock. But when it recurred two
nights in a row, he gave up and built the new component.
By
now David had a pretty good idea what he was in for, and he wasn't
disappointed. That night Linda burst
her way out of a cable-knit sweater and slacks, then began using her bare hands
to crush David's high school baseball trophies into paste. After the explosion he saw a third
component, no more sensical than the first two. The following afternoon, he built it.
Once
David had resigned himself to what was happening'he was being shown how to
build the machine that made his wife grow, of course'he became rather cheerful
about the whole thing. He was a
restless yet patient man by nature, prone to slow, meticulous hobbies like
model airplanes, cooking, and gardening.
Also, it diverted attention from his increasingly ragged relationship
with Linda herself. They'd gotten into
a fight about the liposuction, which, money aside, David couldn't help but see
as the cheater's way out. Linda had
become increasingly moody and despondent since her failure at adhering to his
fitness regimen, and she spent most of her time after work and on the weekends
watching TV, more often than not with an open package of Oreo cookies at her
feet and a globe of cabernet in her hand.
They never had sex, but then that wasn't exactly a big change from the
last five years or so. That had been
part of the reason that David had tried to get her into the gym in the first
place, but now his efforts seemed to have killed their passion for good. Worse, even their two children had begun to
pick up on the distance between them, and it was making them nervous.
Weeks
slipped by, accumulated into months, and the strange machine from David's dream
slowly took shape. It was indeed
filling out to the size of a camcorder, and when David grabbed an old camcorder
shell that'd been kicking around the shelves of his workshop for comparison, he
wasn't surprised to find that the budding device would fit inside nicely.
Nearly
four months after he'd built that first circuit, the device was, he believed,
completed. For the first time since the
original dream, there was no recurrence.
In fact, as far as he could remember, he hadn't dreamed anything at all
that night, just spent it drifting through a sort of dark blankness, as though
his subconscious mind had exhausted itself and had nothing more to show him.
The thing was done, he
guessed. But, in what seemed perfectly
ironic to him, Linda wasn't around to see it.
She was visiting her sister in Stanton, in fact; and, thinking about it,
David admitted that that was probably in large part his fault. He'd been too preoccupied to even argue with
her for the last few months, too obsessed with building the device and
wondering how it might work, and what it might actually do. Sitting on the bench in his workshop, a
hollow feeling manifesting itself in his belly, David realized that she was
probably getting ready to file a separation, if not an outright divorce. He'd been hoping that when their kids went
off to camp for a week, he'd have his chance to work things out with her; but
Linda had left for the same period, as though she couldn't bear to be in the
house alone with him. Several moments
of dark panic swept through him, during which he promised himself that when she
came back he'd find some way to make it all up to her. But then his pragmatic side reasserted
itself, and he realized that he wouldn't see her for another week, and that in
the meantime he had this device, just aching to be tested.
David
stood up, took the device from his worktable, and screwed it onto a tripod he'd
set up in the middle of the room. This
room also doubled as his home gym, and his bench and weight plates were pushed
to the side. He aimed the lens at a
bare cinderblock wall. Even if
something came out of the lens, which he couldn't quite bring himself to
believe, he supposed the wall would contain it.
Taking
a deep breath, David pushed the button.
Instantly the device made a chirping, burbling sound, and all the lights
dimmed. A moment later some kind of
beam shot out from the lens and struck the wall. David gasped in surprise.
The beam wasn't nearly as thick as, say, a flashlight beam, but at the
same time it was too fat and bright to be a laser. Even stranger, it cycled through all sorts of different colors,
gold to magenta to aquamarine, as though it couldn't make up its mind. After perhaps half a minute, the beam shut
off of its own accord, and the device was silent again.
Moving
slowly, his heart pounding so hard it felt on the verge of bounding up into his
throat and choking him, David moved toward the wall, Cautiously, he rubbed his fingertips over the place where the
beam had struck. But there was nothing,
no heat, no marks. He snorted at the
anticlimax and then smiled ruefully at his own tension. Was it nothing more than a glorified
lightshow? "No heat, though," he mused
aloud. "Guess there's nothing it could do to me that it didn't do to that
wall." Not quite sure if he really
believed this, but making himself move before any second thoughts could creep
in, David stood in front of it, reached over, and hit the record button again. The machine made its high-pitched noise and
then emitted the psychedelic beam of light, just as before, this time striking
David in the abdomen, just as it had done to Linda in all those dreams. He noticed again that all the other lights
got dim, as though the machine were drawing power from them, though that should
have been impossible because it wasn't plugged in to anything. Nothing else happened. David twisted around and was relieved to see
that, at the very least, the beam wasn't passing through him, like the particle beams he'd read about in Discover. But it did nothing more than cycle through its kaleidoscope of
colors. David felt his hands and arms
to make sure that nothing was growing, disappointed. Then the beam shut off.
"Well,
that's that," David said, frowning at the camcorder shell. After all that, all it did was flash some
pretty lights. "So much for my career
as an inventor." He could imagine a
dance club being interested in such a device, but not anyone else. Then he frowned, and one hand came up to
knead his chin. "Unless -" His frown became more pensive as his hand
continued to stroke. "Unless it only
works on women -"
David
had told no one about what he'd been up to the past four months'not Linda, not
his coworkers, not even his friends. If
he told them he couldn't stop dreaming about changing his wife into an
unstoppable titan, well, they'd all think that was pretty funny, wouldn't
they? But if he went on to say that
he'd been steadily constructing the device that could do such a thing? At that point, his friends might wonder about
their friendship with him, and his coworkers might start talking about him
behind his back, might even start suggesting that he get some kind of
help. Professional help. David
believed that psychiatrists were just as big a cop-out as cosmetic surgeons,
and so he'd kept the whole thing to himself.
Even to Linda, to whom he'd planned to show the finished product, he'd
remained vague when she asked what he was up to, and he'd kept the door to his
workshop locked while he was away. He
didn't know why. Maybe, he told himself
now, he secretly believed he was crazy,
and was just trying to keep anyone else from catching on.
David
shook himself from his reverie. Linda
wouldn't be back for another week, but in the meantime there was someone else
he could trust with this, someone who might even consent to the next logical
test. Moving decisively'he was always
quick to act when he'd made up his mind about something'he went out of the
workshop, grabbed his coat and keys, and went out.
one-two
In truth, the strange device wasn't the only thing
that had been occupying David's attention during the past few months and
keeping him aloof from Linda. There was
something else that kept him busy, something he took even greater pains to
conceal from Linda than the device:
Susan.
David
first met Susan Blake at Linda's office Christmas party two years ago. He saw her again six months later at his
gym, where she'd gotten a membership, and they became casual acquaintances,
chatting amiably when they ran into each other and spotting each other if one
happened to do the bench press while the other one was near. David found her attractive'even more
attractive than Linda, though he didn't admit this to himself, not at first'but
their relationship remained innocent.
Then came the following year's Christmas party at Linda and Susan's
office, and the five minutes of drunken kissing and groping in the broom
closet. It should have ended there, and
afterward David was so sick with guilt that he didn't set foot in the gym for
months. Then, the day he went back,
Susan was there, almost as though she'd been waiting for him all that
time. She mentioned that her divorce
from her husband had been finalized, and while she didn't come right out and
say it, she made it clear from her body language and her steamy glances that
she wanted to continue what they'd started in the broom closet. To David, who hadn't had a decent sexual
encounter with Linda in longer than he could remember, this now seemed like a
damned good idea.
Susan
was only a couple years younger than Linda, and despite the time she put in at
the gym only a little bit trimmer. What
attracted David was that Susan shared his joie
de vivre, while Linda spent her time mainly sitting around and moping about
her weight and snapping at David if he so much as looked at her the wrong
way. He felt alive around Susan, while
being around Linda only made him feel frustrated and confused. And so it had gone.
Now
the door to David's house reopened, and Susan stepped inside, wearing a hooded
nylon jacket, black lycra shorts and white running shoes'she'd been on her way
to the gym when David had pulled up to her house. David followed her into the living room, regarding her bemusedly
as she looked around. "Very nice," she
said. David stepped up behind her, and
then unexpectedly she turned, dropped her hand on his chest, and gave him an
affectionate peck on the mouth. David
found himself a little angry at the gesture:
it was as though she were asserting some sort of claim over him that he
hadn't granted, as though she intended this to be not her only visit to this
house but just her first. David loved
Susan, in a way; but he saw their affair as essentially within the sphere of
friendship, only marginally emotional.
No matter how distant he had grown from Linda, she was still the one he
intended to get old with.
Susan
might have read this on his face, except she had already turned and was heading
for the kitchen. David shook off his
anger and followed her. "It's in here,"
he said in what he hoped was a businesslike tone, moving ahead of her and
flicking on lights as he headed toward the back of the house. Susan caught his hand as she followed him,
and in this he didn't hesitate to indulge her; she was, after all, in a sort of
hostile territory. Certainly, if Linda
should suddenly show up, there would be a great deal of hostility.
They
came to the workshop. Even to David,
the device didn't look too impressive, sitting there in the center of the
room: just a camcorder that had for
some reason been left pointed at a wall.
"Do you really think it'll work?" Susan asked, looking doubtfully at the
little thing on top of the tripod.
David
considered the question, then blew out a noisy breath. "No.
I mean, it didn't do anything to me.
But -"
"But
we won't know unless we try," Susan finished, giving him a smile that said she
was game, if only for his sake. "I
guess I should take this off," she said, and then removed the jacket. Underneath she was wearing a gray cotton
sports bra with a small Nike swoosh at one side. Her breasts were small but firm, with randy little nubs where the
nipples poked through the cotton, and seeing them made David's cock stir a
little in anticipation'whether of sleeping with her later or of what the beam
might do to her, he didn't think to ask himself.
"Should'" Susan lowered her eyelids slyly. "Should I take off everything, do you
think?"
David's
cock swelled still larger as he remembered all the times he'd seen his wife
grow over the past months: her tits
bursting through T-shirts, through sweatshirts, through one-piece
swimsuits. "No," he decided at
length. "Clothes didn't seem to affect
it in the dream. And it was the dreams
that showed me how to make it in the first place, so -"
"Right,"
Susan said, taking a place before the wall.
"Besides, if I hulk out enough, I won't fit in these clothes
anyway." She giggled to show that this
was a joke. She hadn't laughed when
David had explained his dreams to her on the way over in the car'in fact, she'd
seemed rather tickled about the notion that she could become a hardbody at the
push of a button, probably the same way Linda would've been in her place'but
nevertheless it was clear that she was now taking this even less seriously than
he was. He'd push the button, the light
would shine on her for a while, they'd have a good laugh when nothing happened,
and then maybe they'd have sex in David's bed.
This thought occurred to David, and he knew that she was thinking it too,
and again it made him a little mad. He
pushed it away, coming to stand behind the device. "Ready?" he asked.
"Ready
when you are, Dr. Frankenstein," she said with a playful lilt, raising one
eyebrow and then breaking into a smile again.
David
hesitated a moment longer, then pushed the record button. The beam filled the space between the
device's lens and Susan's abdomen, seeming to leech the color out of everything
else with its brilliance. At once the
smile dropped from Susan's face; she closed her eyes, tilted her head back, and
sucked in a breath, as though she were in sudden pain - or sudden ecstasy. David reached down, meaning to cut the
experiment short by knocking the device aside.
He pushed it, but the beam'which had stopped shifting colors and settled
on a gold color, similar to an amber traffic light'had become jagged and
shifting, like a continuous stream of lightning, and even with the device aimed
elsewhere its output arced and remained linked to Susan. David spun the tripod completely around, so
that the device was aimed at him, but the golden stream just curved back around
and continued pouring into Susan's abdomen.
Susan
moaned loudly, making David momentarily forget his struggles with the
machine. Then he forgot them entirely
when he realized what was happening to her.
Her
skin was emitting a neon-yellow glow, the same color as the stream. She wasn't growing, not the way his wife had
in the dreams. But her body, not
unattractive to begin with, was slowly reshaping itself into something else,
something that became more awesome with each passing second. David could do no more than watch, his mouth
very dry, his cock very hard, watching her change in the yellow light. It was actually happening, just as it had
happened in dreams that sometimes made him ejaculate, and sometimes made him
cry, and sometimes made him do both. He
was mesmerized.
Just
as before, the device shut itself off after a minute, and the workshop's
fluorescent lights came back up to their normal illumination. David was still staring at the woman who now
lowered her head and blinked her eyes as though not quite sure where she was,
or who she was. The woman stood where Susan had been
standing, was wearing what Susan had been wearing, but David still couldn't
quite think of her as Susan. Susan's
grown daughter, maybe. But Susan
herself? That woman had been his age,
with faint lines of care carved into her face and middle age's first inevitable
fat deposits saddling her butt and thighs.
This new woman had the callow, vibrant face of a twenty-year-old, and
the body of an aerobics instructor, her tawny limbs smooth as porcelain, pliant
as rubber. Her tits filled her sports
bra nearly to bursting, yet didn't seem to need a bra at all, while her hips
and ass did erotic things to her lycra running shorts. And speaking of rubber, that's what David's
heart felt like, a solid rubber ball hurled into a small room and left to
ricochet crazily from surface to surface.
He wondered that he didn't just have a heart attack, so crazy was that
beating.
"What'?" Susan continued to blink uncertainly,
running her hands over her breasts and her flat, hard stomach but still not
actually looking down at herself. Even
her voice was different, higher and more delicate, the voice of a girl barely
on the cusp on adulthood. "What
happened?"
David
worked his jaw for a few moments, but his throat produced nothing in the way of
sound. Eventually he settled for
motioning toward the full-length mirror on one wall. Susan caught the movement and went to look.
"Oh
my God!" Susan squealed in her new
high-pitched voice, pressing her hands to her mouth, then lowering them to
reveal a huge, disbelieving smile.
"Look what happened to me! Just
look!" Dave hardly needed to be told;
he couldn't stop looking at her, as a
matter of fact. He watched as she ran
her hands eagerly up and down her new body, stroked and poked her new face, and
turned to study herself from every side and angle. Eventually she stripped off the sports bra'David had seen her
without it before, of course, but by this point Susan was hardly even aware of
his presence. As he'd suspected, her
tits didn't need support at all. They
were big, round, perfectly firm, and just begging to be squeezed and
sucked. The nipples were bigger and
darker, and the aureoles were swollen outward.
After
about ten minutes of this, Susan's shock began to wear off, and David watched
her start to get used to herself, striking a series of flirty poses to her
reflection. David was still in shock,
still couldn't conceive of how sweet Susan had been transformed into a creature
that would make even one of those big-time Hollywood hunks like Tom Cruise or
Brad Pitt turn into a trembling, tongue-tied buffoon. He couldn't believe that such a creature was standing in his
house, making kissy-faces into his mirror.
He was still trying to process everything when she finally tore herself
away from the mirror and came striding toward him with a sultry expression, her
tits making a mind-boggling bounce over her ribs with each step she took. She maintained her sly look until she was
about two feet away from him, and then it split apart into a silly grin and she
jumped against him, putting all of her new strength into a tight hug. "Oh David, thank-you thank-you thank-you," she said into his ear. David couldn't embrace her at first'not such
a divine creature as this, that would've been like trying to cop a feel on the
Venus de Milo'but eventually he managed to put his hands on her waist and lower
back. Her flesh was every bit as smooth
and springy as it looked.
Eventually
Susan pulled away and stood before him, looking up with her sly, fetching
young-adult's eyes. "I wish I could
find some way to repay you," she said with exaggerated coquettishness, again
feeling her way into the stratospheric level of beauty of which she now found
herself in possession. Her bee-stung
lips pursed slightly, not quite unconsciously.
"I mean, I could never repay you for this, but -" She looked down meaningfully, to where David's
cock had swollen like a new limb under his jeans. "There is something I
can do, isn't there?" Susan asked, taking his feverish hands into her own. David said nothing, only allowed himself to
be led as they went toward his bedroom.
The
knowledge that Susan wanted to have sex in the bed he shared with Linda had
made David angry earlier; now it only filled him with relief. And, of course, a horniness so profound it
was more like a drug. Even if Linda had
been right there in the room with them, David knew, he wouldn't have been able
to keep himself off of Susan. They both
stripped down, he joined her in exploring every contour and cranny of her new
body, and then he fucked her, longer and harder than he'd ever fucked anyone in
his life. Whether because of his own
hypererotic state of arousal, or perhaps some new prowess on Susan's part,
thrusting with her gave him mind-bending levels of pleasure yet never seemed
push him to the brink. It seemed to
take him upward of an hour to come the first time, and almost twice that long
the second. And yet each time he came
he was almost instantly ready to go again, like a thirteen-year-old with a
stack of Hustlers and a bottle of
hand lotion. Susan, for her part, did
him with her hands, her mouth, her tits, her twat, her butt'she seemed every
bit as eager and aroused and insatiable as he did. When he finally drove her home, early the following morning,
David wasn't in the least bit tired, and Susan seemed perfectly fresh as
well. "Thank you David," she said for
what may have been the hundredth time, after treating him to one last lingering
kiss on her porch. He was still staring
at her'he had, in fact, yet to take his eyes off her since the transformation,
and it was nothing less than miracle that he'd managed to drive her home
without running them off the road'and he wondered seriously if he would ever
see her again. She would, he thought,
be a fool not to go straight down to the financial district first thing tomorrow
and start collecting sugar daddies. After
he returned home, however, he began to relax.
Neither of them knew how long the machine's effects would last, and she
would surely want access to the machine again should it start to wear off. And besides, it wasn't as if David didn't
have leverage of his own. He had the
machine, and he had his wife.
At
this thought, David blinked in sudden astonishment'he'd quite literally
forgotten about Linda. He crossed
quickly to the fireplace and took the studio portrait of her from the mantle,
studying her smiling image as if for the first time. "I'I don't need Susan at all," he said to the empty room. "She was just -" He trailed off, staring at the photo, imagining what his wife
would look like after the machine had had its way with her. "Just a trial run," he finished. He realized how cruel that sounded, but he
didn't much care. He was seized with a
strong urge to call Linda at her sister's house and tell her to come home right
away, that there'd been some kind of emergency - maybe even something involving
the kids - but then he shrugged it off.
He could wait a week. He set the
photo back on the mantle and left the room, turning off the light as he went. His dick was sore as hell, but he thought he
might jerk off once before he went to sleep.
He thought again of Linda's face with Susan's body beneath it as he
veered into the bathroom to get the Jergens and grinned in the darkness. Maybe more than once.
one-three
Susan's thoughts paralleled David's as she entered
her house that night: that she could do
no better than to start collecting a harem of young, handsome men with
well-padded bank accounts. She'd always
been fairly modest about her looks, but, as for what she'd seen in the mirror,
its implications were just as clear to her as they'd been to David. Her level of beauty was something akin to a
steamroller: even the most devoted,
jaded, or self-possessed men would be bowled over at the sight of her, their
backbones crushed to powder, their wits stripped away. They'd become simpering retards around her,
willing to do anything'anything, she
reiterated to herself with a giddy sense of anticipation'to gain her favor, if
only for a few blissful moments. If
she'd needed any proof of that, she'd found it in David's behavior. He'd always been attracted to her, of
course, but in a rigidly compartmentalized way. After her transformation, however, his compartment had burst, and
what he had fed from had turned around and begun feeding from him. He'd become her toy'him, who'd invented the
blessed thing, and was the only one in the world who'd know the bizarre
mechanics behind the Venusian face and body she now possessed, had still been
utterly helpless to resist her, helpless as any hungry infant faced with a
swollen teat. Susan experienced sudden
panic when she realized that it wouldn't be that way forever, that David would
waste little time in turning Linda into a goddess of her own when she returned
at the end of the week. For one wild
moment she was ready to jump into her car, drive back to David's house, and try
to break in and steal the machine. With
some difficulty she dismissed the impulse, which seemed silly the more she
considered it. So what if there was
another Venus in the city? And even if
David came to mass-market the machine, populating the planet with curvy fitness
goddesses'what then? Would it diminish
her own beauty? For now, she decided,
she was in possession of something special, and she may as well just be
grateful and make the most of it.
She
walked down the hall, pausing outside her daughter's bedroom door, which was
open a crack. Slow, sibilant breathing
could be heard inside. Susan had a new
impulse, to go in, flip on the light, and get it over with. Janey, Susan believed, wouldn't think her
mom was a stranger'kids were harder to fool that way, more imaginative and less
susceptible to the lazy assumptions of the adult world'but it would still
require some careful explaining.
Further, Susan began to toy with the idea that she would have to quit
her job, maybe even abandon all of her friends. How would she explain what had happened to her? Make-up?
A new fitness regimen? Even
claims of radical plastic surgery wouldn't be able to sate the disbelief she
would engender. They'd all think that
she had to be a different person entirely, Susan's younger sister maybe. The fact that she would possess all of
Susan's knowledge and memories would only strike them as spooky.
Instead
of going into Janey's room, Susan turned in the opposite direction and went
into the bathroom. She shut the door
behind her, flipped on the light, and turned toward the mirror. The image there, and the accompanying
disbelief, struck her afresh. Even she hadn't come to terms with what had
happened, it seemed. She stripped out
of her clothes and again set about accustoming herself to what she saw: the smooth, pliant, clear-eyed face, the
tits that she would have taken for implants if she'd seen them on someone else,
the tiny waist and the powerful, rounded arch of her ass beneath. She was there for another three hours,
posing and flirting, before she could finally bring herself to go to bed.
one-four
Actually, at first, there was only one man Susan
wanted to seduce. She didn't want him
for his own sake; she'd found him exciting once upon a time, with his roguish
mustache and chiseled features and burly body, but now he was merely prosaic to
her. But she still intended to seduce
him. She thought of it as a payment, of
sorts. Revenge, really.
This
man was Jim Reynolds, owner of the fitness club of which Susan and David were
members. Jim had been the one to go
over the contracts with Susan when she first joined, and despite the wedding
ring on his finger, and despite the fact that Susan herself was still technically
married at that point, she'd been quite fetched. She flirted with him at every opportunity her first few weeks at
the club, and he flirted back, and everything went nicely until one day while
she was chatting with him and making cow eyes at him there was a violent
throat-clearing behind her and Susan straightened guiltily as though someone
had grabbed her by the scruff of her neck.
She saw that Jim was now looking over her shoulder, and he had a worried
expression as he did it. She turned
around.
There
was a woman standing there, as deeply tanned as Jim and nearly as tall. She had long, raven-black hair and dark-blue
eyes. She wasn't pretty, not
anymore'constant exposure to the sun had turned her face into a brittle,
gestaltless mosaic of lines and planes, helped along by the strained
expressions she made each time she went for a new maximum on the bench press,
clean-and-jerk, or barbell squat'but her body was truly something to
behold. Not much in the way of
breasts'her black lycra top left little doubt of that'but her upper arms and
thighs, even relaxed, seemed immense, and her shoulders had striations like the
grooves of a pumpkin.
For
a moment Susan fully expected the huge woman to take a swing at her, but of
course that didn't happen. Instead, the
woman frostily introduced herself as Amy Reynolds, and made some strained
small-talk. She didn't need to voice
any threats; her eyes did that for her.
Stay away from him, slut, the
look on Amy's face had said. The next time I catch you two together,
you're losing teeth. And when I hit
you, I'll do it with a smile.
After
that, Susan had never talked with Jim again, had never exchanged anything with
him beyond quick, guilty smiles. But
she never forgot what happened, and every time she thought about the incident
it filled her with a frustrated, helpless anger. It seemed ludicrous to her that, even in her thirties, she could
still be faced down like that, like a little kid by the schoolyard bully. When she worked out, it was often with the
secret hope that she would get big enough to return the favor, but of course
she could never hope to aspire to anything like Amy's awesome physique. (The idea that Amy might have actually been
justified in defending her husband's virtue never occurred to Susan.)
Now,
as Susan prepped herself to go out that afternoon (which actually took longer
than usual, as she had to get used to dealing with what was for all practical
purposes a completely new face, to say nothing of her body), she reviewed her
plan. She had no plans to strong-arm
Amy, at least not consciously, not at that point. Her arms and legs were thicker and nicely contoured with muscle
beneath the smooth bronze skin, but she knew she couldn't expect to match up to
Amy's brute strength. Instead, she
would exact a more emotional sort of retribution: she would seduce Jim to the point where he was broken, where he
couldn't think about Amy even if she was standing right in front of him - and
then she would leave the two of them to deal with the jagged remains of their
broken marriage. Susan grinned dreamily
as she considered the playing out of this naughty little game, which never
would have occurred to her prior to her transformation. Amy would learn her lesson, Susan's
humiliation would be avenged. The end.
Susan
stood from her vanity and allowed her robe to slip to the floor, again
revealing her miraculous physique to the empty room. None of her old clothes would do for this, but she'd been
shopping this morning and had returned with some more appropriate outfits. She settled on a jade-colored stretch-lycra
leotard with a thong strap that exposed her waist, her hips, and most of all
her gorgeous new ass to maximum effect.
She turned around to regard her backside, her ass the shape and texture
of fresh-baked buns. The leotard was
meant to be worn with shorts, but Susan didn't think anyone would mind if she
went without. Yesterday she wouldn't
have dreamed of leaving the house in such an outfit, but, well, yesterday had
been a long time ago.
Susan
started to go out to her car, then decided that maybe she would take her
bicycle instead, and not just because it was such a nice sunny day. It was a little uncomfortable to ride with
just the thong, but it was worth it when she entered the city and started
drawing stares like a magnet draws iron filings. Heads spun, jaws dropped, and chagrined wives glared at husbands
to no effect. Susan straightened her
sunglasses and smiled happily at the sheer attention she was garnering. She zipped down the street margin, her long,
flaxen hair billowing behind her, a woman who was nearing forty but now looked
like a girl barely old enough to drink, a woman who'd always had a
lackadaisical approach to fitness but now appeared to have spent her whole life
in the gym. She must've thanked David
over a hundred times last night, but she saw now that it could never be
enough. She loved this.
second quad: the sleeper awakens
two-one
Susan wasn't loving it so much later that evening,
when she ventured out to the grocery store.
This morning she couldn't wait to reveal herself to the world; now she
just wanted to curl up in bed. But
somebody had to get dinner. Even if
she'd intended to forgo supper herself, she wouldn't have dreamed of doing the
same to Janey.
She
had changed into a nylon jogging suit, and that was all right, because it hid
the bruises forming on her stomach. Her
sunglasses were somewhat less successful in disguising her left eye, which was
puffed to a narrow slit and surrounded by a serious shiner. And there wasn't much she could do to hide
her split lower lip, unless she wanted to go around with a scarf tied around
the lower half of her face like a desperado.
Her
seduction of Jim hadn't gone quite as planned.
She
was walking down the dairy aisle, not really looking at anything, when her foot
kicked a loaded basket that happened to be sitting in her path and she went
pitching forward. An attentive young
man managed to grab her as she went down, catching her under the elbows. Susan's hands clapped onto his forearms; as
she did so, a strange tingle seemed to suffuse her palms, as though she were
receiving a low-grade electric shock.
She regained her balance and let go of him. The young man, who had been giving her a hopeful smile when he'd
caught her, was now blinking as though just then coming awake from a deep
sleep. He seemed confused for a moment,
then remembered himself and smiled at Susan again. "Thanks," Susan chirped coyly, immediately brushing off what
she'd just felt. Maybe it was just
chemistry, this time of the romantic sort.
He was actually pretty cute, she thought. But the effect she had on men was already starting to seem
prosaic, even annoying to her; her beauty hadn't helped her one whit against
Amy, had it? The guy scratched the back
of his neck and said, "No problem," and continued to smile at the dreamy blonde
as she continued on.
When
Susan got back into her car, she took a cursory glance at herself in the
rearview mirror, then gasped and did a double take. It was after sundown, so she flicked on the dome light and looked
again closely.
Her
black eye was gone.
Her
split lip was gone.
Susan
poked her stomach where Amy had slugged her.
Nothing. She felt as fine as she
had when she'd woken up that morning.
Susan
frowned at her flawless reflection. Was
this something to do with David's machine?
Some unforeseen effect? It
didn't occur to her to connect this with what she'd felt when she'd touched the
young guy's arms.
two-two
When the shriek came, Janey was in her room, playing
with her Barbie dolls. Her mom now
looked a lot like a Barbie doll herself, but after three days Janey no longer
found this very noteworthy. She hadn't
even been very fazed when her mom had come home that first day with a black eye
and a cut on her lip, then had come back from the grocery store with her
injuries vanished as completely as if they had been no more than Halloween
make-up. Her mom had said stuff about
nutrition and exercise, and on one level Janey had accepted these explanations
trustingly. But Janey was a big fan of
Harry Potter, and she suspected that sorcery might have been at work.
Then
came the shriek. Janey froze, waiting
for something to follow, some kind of banging or crashing. But there was nothing. She got up, padded to her door, opened it,
and saw immediately what the screaming was about.
"Uh-oh,"
Janey said. It was all she could think
of to say. As easily as she had
digested her mother's transformation, she now digested the reversal of that
transformation. No more Barbie-doll
mommy for her.
Susan
had been out late that night, with her third suitor in as many days. She'd risen late, and this was the first
time she'd looked in the mirror today.
Her first thought was that it was the last time she would look in the
mirror, ever again.
She
pinched and pulled at her face and body, hoping that what she saw wasn't
real. But it was. Sunken eyes, jowly cheeks, sprays of crow's
feet and laugh-lines, wattles on her neck, sagging breasts, clumpy fat hanging from
her upper arms and padding her butt and thighs'it was back, all of it, as
though it had never been gone. No worse
than it had been four days ago, maybe, but compared to what she'd had since
then - she nearly burst into tears, and only saved herself just in time.
The
thought that saved her, of course, was the machine. It was still out there, probably still in David's workshop,
waiting for her. Nothing had to be
lost, nothing had to be over.
Galvanized, Susan turned to get dressed.
She
went to David's house first, but there was no answer at the door. She considered just breaking in, but then
realized how silly she was being. And
anyway, she knew where he'd probably be.
Going
back to the gym terrified her. She knew
that there was no way that Amy could recognize her as the sex-oozing young girl
whom she'd caught seducing her husband on Tuesday. But still, the memory of the violence'Amy pounding her twice in
the stomach, knocking the wind out of her, then rearranging that pretty face of
hers'made her quail. She thought
abstractedly that she would have to ask David to turn up the juice a little
this time, to make her even stronger.
She
was afraid, but she went to the gym anyway.
As it happened, Jim and Amy weren't there. David was. Susan didn't say
anything, nor did she need to. She just
went up to David and gave him a steady look, her right hand clasping her left
wrist behind her back. David, for his
part, looked her up and down in surprise.
"I
guess you know what I came to ask," Susan said at length. She was willing to do anything, absolutely
anything he wanted, if only it meant she could get that body back. If he announced that he wanted to fuck her
in the ass on a float in the middle of the Watermelon Parade? No problem at all.
"Yeah,"
David said, and Susan was relieved when she failed to hear any coldness in his
voice, or see it in his eyes. She'd
never called him back, but what of it?
He could turn any woman he wanted into a copy of what she'd become,
starting with his own wife.
"Only
the first one's free," David added, and Susan opened her mouth to protest, to
say that he'd gotten nearly as much pleasure out of this as she had - but then
he smiled to show he was joking.
"Not
funny," she said, but she smiled with relief as she said it.
"Come
on," David said.
two-three
"David?
Honey, are you home?" Linda set
her suitcase in the foyer, then stepped into the living room, looking
around. The house seemed to be empty.
Laura,
Linda's younger sister, came in the door behind her, lugging another suitcase,
which she set down next to the first.
"No Dave?" she asked.
"Guess
not," Linda said, resting her hands on her hips and peeking into the dim
kitchen, then down the hallway leading to the bedrooms.
"Maybe
he's out with his paramour," Laura teased.
"You are early, you know."
Linda
made a sour face. "Not funny." Her younger sister well knew Linda's short
temper, and occasionally she took it in her head to prod her, like a
mischievous little kid prodding a dog that may bark but can't bite because it's
tied to a stake. "He's probably at the
gym," she said. "Or maybe he went to
the Watermelon Festival'it starts today."
Laura
wanted to say something about a town so hickville that its biggest yearly
celebration was devoted to watermelons.
Instead she changed the subject, saying, "When do the kids get back from
camp?"
"Sunday,"
Linda said. That was when she herself
had planned to return, but, being away from David, she'd had a change of heart,
and had decided to try to work things out with him, while the kids were out of
their hair. Now it looked like she
would have to wait a little longer, at least until he got home. She turned to her sister. "Well.
Thanks for everything." They
hugged, exchanged a few more pleasantries, and then Laura left.
Linda
walked to the other end of the house, thinking of what she would say to David
when he got home, when she saw something interesting: the door to David's workshop was standing open. It had been kept scrupulously locked for the
past four months or so; when she'd asked, he'd said something vague about a
delicate project that needed to be kept from the kids. She'd huffed at it when he wouldn't show it
to her, or even explain what it was, thinking it a sign of his growing
aloofness. Now, staring at the open
door, she was consumed by a burning curiosity.
She went in, thinking, I won't
touch anything, just look.
She
went in, switched on the light, and looked carefully at everything. She was disappointed by what she saw, or,
more precisely, by what she didn't see.
What was so important that he couldn't show her? All his tools were put away, and the top of
the room's worktable was clear. The
weights had been pushed aside and a camcorder had been set up on a tripod in
the middle of the room, but that was all.
She wondered if he'd finished whatever he'd been working on and had
taken it out somewhere.
There
was a clicking sound from the other side of the house, and then the front door
creaked open. Linda turned and began
walking out of the room. Then the sound
of a voice drifted to her'a female voice'and
she froze.
"So
have you used it again?" A woman,
without a doubt. And a
familiar-sounding one at that.
"No. I was waiting for Linda to get home." David.
Linda didn't know which was worse:
having thieves break in, or having David come home with another
woman. She continued to stand
stock-still, scarcely breathing, wondering if maybe the reason David had been
so aloof lately was not simply that he'd found a new hobby but that he'd taken
a mistress.
"You
good little boy," the woman said, with a flirtatious tone that Linda didn't
care for one bit, and again she was struck by how familiar the voice
sounded. She almost thought it was her
sister, Laura, but the voice wasn't quite the same. Was it one of their neighbors?
"You could have had your own harem by now."
"Don't
think the thought hadn't crossed my mind."
Laura was so convinced that it was his mistress David was talking to that
she expected them to head straight for the bedroom, but then she realized they
were headed in her direction instead.
She broke her paralysis, hit the light switch, and dove behind an old
trunk-style freezer that was among the workshop's clutter. They didn't stop in the kitchen but came
right into workshop, switching on the light, and despite the possibility of
being discovered cowering in her own house Linda relaxed a little. Maybe the woman was just someone who'd left
an appliance with David to fix. He did
a lot of work on the side for their friends'VCRs, Cuisinarts, stuff like
that. She decided to reserve judgment.
They
stopped moving, and there was a pause.
Then the woman said, "And there it is."
Another pause, one that Linda didn't like. What were they waiting for?
Had they started kissing or something?
There was an empty hamster cage on top of the freezer, and Linda
supposed she could look out from behind it without being noticed.
"Any
more of those dreams?" the woman asked.
"No. Not a one, that I can remember." David's words became slow, as though he were
thinking very hard. "I guess that's one
benefit of finally building the thing," he said in a slightly more cheerful
tone. "Well, let's get this over with,
shall we?"
"You
don't have to tell me twice," the woman said in a giddy tone that made Linda's
skin crawl. She raised up slightly,
peered through the bars of the hamster cage.
What she saw almost made her gasp loudly. That - rat! she mouthed
as she lowered herself back down. The
woman was wearing only a bra and panties, and Linda had recognized her
immediately: it was Susan, from
work. Linda craned her neck for another
look, and then realized that what she had first taken for underwear was
actually a sports bra and running shorts.
She peered more closely. The
sports bra looked a little loose, like Susan had lost weight recently. Linda lowered herself back down, forcing
herself to take deep breaths. She still
had no definitive proof that anything at all seamy was going on here, but her
famous temper was all but lost, and she knew that if she didn't get herself
under control in a hurry she was apt to jump up and start accusing them of any
number of things. Instead she made
herself count backwards from ten.
"Here,
right?"
"Yeah."
Linda
looked up a third time. Now Susan was
standing in front of the wall at which the camcorder was aimed, and David was
standing behind the camcorder itself. Since when is David into making dirty
movies? Linda didn't want to wait
until Susan started taking off her clothes, but she supposed she would have to
before she would be justified in jumping up and shouting at them. She would have to literally catch them with
their pants down.
"Ready,
Susan?"
"Let
"er rip." Again, that eager, anticipatory
tone that put ice in Linda's veins.
Linda craned her neck again to see Susan straighten her back and put her
hands on her hips. Who does she think she is, fucking Wonder Woman?
David
pushed a button on the camcorder.
Immediately the lights dimmed, and there was a series of high-pitched
sounds. Linda had never seen or heard a
camcorder do that before, but she
couldn't figure out what else had done it.
She
was struck dumb by what happened next, a multicolored beam that shot out from
that camcorder like a laser and struck Susan in her soft bare midriff. Susan closed her eyes and tilted back her
head, her mouth turned up in a welcoming smile. In the next moment the beam had become solid yellow, and had
become less like a laser beam than a stream of electricity. It reminded Linda of the Van de Graaff
generator her middle school physical science teacher had demonstrated for the
class, when the two metal spheres were placed next to each other and a thin,
jagged purple thread buzzed between them.
This looked a little like that, only much bigger. And whatever it was doing to Susan, it
wasn't shocking her. Then Linda
perceived what the stream was doing
to Susan, and she very nearly wet her pants.
Her whole body began to tremble, and her eyes became very wide. She was no longer worried about being
discovered, but she couldn't have stood up even if she'd wanted to. What she was seeing was too incredible to be
believed, but she was watching it happen nonetheless, right here in her own
house.
two-four
For Susan, the second transformation wasn't nearly
as delirious as the first one had been.
Rather, it was like slipping on an old, well-loved coat, like getting
back something that had been her property in the first place. When it was over and the lights resumed
their former level of illumination, she went straight to the mirror and smiled
at herself. Back, just like before.
She
felt more than saw David coming at her as though she were drawing him on a
string'it was funny how, even when expecting it this time, he was still struck
helpless by the depth of her beauty.
She turned as he approached, waiting, and then, just before he embraced
her, used her delicate, sibilant cheerleader's voice to say, "Let's do it again."
David
stopped just as suddenly as if she'd told him to get away. He looked at her dubiously, trying to figure
out whether she were talking about sex or about the device, then trying to
decide if she were serious.
"I'm
serious," she said, trying to make herself sound it, though her voice and her
face seemed made for playfulness. "I
wanna see what happens. I wanna be a
little stronger this time." Of course,
what she really wanted was to get strong enough so that she wouldn't have to be
afraid of Amy anymore. But she wasn't
going to tell him that.
"I
don't know," David said. "I mean, who
knows what it'll do to you?"
"Who
knows what it's done to me already?" Susan said, some of her fear and her
impatience creeping into her voice, making it querulous. "It hasn't hurt me, has it?"
"Well
- have you seen a doctor since the first time?"
"A
doctor? Why would I see a doctor? You go to the doctor when you feel bad. I feel better than I have in my whole life." Susan made the last step toward David and
put her tawny arms around his neck. Neither
of them registered the faint, hissing gasp that came from behind the
freezer. "Please, David," Susan
murmured, putting every ounce of her seductive power into her voice and her
glance, which became very seductive indeed.
Certainly more seductive than that of any other woman David had
personally faced in his life.
"All
right, all right," David said, shaking his head. Susan's fingertips were lightly stroking the little hairs behind
his neck, but rather than exciting him, her touch was making him feel
tired. Almost without realizing it he
put his hands on her shoulders and pushed her out to arm's length. "But only once more," he said, a little
sternly, feeling like he was talking to his son when he wanted to watch one
more show before bedtime.
Susan
smiled and kissed him on the mouth.
This, too, made him feel tired, almost sleepy, and he was glad when she
quickly turned and went to stand in front of the wall. Maybe he was just still burned-out from
their epic love-making session. "Here
goes," he said.
As
amazing as the first transformation had been, this one was even more
arresting. More of Susan's fat
disappeared, replaced as muscle. Her
ass became less rounded, and her outer quads, large to begin with, began to
look like submarines breasting the water.
Veins popped into life on the tops of her biceps and the outer edges of
her forearms, as all the angles of her body became leaner, harder. Her sports bra stretched out even further,
partly from the growth of her breasts, but mostly because of the pectorals
underneath. She even seemed to grow a
few inches taller this time.
After
the beam shut off and the glow faded, it took Susan a few seconds to open her
eyes. When she did, her expression was
one of supreme rapture. She went to the
mirror and first could only giggle at what she saw. Then she struck a double-biceps pose, and David was reminded of
that Chris Lydon spread in Playboy a couple years back; Susan was now about the
same build. Her lats and deltoids
bulged when she raised her arms, making a worthy attempt at the fabled
V-shape. She struck more poses, showing
off her triceps, her shoulders, her butt, the faint striation between her
pecs. She wasn't huge, but she still
had a physique that would've cost her about five years of hard labor and
careful nutrition, if she hadn't had David's machine to give it to her.
"Do
you like it?" David asked at length. He
himself felt a little nervous, though he couldn't say why. Probably just afraid she was going to go too
far and hurt herself, he told himself.
"Yes,
yes, oh yes," Susan said, still
squeezing herself and flexing. "But
-" She turned and looked at him,
half-seriously, half-flirtatiously.
"It's still not enough." She
still intended to stand up to Amy, and she could see that this, while close,
wasn't quite up to the task.
"It'll
have to be enough," David told her flatly.
"Why
are you being so stubborn?" Susan burst out.
"What are you afraid of?"
"I'm
afraid for you," David said, though he still wasn't sure if this was the real
reason. "I'm not going to let you hurt
yourself."
"Afraid
for me?" Susan echoed
disbelievingly. "Or afraid of me?"
She looked at him intensely for a moment, then caught sight of the
weight bench. Seized with a sudden
impulse, she went to it. "How much is
on here?"
David
studied the plates bolted to the bar.
"Two hundred."
He
expected her to slide underneath and try a bench press. Instead she stayed where she was and grabbed
the bar on either end. Muscles popping
into relief on her arms, she lifted. He
expected her to get it up a few inches and drop it, but again he was proved
wrong. She got it over her head. She stayed that way for a moment, teeth
gritted, arms twitching, then lowered it all at once. It landed in the cradles with a loud CLANG! and nearly bounced back out again. Then Susan started for him.
David
uncrossed his arms and found himself backing away. "What are you doing, Susan?" he asked tensely.
Susan's
face still held that flirtatious smile, but David saw a menacing look behind it
that he didn't like'that he didn't like at all. "I could take you, David," she said
quietly. "I really think I could. I don't want it to have to be this way - but I need you to do it again." With that, she lunged forward. David wasn't expecting her to be as fast as
she was, and she caught his wrist before he could dodge. She squeezed. David wasn't a weak man, and he wasn't hurt, but again there was
that sense of draining, and suddenly
all he wanted to do was curl up at Susan's feet and take a nap. He fought to keep his eyes open
Susan
drew back with her other fist and then nearly hit him. Nearly did to him what Amy had done to her,
in fact, punching him twice in the gut and then twice in the face. But then she realized what she was doing and
let go. How had it come to this? Wasn't this her friend? Her lover? Sure, she wanted revenge, but was it worth
it if it meant leaving a man she loved lying bloody and senseless on the
ground? "I - I'm sorry, David," she
said, regaining her composure. "I don't
mean it, really I don't. But - I want
to be stronger. Just a little more. Can't you see that? Can't you give me that? And you know it will wear off again in a few
days. You know that. We're just
testing this, aren't we? Seeing what it
does. And after this - I'll go to my
doctor, okay? And I'll let her check me
out, top to bottom, and see if this is really safe. Okay?"
David
was looking at her warily, his head cocked, his arms out from his waist, his
body ready to bolt. He was breathing
heavily. "Doctor?" he repeated, as
though not quite understanding the term.
He scrunched his eyes for a moment, then held up a warning finger. "Once more," he said. "But that is it. After that, I want you out of my house."
His
tone was grim, but Susan was grinning and jumping up and down like a little kid
that's been told she'll get to go to Disneyland after all. With her muscles unflexed, David thought,
she really didn't look that much bigger than before. Surely she couldn't get much more dangerous than she was
now. And anyway, there had to be some
kind of stopping point. It wasn't like
she could put on muscle from out of thin air.
Wasn't the limit of his invention something they needed to test
out? For the moment, the fact that she
had actually gained some height the last time escaped him.
Susan
took her place before the wall, again planting her hands on her hips. This time she really did look like Wonder
Woman. "I'm ready David."
"I'm
not," David muttered, but he hit the button anyway. The lights dimmed, the machine twittered, the rainbow beam became
the stream of golden lightning, and Susan's skin began to glow like sunlight.
By
the time the machine cut out again, David's assumption that Susan couldn't get
mass from thin air had been knocked straight on its ass. She gained height again, about five inches
of it, and her hair lengthened more than ever, coming down to the middle of her
back. But the most mesmerizing thing
was her physique, which looked less and less like Chris Lydon and more and more
like Chris Bongiovanni, the topography of her skin becoming complicated with
thick, striated muscle. Her sports bra
stretched until a vertical eyelet tore open between her breasts, and her
distressed shorts looked ready to follow.
The tops of her shoes tore away from the soles with popping sounds. Susan moaned in pleasure throughout the
process, her voice growing increasingly husky, no longer that of a prissy
cheerleader. A trapdoor seemed to open
in David's stomach as he watched his mistress grow within the yellow light,
allowing all his guts to go spilling right out of him. He'd warned her to leave after this'but
would she? Only if she wanted to leave. What
David did or didn't want to happen, he saw clearly, had pretty much ceased to
matter. Where does an eight-hundred pound gorilla sleep? he thought
wearily, and the joke, never funny to begin with, now seemed downright
frightening to him.
David
watched warily as the disorientation wore off and Susan's eyes opened. She was smiling again, but it was hard
smile, without a trace of coquettishness in it. She was now as tall as he was, maybe even taller. Her long, uncombed hair made her look primal
and dangerous, like an amazon; all she needed was a leopard-skin bikini, a
spear, and a necklace of boar's teeth.
She tore off what was left of her shoes and socks and went straight to
the mirror again Then she began posing,
and David was astounded at the boulder-like formations of muscle that came
bulging out of her body, at the veins which branched on her skin like bare
trees. The tear in her sports bra grew
deeper. Then, with suddenness that sent
him recoiling, she spun toward him, growling violently, her hands balled into
fists. "Rrrrrngghh - why do you keep shutting it off?" she
bellowed, her voice filling the small room and making David's bones ache, deep
down in the marrow. "I want more, can't you understand? MORE!"
"It's
- I -" David sputtered. Finally he
managed, "It turns itself off." His
voice was very small.
Susan
glared at him dangerously for a moment from beneath the savage fall of her
bangs. A part of her felt as though she
were caught in a dream, one of the vivid dreams David had described to her. But at the same time a part of her felt
awake, more awake than she had ever been in her life. Susan had spent the last decade sadly watching her beauty slip
out of her grasp like sand, trying to stop it but helpless to do more than slow
down its escape a little. The fear of
growing old alone preyed on her constantly.
After the divorce, especially, she had been dead set on finding a man
who could provide for her and Janey, even if it meant stealing that man from a
friend, as she had been trying to steal David from Linda. Now, though, what could she possibly need a
man for? She was stronger than a man,
any man, and she reveled in the feeling.
David watched as Susan went
to the weight bench. "Two hundred
pounds?" she asked in her husky yet still very sexy voice. She gripped the barbell with one hand and
then lifted it straight up into the air.
Smiling maliciously, she actually spun it on the top of her forefinger
like a majorette's baton, then threw it up and caught it. David was slack-jawed with amazement.
Then
came the moment he had been dreading. "We go again," she said flatly'not a request or even a command but
a statement of plain hard fact. "And
this time there will be none of your annoying excuses."
For
one long moment David could do nothing but stare at her. At the first stage of Susan's transformation,
as different as she had looked, she had still been essentially Susan,
essentially the woman he had held and kissed and made furtive love to on all
those trysts. What stood before him
now, however, was something else entirely.
He could see a little of Susan, in the face - but the creature as a
whole was a stranger to him.
"Thih'" David tried to make his voice sound stern
and authoritative, but his throat refused to cooperate and all that came out
was voiceless, terrified blather.
"Th-this has gone t-too fuh'too
far, Susan. Y-you have t'"
"Get
behind the machine, insignificant worm," Susan ordered, in that throaty voice
that brooked no argument. "Prepare for
the next phase." She glared, her eyes
as hard as steel. "Now."
third quad: dreams of domination
three-one
Linda watched from behind the hamster cage, her
throat bobbing with deep swallows, her fingers kneading themselves, her
shoulders drawn into knots, her limbs trembling. She had kept from wetting her pants, but it had been a near
thing, what with her bladder feeling as fragile and loose as a water balloon
each of the three times she'd watched Susan get in front of the machine. She kept thinking of a Warner Bros. cartoon
she had seen once, in which Tweety Bird turns the tables on Sylvester by
drinking a potion that turns him into a gruesome, hulking monster. The monster's feathers were yellow, its eyes
blue, and its feet orange, but in no other way did it resemble that cute,
delicate little "I tawt I taw a putty tat" Tweety. For Linda, this perfectly summed up what had happened to
Susan. Her friend had gone from minor
irritant to huge unstoppable terror.
Linda had tried to jump out
and put a stop to things just before the third time, when the situation still
seemed at least somewhat in control, but by then her legs had turned to wet
noodles, and she was stuck. She
couldn't even cry out, because she had no voice. And so she had been forced to watch helplessly as the last vestiges
of sweet, smiling Susan from work were erased and that raging muscle-freak was
left in her wake. She found herself
wishing that it had simply been that Susan and her husband had been having an
affair. That would have left her hurt
and scared and confused, but it would, she believed, have been nothing compared
to this. Nothing at all.
The
power-crazed amazon advanced on her husband now, still holding the barbell in
one hand. David's legs didn't seem to
work much better than Linda's had, and he wasn't quick enough to get away. Linda moaned in despair as Susan snatched
her husband up by his neck. "Did you'!" Susan got out, and then she
closed her eyes and moaned as well, only at a much higher volume, effectively
covering up Linda's. David struggled,
but seemed to get tired almost immediately.
Linda saw Susan's skin become the color of sunlight again, only now the
machine wasn't on at all. And then, in
horror, she realized that Susan was getting even bigger, while her husband was
now shrinking.
You bitch, Linda mouthed, but she was
unable to produce any sound. Susan's
hands released, and both David and the barbell went crashing to the cement
floor. Susan opened her eyes, looking
confused. "I'" She stared at the shelves of half-gutted
appliances as though seeing them for the first time. "I have his memories!" she said with a triumphant laugh, and she
looked back at the machine, standing small and alone on its tripod. "So, my friend, apparently strength and size
aren't the only things you have to offer me.
In fact, I almost don't need you at all, now that I can absorb mass from
anyone I touch." She looked back at
David, and her grin faltered a notch.
"Asleep," she observed. "But, no
matter. Not now that I know how to
operate it myself." Her eyes raised, as
though imagining what lay beyond the wall.
"And not now that I know that stupid bitch lives right next door." She began
chuckling again, and carefully pressed the machine's activation button before
going back to the wall. As she grew
this time, her sports bra was split in half by her burgeoning tits, and a
moment later her gluts and upper adductors finished off her shorts. Linda moaned soundlessly and wedged her
hands into her crotch, trying desperately to stop herself from peeing.
When the machine switched
off, the result was no longer a mere amazon but a bona-fide giantess, nearly
seven feet tall, the top of her head just below the ceiling. Susan went back to the mirror, studied
herself a moment, then peeled off what was left of the sports bra and the
shorts. Only her white thong underwear
was left, stretched nearly to breaking.
After a moment's consideration she hooked her thumb under the strap and
tore that off as well. Then she posed,
and was apparently pleased with what she saw.
As for Linda, she had to clutch the freezer to keep from tipping over
and passing out'no human should possess the size and power now on display
before her, much less a human that had been her size a few minutes ago. Her mind could not process what she was
seeing. "Now this is enough," Susan said aloud.
She did her double-biceps shot, and the result made Linda's world again
go gray and fluttery. "In fact, my
dear, this should be enough to pound
Amy Reynolds into next week."
The giantess turned and began
walking toward Linda's hiding spot, and Linda tried to scream when she realized
that what she had taken for thinking aloud had in fact been Susan talking to
her. But Susan walked right past her,
the concrete floor reverberating with each barefooted tread. She went up to the antique refrigerator that
stood against the far wall, the one that had always reminded Linda of the
icebox from I Love Lucy. After a moment's consideration, Susan
scooped up the immensely heavy object, one hand on the top and one hand on the
bottom, then crushed it like an soda can.
When it was perhaps an eighth of its original height, she dropped it to
the floor, laughing. Linda winced at
the noise.
"Pound
her into next month," Susan gloated
as she strode for the door. Linda
breathed a sigh of relief, but Susan, as though she had heard it, abruptly
stopped and turned back. Linda hunched
down for one terrified moment, then risked a peek through the bars.
Susan was staring at the
machine. "I can't leave it," she
said. She supposed she could just run
it to her house - but who knew what Janey would make of her mommy in mommy's
current state? It would take more than
stories about vitamins and weight-lifting to explain this, wouldn't it? And, worse, Susan worried about what mischief
Janey might get to with the machine while her mommy was out pounding someone
into pulp. The notion of dealing with a
twelve-foot-tall second-grader did not much appeal to Susan. At the thought of Janey, Susan felt herself
regain perspective, almost as though she were physically shrinking again, and
she looked at David's sprawled form with renewed compassion. Did I
actually do that? For what? For -
A picture of Amy flashed into Susan's mind, and Susan's face instantly
hardened again. For revenge, of
course. I'm going to teach that fucking bitch a lesson. I'm going to show her that she picked the
wrong dumb blonde to mess with. So
resolved, Susan picked up the barbell with one hand, set it under Dave's neck,
and then, with an ease that left Linda even more unsettled than she already was
(if that were possible), she curled it into a loop. Then she stood up, nodding to herself. The only one who could get him out of that, without using an arc
welder, was Susan herself. It would
keep him immobilized until she had finished with Amy, and had decided what to
do about him and his machine. Thinking
that far ahead was a little frightening'Susan very much wanted the machine all
to herself, but that might mean she would have to kill him, and she didn't want
to face up to that yet. "Okay," she
told herself. "It's play time." Sparing David and the machine one last
pensive glance, Susan left.
three-two
Linda waited to hear the back door open and slam;
instead she heard a loud crash and the splintering of heavy wood, and felt the
house shudder around her. Apparently
Susan no longer felt the need to use doors.
Linda waited, and soon she began to hear more energetic crashing. If she'd understood correctly, that would be
the demise of chez Reynolds. Linda had no idea what Amy might have done
to incur Susan's wrath, but she was just glad that it was their house that was
getting sacrificed and not hers. After
a few long minutes, the crashing stopped.
Linda waited a few more minutes, until she was positive that Susan was
not going to come right back, before she was able to force herself out from
behind the freezer.
David
was breathing normally, but he was still out, out cold. "Oh David, oh David," Linda said, kneeling
over him. She had forgotten that David's
affaire d'amour was what had set all
this in motion; she just felt the pent-up tension of the last thirty minutes
let go all at once and began to cry.
She cried until David's face was glistening with her tears, and still he
didn't wake up. "Oh David," she
moaned. She tried once to unbend the
barbell herself, but while Susan had made it look like a movie prop, it was
clearly nothing of the sort. She
couldn't even remove the weights, as Susan had shrewdly curled up the barbell's
ends. And there was no possible way for
Linda to move both David and the two hundred pounds around his neck.
Eventually
she pulled herself away and went to the phone, but it was dead; apparently
Susan's rampage had pulled down the lines at some point. Still sobbing, Linda began to stumble around
the house, blinking away her tears, looking for something that could free her
husband.
three-three
"Fucking watermelon festival," Amy spat as she at
last escaped into the exit lane.
Traffic, usually light when she went home, had been a nightmare today,
and again she cursed the fact that she lived in a town so hicksville that they
had a festival to celebrate watermelons.
Fucking watermelons.
Amy
continued to grumble and curse as she made her way through the quiet suburb
toward her house. Beating up that
little blonde skank had put her in a good mood for a couple of days'and it had
felt indescribably good, to bop her in the eye and mash her too-pretty lips
against her teeth, so good that Amy wished she could do it every morning'but
the watermelon festival had put her out of temper again. When she got home, she decided, she would
cook up one of those T-bones in the freezer, settle in for a hot bath, then get
up early and hit the weights tomorrow.
And she wouldn't turn the phone's ringer back on, no matter how many
times Jim's number showed up in the caller ID window.
Amy was so focused on these
thoughts that she had no inkling of the seven-foot-tall nude blonde woman
striding in the opposite direction, two streets down, when the two crossed each
other's peripheral line of sight. The
blonde giantess, for her part, saw the blue Lumina in the corner of her eye and
did not register it. If she had seen
it, David's memories would have told her whose it was, and things might have
proceeded very differently; but she didn't.
Amy
was still thinking about sizzling steaks and hot baths when she turned the
corner onto her street and caught sight of her house'or rather, caught sight of
what had been her house. Amy was the type of woman who tended to
react to adversity with aggressive force, but at the moment she could only
stare, gape-mouthed, as she allowed the car to drift toward her driveway. "Destroyed" wasn't sufficient to describe
what she was seeing'her house had been pulverized, disintegrated, razed right
down to the ground. Even the floors had
been smashed through, and all the debris had fallen into the basement, leaving
a crater-like depression. This was all
that was left of her home. Amy parked
and got out of the car, still unable to react.
Then she noticed a hole in the side of the Carsons' house, and instantly
an image formed in her mind: David
Carson, would-be inventor, cobbling together some kind of death-ray, something
he hopes to sell to the Pentagon. It
works, but works so well that it blows the side of his house open and then mows
down the neighbors' house as well. "You
son of a bitch," Amy breathed in disbelief, and as her aggressive nature began
to reassert itself she balled her hands into fists. She marched toward the Carsons' house and stepped in through the
hole. The fact that this hole had been
blown out of the house, rather than in, confirmed her theory for her.
She
found herself in the kitchen.
Everything seemed fine, and she saw no evidence of the cannon or whatever
that had put such a crimp in her day.
The only lights came from the workshop, to her left. She went inside.
Amy
stopped short as she entered. She saw
David, but her impulse to rail at him for what had happened had vanished. He was lying unconscious on the floor, and,
somehow, a barbell appeared to have been looped around his neck. "Is this somebody's idea of a joke?" Amy
muttered as she crept closer. Then she
could see that he looked somehow wasted'measuring physiques at a glance was
part of Amy's business, and David looked to her like he'd gone on a crash diet
since the last time she'd seen him. His
clothes pooled loosely around him. She
no longer had any clear conception of what David had been working on, but it
must have been one fucked up project to have resulted in this.
There
was a patter of footsteps. Amy was
never one to back away from a confrontation, but the sight of David lying there
with heavy-gauge steel tied around him like a ribbon made her decide that maybe
she would be better off finding out what was going on before getting actively
involved in it. She slipped behind a
trunk-style freezer that would hide her from most of the room and ducked down.
The
footsteps came into the room. Amy
peeked up and saw that it was only Linda, her face so puffy and miserable that
it appeared she was having at least as bad a day as Amy was. Linda held a crowbar, and she crouched down
and began trying to use it to lever the loop in the barbell wide enough to slip
David's head out. Amy raised herself a
little higher to watch, and almost laughed out loud. Who was Linda trying to fool?
It would take the Jaws of Life to untie that knot.
Eventually Linda figured
this out for herself. Frustrated, she
threw the crowbar away with a prissy, strengthless motion, and then began to
cry again, clapping her hands over her face.
In her imagination Linda saw the ease with which Susan had twisted the
barbell in the first place, and this made her cry harder. "I'm
not s-s-strong enough!" she sobbed.
Soon, perhaps any moment now, the giantess would return, and who knew
what would happen to David then? Linda
couldn't leave the house to get help, not when it might mean leaving David at
the mercy of that overgrown bitch.
Linda knew that she couldn't possibly hope to defend him, but still, she
had to try. He was her husband, and
despite their deteriorating relationship, she loved him, and she would stand by
him.
Linda imagined Susan
twisting the bar again, her huge arms barely straining themselves as she did it,
and suddenly she stopped crying, her gaze snapping toward the camcorder-like
machine. "That machine," she murmured,
sniffling, wiping away tears with her fingertips. As though it had been recorded on a tape and was now being played
back for her, she heard herself say, If
only there was some way to - I don't know - just push a button, or something,
and get into shape. Well, there was
a way, wasn't there? "That machine could make me stronger," she
whispered, making herself stand. She
looked down at David, a little guiltily, then back at the machine. "I mean, it worked for her, so -" She frowned suspiciously at the
innocuous-looking device, thinking hard.
She had no desire for big muscles; her athletic neighbor, Amy, had
always struck her as slightly freakish, and the end result of Susan's
experiments much moreso. But getting
bigger would allow her to free her husband, and might even allow her to defend
him if, heaven forbid, Susan should get back before the two of them managed to
get away. And it wouldn't be permanent,
would it? Susan had gone through a
transformation before, and it had worn off'at least, that was what Linda had
gleaned from eavesdropping on their conversation. Linda's eyes flicked to David's sprawled form again, and she
wished he was awake so she could ask him.
But he wasn't, and although he was still breathing, Linda didn't know
when he would wake up, if ever. Linda
had clearly seen David shrink and Susan grow when she had grabbed him, and
Susan claimed to have absorbed his memories as well. Could she have left him a vegetable in the process? The thought that David might be seriously
injured, and the thought that Susan might be back at any moment, with who knew
what grim mischief in mind, finally made up Linda's mind.
As she stepped toward the
machine, however, she began to feel the same weakness that had so immobilized
her each time she'd watched Susan transform:
shaky limbs, watery knees, bladder on the verge of letting go. What had happened to Susan was completely,
utterly irrational. Linda had seen it
all with her own eyes, but it was irrational nonetheless, and Linda didn't know
if she could expose herself to this sort of irrationality, even if avoiding it
meant leaving her husband here to die.
Linda looked back at David one more time, and then her disconsolate
expression was replaced by something more determined. Irrational or not, she had no choice.
Amy all but sniggered aloud
when she saw Linda bend down by the machine.
"If she thinks that filming herself is going to make her strong enough
to untwist that bar, she's even stupider than I thought," she muttered. Amy had never had any real problem with
David'he'd fixed their lawnmower for them when it had broken down, and he hadn't
even asked for anything in return'but she'd always found his wife to be a
bitch. Worse, in Amy's view, was the
fact that Linda was physically weak, that she lacked the strength to back up
her bitchiness and stand up for herself, by herself, without relying on laws
and social mores and her husband to keep her from getting a shot in the
mouth. For Amy, who had spent all of
her adult life doggedly accumulating strength, Linda was the type of person who
warranted zero respect. The fact that
Linda had purchased a membership at Amy's gym and then had stopped going after
just a couple of weeks only increased Amy's contempt.
Amy wasn't the only one who
saw Linda fiddling with the machine.
David saw it too, as he had finally opened his eyes just after the last
time Linda turned away from him. He'd
tried to come up into a sitting position, but got exactly nowhere: something was holding him in place,
something implacable, and it cut off his air supply savagely when he tried to
fight it. Instead he looked around,
blinking, still groggy, not quite sure where he was or what had happened to
him. Then he heard a noise and looked
down toward his toes, craning his neck and seeing Linda go stand in front of
the cinderblock wall. There were more
noises, and they brought everything back with a force that sent David into
utter panic. It was the machine,
chittering. The lights went down, so
low this time that they didn't seem to be on at all, and then the rainbow beam
lashed out, blindingly bright. Instead
of gold, however, this time the energy stream was cherry-red, a few shades
lighter than Linda's hair, and Linda glowed like the nubile, scarlet-skinned
succubae from a Lords of Acid album cover; she was just missing the horns and
the pointed tail. Despite the ominous
effect, David allowed himself to relax, thinking that Linda would simply emerge
looking the same way Susan had after her first transformation, gorgeous and
pleased with herself but all in all not too much of a threat, and that he could
then talk her out of using the damned thing a second time. But then he saw how much she was growing,
how fast, and he realized what the darkened room and the stream's greatly
increased intensity signified. It was
as if, he thought later, the machine somehow knew that it was creating a rival
for its first client, and had decided to make Linda a worthy opponent right off
the bat, without any of the hemming and hawing that had hindered Susan's
ascendance to giantesshood.
Already Linda was growing in
height, and her bobbed hair lengthened until it had reached the middle of her
back, even as it billowed and swirled around her in the strobing red
light. Her white denim shirt stretched,
then pulled up out of the waistband of her jeans, even as the cuffs of her
jeans rose above her ankles. The front
of her shirt stretched, the threads creaking, and then the buttons began
shooting off like bullets, the widening gap revealing her enormous red
cleavage. Near the end her jeans split
up the sides and fell off, revealing black lace panties that were stretched to
fraying but still whole. Linda no
longer appeared distraught; in fact, she looked like she was enjoying this at
least as much as Susan had.
When the stream cut out and
the lights came back up, the woman left standing before the wall was one David
could only vaguely recognize as his wife.
It was hard to judge from where he lay, but she looked to be over six
feet tall, and her body appeared almost exactly as Susan's had after her third
transformation. With her long, unkempt
hair and torn clothing, she looked like exactly what she was, a lab experiment
gone horribly wrong. "No, oh no," David
moaned, unmanned by how out-of-control things were getting.
Linda's eyes came open
slowly, and she blinked as her mind became accustomed to its new home. She crossed to the mirror, and what she saw
there made a smile spread across her face.
Had she been afraid of what she would look like after the machine had
had its way with her? Had she really?
It had been less than a minute ago that such a fear had consumed her,
but now it seemed silly. All Linda knew
was that she felt powerful, incredibly powerful, and if the cost of this power
was that some people would regard her as a freak, well, that was their problem,
not hers. Again she heard herself wish
for something that could get her into shape at the press of a button, and the
memory made her laugh out loud. God,
this was great! She reached up and pulled off what was left
of her shirt and bra. Her nipples and
aureoles, formerly quite pale, were now the dark brown-red of dried blood, and
she was pleased to see that, for the first time since puberty, her tits needed
a bra not in the least. Then she began
to pose.
Amy hadn't been quite as
wigged out by watching Linda grow as Linda had by watching Susan, but it was a near
thing. Watching Linda test out her
incredible new body, Amy decided that she wasn't stupid at all. Nor was David, for that matter'Amy had
nothing to say against a guy who could invent a machine that did that.
If anyone was stupid here, Amy thought, it was Amy herself. But she was feeling smarter now. And she thought that if she could somehow
slip past Linda and get a taste of that machine's power for herself, she would
be very wise indeed.
David continued to lay
there, helpless to do anything but watch.
Eventually Linda reached her fill and turned to face him. David was all but driven into total panic by
her expression'it was almost exactly what he had seen on Susan's face after she
had grown big enough to completely overpower him.
Linda planted her hands on
her hips. "So," she said in her new,
husky voice. "You had it, all this
time. Locked away in your workshop, the
thing I asked for, the thing that could get me in shape at the press of a
button." Her look, difficult to return
already, became uglier. "I wanted
it'you knew I wanted it'and yet you
hid it from me."
David stared at her, not
knowing what to say. He'd known about
Linda's temper since they were first dating'it was impossible for her to hide
it, even from a guy she was trying to impress'but it had never really bothered
him before. He supposed now that this
was because he was the man, stronger, and not much threatened by the
possibility that she simply throw herself at him. He would never have dreamed of striking his wife, but at the same
time the fact that he could, should he choose to, meant that she could never
cow him. His masculine strength had
protected him the way a circular saw's blade-guard protects the carpenter,
allowing him to take something that was otherwise volatile and make it
useful. That had been all well and
good, but he saw now that the machine had broken his blade-guard clean off,
leaving him at the mercy of his circular saw of a wife. What if she flew into a rage? What was he going to do, throw his steely gaze
at her? That was very funny, wasn't
it? What if she then decided that she
didn't like that look, and sent her fist through his face? If he were lucky, he'd end up in traction;
more likely, he'd be dead.
"Of
course you hid it from me," Linda went on, and he could hear her fury now
building to a crescendo. "Why would you
have given it to me, when you were planning on getting rid of me? And to think, I thought I was going to leave you." Linda's huge hands became fists, and her
eyes shone with a brittle mixture of humiliation and rage. "And isn't that what you wanted me to
think? Wanted me to leave, so you could
shack up with your mistress'my friend'and
use your little invention to turn her into your dream girl? Isn't that how it went? Isn't
it?" For a moment, David seemed to
see her glow red again, as though signifying her awesome wrath. Then Linda paused, looked down at her hands,
and forced them to open. The red aura
vanished, and David wondered if it had really been there at all. Maybe he was under so much duress that on
top of everything else he was beginning to hallucinate.
"No,"
David rasped. "No, Linda, no, you've
got it all wrong -"
Linda
continued as though she hadn't heard.
"But things didn't go quite as you planned, did they? I was just a little bit smarter that you
thought I'd be, and now helpless little Linda isn't so helpless anymore." Then she came at him. David yelped and nearly wet his pants, but
Linda only grabbed the barbell and untwisted it, freeing him. Then she stood above him, hands on her
hips. To David she looked as big as a
mountain. "This is how it's going to
be, sailor. I'm going to have another
go in front of the miraculous muscle-maker over there. Then I'm going to go out, and when I come
back I'm going to be holding Suzie-Q's head in my hand." She grinned cruelly at this thought. "After that, we'll decide on a suitable
punishment for you. I have to admit,
I'm feeling pretty good right now'better than I've felt my whole life, as a
matter of fact. But adultery is
serious, and I can't let you slide, no matter how much I might appreciate your
handiwork."
"No,
Linda, don't, please," David pleaded as she stomped away. He reached out and clutched at her rock-hard
ankle, but she ignored him.
As she stooped down to
activate the device, she paused and looked back at him. "And whatever you do while I'm gone, you're
not to so much as touch this thing. If
I come back and find it's been tampered with, I'm going to be extremely upset
with you." She stared at him, and again
David was only barely able to return that flat gaze. "I believe I might even be angry enough to kill you." After watching to make sure this had sunk
in, Linda pushed the button and went to stand in front of the wall.
"Noooo," David moaned, his eyes streaming.
At first, everything
occurred as before, but soon it became clear that something had gone wrong'or,
from David's point of view, had gone right.
Linda didn't tilt her head back, didn't moan, and most importantly she
didn't grow. Instead she only stood
there, looking a little bewildered as the stream of red energy poured into her
abdomen but failed to affect her. She
didn't even glow red this time. When
the machine cut out, she immediately went to the mirror, to confirm what she
already knew: she had not grown, not so
much as an inch. The machine had given
to her in a single jolt what it had given to Susan in three, but apparently it
had nothing else to offer. "No," Linda hissed between clenched
teeth, balling her hands into fists again.
"No, it's not enough, I must have more, I must have more'!"
All at once Linda's body
glowed like a stoplight, and now David saw what it meant: she was growing again, and now she was doing
it on her own, without any help from the machine. "I need more," she
grunted, "more," and she was getting
more with each passing second. She rose
to six-and-a-half feet tall, and then she realized what had happened and
relaxed. "Yes," she gloated, "I'm bigger,
but'" Then she realized that she had
stopped growing again, and it made her furious all over again. "What? It's still not enough! That bitch Susan is still bigger than me, I
must have more'!" The glow resumed, and soon she was seven
feet tall. Her back was a massive delta
of ridged white marble, but for David and Amy it was mostly obscured by her
hair. She kept growing even as her
panties split and fluffed soundlessly on the floor beneath her. Her bare ass defied description, at least a
description that David or Amy could have managed. She kept growing until her head touched the ceiling, and then she
relaxed again. "There!" she
announced. "Now we'll see what that bitch Susan has to say. She picked the wrong fucking marriage to
break up, and it's time she learned it."
Linda turned around, smiling at David's stricken expression. "Actually, honey, I've changed my mind'you
can do whatever you want to that silly little machine of yours," she said with
a sweetness that contrasted weirdly with her deep voice. "I certainly don't have any more use for
it. In fact, it might be better if you
just took a hammer to it, so this doesn't get any messier than it already
is." Then she turned back around and
walked straight through the cinderblock wall.
The blocks shattered as she passed through them, not slowing her at all.
David started to run after
her, then paused and looked at the machine, torn. She was right about the machine, no doubt about that'best to
destroy it now, before someone else could get to it and cause trouble. But at the same time he couldn't just let
Linda go out on a rampage. What if
someone saw her and called the cops?
What if the cops then tried to subdue her, going so far as to draw their
guns, and that legendary temper of hers drove her to try and take them all on
single-handedly? The thought of her
being cut down in a hail of gunfire, with that look of twisted rage on her
face, made up his mind. He turned and
ran outside.
three-four
Amy stood up from behind the freezer, very alert from
her continuous adrenaline rush but still feeling like a woman caught in a
strange dream. In a way, she hoped that
she was dreaming; everything she'd seen over the past few minutes had just been
too weird. She went to the hole that
Linda'or, rather, the perfect being that had been Linda'had made and looked
out. The perfect being had crossed her
own lawn and was going up to Amy's driveway.
As Amy watched, horrified, the perfect being hauled back her perfect leg
and then booted Amy's Lumina. Only two
years old, with six thousand miles on it, the Lumina now flew through the air
with its entire chassis bent and its passenger-side door hanging out like a
tongue, the front wheels spinning. It
landed upside-down on top of an old Ford Tempo parked across the street, both
cars crumpling with a loud bang! that
sent safety-glass spitting out in all directions. The perfect being laughed at what she had done, then resumed
striding down the street. Amy heard an
engine rev, and then she saw David's car pull out of the driveway and begin to
follow the perfect being at a cautious distance.
Amy
turned away, back toward the workshop.
All of this was a dream, surely.
Surely the things she had just witnessed could not be real. She began to walk slowly inside, wondering
when she would wake up. Probably before
she had a chance to use it herself, she thought. As she took another step she felt lumps under her foot, and took
a step back. Something shiny was on the
ground: buttons. The buttons that had popped off of Linda's
shirt. Amy stared at them for nearly a
full minute, entranced. Not a dream,
then. Dreams didn't have this much
detail. And that meant that everything
she had seen in the last few minutes, including her wrecked car and razed
house, had been real. Linda's shredded
clothes were on the ground, along with some other clothes she hadn't noticed
before. She wondered what the other
clothes meant. As she wondered she went
to the machine, the machine that looked exactly like a camcorder, and studied
it carefully. She was starting to feel
smart again, and as she recalled Linda's accusations she began to put things
together. The first thing was the fact
that that fat-ass little blonde who'd been flirting with Jim was named
Susan. The second thing was the
sweet-faced little blonde whore who'd had him eating out of her hand on
Tuesday. The sweet-faced little whore
had been way younger than Susan, but there had been a resemblance all right'she
could have been Susan's younger sister.
On its own, not too important.
But factor this wonderful little machine into the equation, and what did
you get? Amy had been watching Linda's
growth very closely, and she realized that during the first stages her body had
looked an awful lot like that of the sweet-faced little whore. So she and Susan were the same. It was Susan who'd gotten the first taste of
the machine, and apparently David had given her just enough to give her that
fit body and that disarming face, which she had used to seduce Jim. After afterward? Amy added the barbell around David's neck, the hole in the
kitchen wall, the other torn clothes, and her own demolished house to the
equation. What was the answer? Who had Linda announced she was going to
kill? Again, Susan. Susan, who had tried to woo Amy's husband
away, not once but twice. Susan, who
had retaliated by destroying Amy's home.
"You crazy little bitch," Amy
breathed, but with respect:
one-upmanship was a game she knew well.
But at the same time she would eagerly play the game herself, and she
found herself wishing that she had punched Susan more than four times. A lot more, until Susan's pretty little body
had been broken and dying. Revenge
would be a lot trickier now, if the state of her house was any indication of
Susan's current size and strength. But
Amy was confident she could handle it.
"I'm going break your pretty little neck," Amy said to the empty
workshop, which as it happened was actually empty this time. Linda had been right to suggest that David
destroy the machine, Amy thought; but he hadn't, and that had opened the door
to her own opportunity.
"Bad luck for you, honey,"
she breathed, peering at the buttons.
Both Susan and Linda had shared an initial distaste for sporting huge
muscles, thinking they made a woman look grotesque. Amy, however, had no such notions. Ever since she was a little tomboy, she'd been intent on making
herself as big and as strong as she could possibly be, and for her there was
nothing more beautiful than the sight a bulky, defined woman. Without any real hesitation, she pushed the
button that she had seen Linda use and then stood where the wall had been.
The lights in the room
dimmed, the machine chittered, and the rainbow beam shot out. This time the subsequent energy stream was
an evil purple-black color, like an ultraviolet light, and then Amy closed her
eyes and moaned in pleasure as she felt herself grow. As with Susan, she was doing this to herself in order to get
revenge, but she now found that the feelings caused by the machine's energy
stream were very much their own reward.
When it was over, she opened her eyes and looked down at herself. "Tits!" she cried joyously. Her chest, formerly all but flat, now
sported globes the side of basketballs, the lower arcs of which hung nearly to
the line of her belly button. Her black
cotton running singlet had been destroyed and now hung from her waist. "I have huge tits!" She went to the mirror to admire herself,
and it was nearly a full minute before she realized what was wrong: her boobs were big, all right, but the rest
of her was completely unchanged. Her
musculature was impressive, but that was just because it had always been
impressive.
"No!" Amy cried in
frustration. "No no no! Why didn't it work? Why didn't it?" She clenched her fists and raged at her reflection, just as she
had seen Linda do. But there was no red
glow, and she didn't get any bigger. At
last she forced herself to stop and stood up straight, studying herself
pensively. She looked down at her tits
- and looked - and gradually realized how turned-on she was becoming. She had never been a very sexual woman'this
was, someone more impartial than Amy might have deduced, why Jim felt so
compelled to flirt with other women'but she was feeling extremely sexual
now. Put more bluntly, she felt like a
bitch in heat, ready to rut with the first mutt that came along. Her breasts tingled maddeningly, and when
she put her hands on them as if to quell that tingle, it only made it ten times
worse. She rubbed and pulled at them
like a girl in a porno movie pretending that she just couldn't get enough, only
the horrible thing was Amy really couldn't
get enough. She cupped and caressed
them, and then without realizing what she was doing she tugged at the nipples,
milking herself. Cool liquid dribbled
into her palms, but it wasn't milk.
Whatever it was, it was as black as crude oil, and nearly as
viscous. Amy didn't look at it; she
just licked it off her palms. For a
brief moment she became that ultraviolet color, not like a woman but like a
glass shell made in the shape of a woman and filled with purple neon, and she
grew an inch. Again, she failed to
notice this, and just went on molesting herself. "Ah - f-f-feels so good -
I hafta'hafta'" Then Amy did what she
had to do, rolling one enormous breast up and taking its long, fat nipple into
her mouth. She began suckling herself,
helpless to stop. Immediately the
ultraviolet glow returned and Amy's whole body began to grow, her breasts
growing as well yet coming a little more into proportion with the rest of her
body. Amy still didn't notice this,
didn't notice anything but how incredible she felt, until finally something
cracked her smartly on the top of her head.
She dropped her breast, thinking with terror that she would open her
eyes to find Susan or Linda standing there, frowning down at her
furiously. She opened her eyes, but
there was nothing above her but the ceiling, and that was close enough for her
to tilt her head back and touch with her nose.
She looked around at the room, which was now like a kiddie version of
the room she had been in a few moments ago.
Her clothes and shoes had all fallen off, and the copper-toned body
which stood under her was even more impressive than the one Linda had left
with. "I grow - when I suck my tits!" Amy said, and then laughed wildly at how
ridiculous it sounded. Like Linda, she
now had her own unique, amazing superpower, like the heroine in a comic
book. But somehow Amy doubted that any
comic books had been issued which contained plots and characters like this.
Amy looked around the room
some more, and then her eyes settled on David's machine, looking small and
vulnerable yet very dangerous. "I think
you have a point, Linda," Amy murmured in a very deep voice as she went to it,
crouching slightly to avoid hitting her head on the hanging fluorescent
bars. "I may have to kill you later,
but I think you really had a good point.
Three is enough; we don't need anyone else joining our club." With that, she reached down, took the tiny
camcorder into her palm, and squeezed.
The screw holding it to the tripod snapped in half, and when Amy opened
her hand what sprinkled on the floor was nothing but little bits. "There," she said.
She went outside and studied
the world from her new elevation. The
view, she decided, was much improved.
She was confident that she was now big enough and strong enough to
handle anything that Susan or Linda could throw at her - but all the same she
couldn't stop thinking about sucking her tits.
"Little more bulk couldn't hurt," she decided, and then rolled both
nipples up to her mouth. She stuck one
in each corner and went back to work, watching with slitted eyes as the world
sank and shrank around her. Her waist
was about level with the roofpeak of the Carsons' house when a tiny voice
squeaked, "Amy! Good God, is that you?"
Amy reluctantly allowed her
nipples to fall out of her mouth and opened her eyes fully. It was Jim standing down there'Jim, who had
probably driven over in a last-ditch effort to bury the hatchet with her, and
now looked about as big as her Ken doll had looked to her when she was a little
girl. He only stood there, gaping, as
she reached down, pinched the back of his shirt, and lifted him up to eye level
with her.
"Yes, it is me, Jim," Amy
said, pleased with how her voice now boomed, like that of a powerful
goddess. "And I want you to know that
I've forgiven you for what you did'almost.
Right now I'm going to kill the little blonde whore you were with, and
I'm sure after that's done that I can forgive and forget. After that - well, I suppose I'll conquer
the world." Amy hadn't considered this
before, but now that she did it made perfect sense to her. She tried to imagine herself going back to
the gym she way she was now, making schedules, balancing the books, and talking
up the gym to prospective members, and the notion made her laugh. Really, what else was there for her to do now, if not rule the world? Still laughing, she allowed Jim to
fall. He seemed to land okay, but rather
than get up he just sprawled back on all fours and watched his giantess of a
wife go striding off, laughing and massaging her unbelievable tits.
"I'd find somewhere safe to
hole up, honey," Amy called back to him.
"Things could get dangerous for a while."
fourth quad: damnation and denouement
four-one
Susan entered the gym the same way she'd exited
David's house, by walking right through a wall. This wall was concrete rather than wood and plaster, but that
didn't matter to Susan. Inside, people jerked
up in the LifeCycles, dropped dumbbells on their toes, and fell off the
treadmills, stunned by the sight of the nude blonde muscle goddess now striding
into their midst.
"Where
is she?" Susan growled.
No
one answered.
"Where
is Amy Reynolds?"
Still
no response. Among the people
assembling nervously before her, Susan recognized a large man who was a friend
of Jim'though he wasn't so large to her anymore. Susan had been smitten with this man as well, but he'd treated
the middle-aged little blonde like she hadn't existed at all. Now, as everyone stared dumbly at her,
mesmerized by her size and by her nudity, she stepped forward and grabbed the
man's arm. He tried to twist away, but
Susan's grip was like iron, and then the golden glow suffused her and she began
to absorb his muscle mass. "Not here,"
she said faintly. According to the
man's memories, Amy had left the gym more than an hour ago. She saw other things too, like the fact that
the man had broken his girlfriend's jaw when he was nineteen. Susan took some more of what he had, and
then she allowed him to collapse to the ground, feeling greatly refreshed but
at the same time soiled. She looked
around. Among the crowd were two of the
largest men she had ever seen. She
recognized them as well; she'd never met them, but they practically lived in
the gym. They tried to get away when
she came at them, but she caught them by their beefy forearms. The rest of the crowd had had enough'they
scattered. The two men began beating at
the giantess, trying to get her to let go.
In response Susan curled them to her like a pair of misbehaving boys,
mashing their faces into the sides of her breasts. "Might as well go with a smile," she told the squirming men, even
as she grew and they shrank. This continued
for several moments, and then an unpleasant thought which had been trying to
occur to Susan all along finally broke through the golden fog of her
pleasure. I'm a vampire! she realized, with dawning horror. What had taken these men years of intensive
labor to build, she was sucking out of them in a few breezy seconds, and all at
once she pushed them away, allowing them to fall to the ground. She looked around the room, which was now
empty except for her and the three unconscious men. The ceilings were very tall, but the room seemed cramped to her,
and the machines were like toys. Amy
wasn't here. Susan went back out
through the hole, and when her forehead hit the top and broke it higher as she
went, she only blinked. If Amy wasn't
here, where was she? Home? Susan had destroyed her home. The police station might be a better
guess. A friend's house might be a
better guess too. Suppose she had gone
to David's house for help? Suppose that
she had then found him, and found his invention sitting untended? Suppose further that she had somehow learned
what it was and how to use it? Susan
wanted very much to go home now'if she kept this up, grabbing men and adding
their mass to her own, pretty soon the only way she was going to be able to get
into her house was to crawl. And what
would she say when she saw Janey? Or
would Janey just flee, screaming, from the scary giant? The thought of her own daughter no longer
being able to stand the sight of her got Susan moving. She would go by David's house, get the
machine, then take it home and cool out for a while. Get her bearings. Getting
Amy was maybe still important, maybe not.
She would have to see.
Susan
was so intent on these thoughts that she didn't see the huge fist which came
flying at her, not until it had been planted square in the center of her
jaw. She went flying herself, up and
over, and landed prone in the middle of the deserted street. She pushed up on her hands, then came to her
feet, wondering who in the world was strong enough to knock her off her feet
like that. There was a warm trickle
running down to her chin, from the inside of her lips by the feel of it. Before her stood a beautiful, fierce-looking
redhead, as tall and as naked as Susan herself was.
Susan
wiped her mouth with the back of one fist.
"Linda, you're home early," she said, speaking as David for a
moment. David's affection for Linda
filled her as well, and Susan fought it down.
If there was one thing that was going to get her hurt now, it was not
taking this new competitor seriously enough.
"Too bad for you," Susan went on in a harder tone. "If you'd stayed in Stanton until Sunday,
like you were supposed to, David would have gone missing, but you'd still be
alive." Susan felt like she were reciting
lines of dialogue from a movie, but somehow that seemed appropriate, Everything that had happened up to now had
been like something from a movie, hadn't it?
The kind of movie that had been very popular in Japan right after World
War II, the kind in which guys in rubber suits ran amok in scale reproductions
of Tokyo. Monster movies. She went on, "Now I'll have to kill you, as
well."
"Don't
make me laugh, bitch," Linda said. "Or
should I say, friend. My friend,
who slept with my husband behind my back."
Susan
winced. She and David had been very
careful, but somehow Linda had found out, and that added a new and very
dangerous level to the game. For, at
heart, this was how Susan approached this:
a game. It was all
play-acting. Like flirting, which Susan
had reveled in all her adult life:
projecting an intimacy that wasn't there, while obscuring the primal
needs that were there. Even when she had threatened David after her
second and especially after her third incarnations, she hadn't been serious'just
play-acting, just seeing how far she could push him. She had, in essence, been pretending to be the schoolyard bully
that she'd never had the strength to be.
She'd found it fun, and harmless fun at that. What she had done to the three men in the gym, and what she had
just said to Linda, well, maybe that wasn't so harmless. But one side effect of her growth were the
overwhelming feelings of confidence and narcissism that pushed her to the brink
of sociopathy, which in turn led her to take her game too far, as she had just
done now.
"My
friend, who knocked my beloved
husband unconscious," Linda went on with mounting fury. Her fists were clenched and her arms began
quaking. "My friend, who tampered with what she had no business tampering with,
who used what should have been mine
alone!" She took a step forward,
her heel fracturing the asphalt, her whole body glowing like red neon, and with
sudden horror Susan realized that Linda was somehow growing even larger. Knowing that if she didn't do something
right away, she was going to lose control of the situation (and control was what had made the game so
much fun in the first place), Susan ran forward, meaning to embrace Linda and
begin absorbing her mass. But Linda
remembered what Susan had done to David, and she managed to side-step the
rushing blonde, moving swiftly for all her size. As Linda turned, her outstretched hand caught the steel shaft of
a street lamp, and then she plucked it out of the ground like a corn stalk and
swung it. It struck Susan's midsection
and curled around her in a U-shape. The
pain was immense, but Susan didn't think she was seriously injured, and now she
was glad she'd grown as large as she had; any less, and the pole might have
simply lopped her in half.
The pain served to wake
Susan up to the seriousness of what was really happening here, and before Linda
could react Susan snatched the street lamp out of her hand. "You think you can hurt me with steel?"
Susan sneered, then pulled the top third from the rest of the lamp as though
the metal were taffy and threw it at Linda like a hatchet. Linda brought one arm up to protect her
face, and the projectile bounced off from her upper arm and shoulder, leaving
red scratches on her milky skin. The
red glow returned and she began to get even bigger, the scratches
disappearing. Susan ran at her again,
but this time Linda looped her arm up and Susan went flying almost straight up
into the air. The blonde crashed into
the third floor of a building, then fell down to the street. Bricks and glass fell on top of her. Not daring to take the time to see if she
was all right, Susan lunged forward out of the cloud of dust, picked up a
manhole cover, and threw it like a Frisbee.
It traveled with the speed of a bullet, struck Linda above her right
breast, then ricocheted away, driving Linda to one knee. Then Susan was on her, toppling the gigantic
redhead onto her back and trying desperately to pin her down, hands on her
wrists and shins on her legs. The
asphalt crumbled and sank everywhere Linda's weight rested on it, and Susan saw
that if her former friend grew any bigger, trying to subdue her would become as
hopeless as Janey trying to subdue an adult.
Then her own golden aura returned, and Linda began to shrink while Susan
began to grow. Again, the orgasmic
ecstasy of all that power, and Susan had to concentrate hard on keeping Linda
pinned.
"NOOOOO!" Linda roared, and then bucked Susan off in one titanic
convulsion. Susan landed on her back,
bigger, but not nearly big enough.
Linda, for her part, had realized her own peril, and was on Susan
instantly, punching and kicking the smaller giantess all over the street,
making her blows hard while keeping the length of contact at a minimum. Bones broke. Susan'bruised, benumbed, and bloodied'realized that she was going
to lose the game after all, and that she was probably even going to die in the
process. The knowledge made her
angry'angry at Linda, but mostly angry at herself, for blithely getting herself
into this pickle in the first place.
Linda could tell Susan was angry, because suddenly Susan was the one glowing cherry-neon, and Linda paused in her
assault, not sure of what she was seeing.
But it was really happening:
Susan was growing on her own, her cuts and bruises fading as she did.
Susan stopped when she was
the same size as Linda again and began to laugh triumphantly. "Now do you understand?" she taunted, her
voice rattling windows in their frames, and then she rushed forward and grabbed
Linda's upper arms. Susan's aura
returned, gold again. Linda began to
shrink as Susan began to grow, and as Susan's strength increased she clamped
her hands like titanium shackles, insuring that Linda couldn't twist away.
"No!" Linda shouted. "I won't be weak again! I won't!" Her red glow returned, but she didn't grow
any bigger. In fact, she realized with
utter horror, now Susan was growing twice as fast, her gold aura filled with
flecks of red. Linda's rage was being
used against her'Susan was sucking it up like a battery. Her rage vanished, replaced by fear, and the
red flecks disappeared from Susan's aura.
But Susan went on absorbing her size mercilessly. Soon Linda was clutched to Susan's chest
like a child, and then held in her hand like a doll. At last Linda was five-foot three and girlishly slender, and the
gold glow disappeared.
Linda cowered in the shadow
of Susan's thumb, which was like a twisted column of flesh at one end of the
hardpan bowl of her palm. She darted
fearful glances around the edges of the hand, saw how far below her the street
was, and realized that Susan must be fifty feet tall now. The massive body-imprint, where Linda had
lain while Susan had pinned her, now seemed to Linda like somebody's bad idea
of a joke.
She made herself look
up. Susan was staring down at her like
a goddess, impassive, contemplative.
Then there was a sudden burst of wind, and Linda put her hands up as she
was buffeted and then coated with so much moisture that her hair became lank. But it was no wind, she realized; it was
merely Susan exhaling. When she brought
herself to look up again, Susan was still staring at her.
"WE WERE FRIENDS ONCE,
LINDA," Susan said, in a voice that was calm yet seemed to make Linda's whole
skeleton vibrate. "AND DESPITE WHAT HAS
HAPPENED TODAY, I WOULD HAVE US REMAIN FRIENDS STILL. I WILL, PERHAPS, SPARE YOUR LIFE. BUT I WILL GRANT YOU THIS MERCY ON ONE CONDITION: YOU
MUST NOT ATTEMPT TO CHALLENGE ME AGAIN."
She paused to let this sink in.
"DO YOU AGREE? OR SHALL I
DESTROY YOU HERE AND NOW, AND SAVE MYSELF THE BOTHER OF DOING IT LATER?"
It took Linda's
terror-benumbed mind a few moments to process this; when it finally sank in,
she began nod. She would agree to
anything, anything at all, if it would stop those massive fingers from closing
and squashing her like a bug.
Susan's expression softened,
but only fractionally; Linda wouldn't have noticed the change at all, had not
Susan's head been so massive. "I HAVE
MADE YOU NORMAL AGAIN," Susan went on, "AND WHATEVER YOU MAY FEEL NOW, THAT IS
A BLESSING. RETURN TO YOU HUSBAND, YOUR
CHILDREN, AND CARRY ON WITH YOUR LIFE.
I NOW GIVE YOU THIS OPPORTUNITY; I WILL NOT GIVE IT A SECOND TIME."
With that, Susan crouched
and carefully set Linda back on the street.
Linda nearly puked'the descent had probably seemed gentle to Susan, but
to her it had been like the world's fastest express elevator, and one without
any walls or roof'but she managed to hold it down. Then she stood up and looked at the awesome sight before her, the
backside of a perfect blonde-haired woman as big as a Macy's Thanksgiving Day
parade float. There were some blood
stains on her, left over from when Linda had beaten her, but Susan's surface
area had grown a great deal since then and the stains were very faint. Linda watched her vanquisher stride away,
causing small tremors to race through the ground with each step she took.
four-two
Susan began to laugh, a bright, joyful sound that
was heard as many as twenty miles away.
Had she enjoyed ordering David around and scaring all those people at
the gym? Sure, but this, she thought,
had been a million times better. A kajillion times better. Never mind that absorbing Linda's
considerable size had been like the ultimate orgasm; she had passed judgment, passed judgment, like some kind of
fucking goddess'the Goddess, even. She had
held Linda's life in her hand, had literally held Linda in her hand. And then
she had passed judgment. And Linda had
been as helpless to affect her as she would've been to affect any other
cataclysmic force of nature. Passed judgment, I passed judgment upon her'Susan
couldn't get enough of the phrase. And
then Susan began to wonder if this was reducible to play-acting anymore. Was she just pretending to be a goddess? Or was
she a goddess? As huge as she was
now, it was hard to imagine ever getting to her normal size again, especially
now that she had two ways to get bigger, by absorbing size from other people,
and by simply getting angry. Maybe it
would be better to just stay like this, and let everything else take care of
itself. She noticed people staring out
windows and gawping at her from the sidewalks, and wondered if she should make
some kind of speech to them, about how everyone and everything was now
answerable to her. Everyone talked about
politics, but Susan thought that she was now lofty enough to do something about
it.
But
then she thought of Janey, and her notions of goddesshood collapsed. Janey needed her mommy, and Susan wouldn't
even consider depriving her of that.
Couldn't even consider it. And
so she would have to allow herself to shrink.
Susan paused for a moment, making herself think things through, then
continued on toward David's house. She would get the machine, put it someplace
safe, then find somewhere to hide while her size drained away again. She wasn't sure if this would happen at all,
but she had to try. For Janey's sake,
she had to find a way out of this mess.
Now that she thought about it, it seemed ridiculous to her, how big she
was, and thus how out of hand everything had gotten. She didn't need to be the size of Godzilla just to put the hurt
on one single woman.
"What?"
a massive voice boomed from beside her.
"You're even bigger than I am!"
At first Susan thought it must be Linda talking, that she
had broken her promise not to grow again.
But, even amplified, she knew it wasn't Linda's voice. She turned, and had a moment of fear when
she saw that it was Amy, somehow nearly as tall as Susan herself. Then Susan relaxed, and even began to
appreciate the situation. However it
had happened, it seemed right to Susan that Amy should have stumbled on David's
machine herself. If she hadn't, if
Susan had found a normal-sized Amy that she could have squashed with her pinky,
it would've made all this the most ludicrous sort of overkill, like swatting a
fly by dropping an A-bomb on it. Then
she considered the fact that if she was going to take care of Amy, it could
only be by absorbing her size the way she had Susan's. And that meant taking an even bigger step toward
goddesshood. Susan made herself calm
down and reassume her goddess role, molding her face with the same imperious
contempt she'd shown toward Linda before their battle. The important thing now was to win this
fight; if she survived, then she could worry about how she was going to get
herself back to normal.
"Amy," Susan greeted with a cold smile. "I see you found out my little secret."
"That's right.
Found it, used it, smashed it.
We don't need anyone else joining our little club, do we?"
Susan nodded; this, at least, was good news. "I'm glad to see you like this," she said
honestly. "It will make you death that
much more enjoyable for me."
"I don't think so, slut," Amy said, with a confidence
that unsettled Susan a little.
Proportion-wise, Amy looked pretty much the same as she always had,
except for her tits, which, even taking her new size into account, were
unbelievable. "Watch this'I'm going to
show you my secret, just before I
kill you." With that, she rolled her
tits up and brought those teat-like nipples into either side of her mouth and
began to gulp whatever came out of them.
A glow like ultraviolet light consumed her skin, and then she began to
grow.
Susan laughed; in spite of this new danger, she couldn't
help it. "That's your power?" she jeered.
"You grow when you suck your own tits?"
She took a step forward. "I have
got to try this out for myself."
Susan reached for Amy; Amy, who hadn't seen what Susan
had done to David, didn't even try to avoid her. Susan's hands clamped onto Amy's upper arms, which were now even
bigger than her own. Amy could have
taken Susan at that point, could have beaten her huge rival to death; but she
was too fixated on sucking her breasts.
Susan's gold glow appeared. Amy
stopped growing, and then she began to shrink as Susan grew. Much of the growth came in Susan's breasts,
which became as large as Amy's. Susan
sighed'the feeling was incredible. Amy,
realizing what was happening, allowed her nipples to fall out of her mouth and
shoved Susan away.
"What, no more?" Susan said, then chuckled evilly. "Well, no matter. I've got my own super-tits now."
To Amy's horror, Susan put her own elongated nipples into her mouth and
sucked them as Amy had done. A purple
glow suffused her, and she began to grow.
She drank until she was a head taller than Amy and then made herself
stop. "Oooh, yes, I love this!" Susan said. She lifted her head, shut her eyes, and
flung her arms over her head; her glorious tits, now the size of hot-air
balloons, bounced everywhere. "I LOVE
SUCKING MY OWN TITS!" she bellowed to the world. Then she grinned down at Amy.
"Thanks for the gift. In return
I'm going to kill you."
In a panic, Amy began reaching for her tits again, but
then Susan was on her. Susan pinned Amy's
arms to her sides, the gold glow reappearing as she began to absorb Amy's
size. Amy struggled wildly, but Susan
had a sudden impish idea about how to prevent her from getting away: she lifted the smaller giantess and began
suckling. Amy instantly stopped
struggling and began to tremble and moan in ecstasy, helpless to do
otherwise. When Amy was reduced to half
Susan's size, Susan stopped drinking the black liquid and held Amy at arm's
length, grinning at her cruelly. She
was absorbing Amy's thoughts and memories as well, but they seemed to her like
the sorts of small, idiot things an ant or a grasshopper might think about,
nothing that could engender her sympathy.
This was the payback, Susan
told herself. This was her revenge. This was Amy's due for making her feel
small and powerless. Amy became the
size of a child to Susan, the size of a Barbie doll, the size of a bug. Amy became her normal size again, but as Susan
continued to hold her she lost even that, until she was as slender as Linda had
been.
Vanquished, Amy stared up at Susan, too stunned to even
cry. She had come into Susan's game
gambling with massive stakes, and she had lost her shirt. It was the first time in her life she had
been beaten in a contest of physical strength, and she was simply unable to
process it.
Susan stared down at the black-haired mote of a woman in
her palm, feeling more like a goddess than ever. Amy's breasts, she noticed, were still very large in relation to
the rest of her, and it seemed likely that she could use them to grow back to
Susan's size if she wanted, or even larger.
Susan knew that the only way to prevent that possibility (or, really,
inevitability) was to kill her.
If she had thought it over, Susan probably would have
chickened out, too disturbed by the thought of taking a life to go through with
it, whatever the consequences from sparing Amy might have been. But she was flying higher than ever after
her latest absorption, and extinguishing the only real danger to herself seemed
like a damned good idea to her. She
rolled Amy onto the side of her curled index finger and pressed the pad of her
thumb up across the curl. There was a
small crunch, then warmth, accompanied by a spurt of red mist. Susan opened her hand and looked at the
pulpy stain on her fingertips with a strange mixture of satisfaction and
incomprehension. Was this what she'd
intended all along? To take Amy's
life? That could hardly be called a
"lesson," now could it? Amy couldn't
exactly be expected to change her ways now that she was a cooling smear of
protoplasm.
four-three
People had assembled
downtown to watch the watermelon parade; now they were five blocks over,
watching the women. The giant
women. Only, now it was down to one
giantess, the blonde; somehow she'd made her redheaded rival normal-sized
again, and taken herself from a freak to a wonder in the process. People on the sidewalks stared at the
redhead wandering absently down the center of the street, not just because she
was as naked as a jaybird, and not just because some of them began to realize
they recognized her. They stared
because five minutes ago she'd been one story tall, and barely a minute ago
she'd been two stories tall, and now she was about five-foot-three.
Linda didn't register the other people, much less the
fact that they were staring at her. She
was lost inside herself, pondering what Susan had said to her. The thought of her life with David and the
kids seemed vague to her, like something out of a dream. Yet the memory of her brief time as an
giantess, from her lashing out at David to the battle with Susan, also seemed
garish and unreal. What seemed
especially strange about the latter was the fact that her temper, which had
always been a great hindrance to her, had instead become a source of
nourishment. Linda considered this
shifted dynamic as a simpleton may consider the mechanics of a magic
8-ball. Hindrance - or nourishment. Weakness, or strength. Which would it be?
Someone pushed his way through the crowd and ran toward
her. It was David, her husband. Or the man who had been her husband, up
until the point when Linda had first discovered that she could grow just by
getting pissed off. Linda knew that the
meaning of "to husband" was the same as to conserve, and she supposed in that
respect he had failed to meet the bar for a while. Not his fault; it was hard to keep a woman in check when she had
more power in her little finger than you had in your whole body. But apparently David didn't know he wasn't
her husband anymore, because when he reached her he gathered her up in a
hug. Linda let herself be hugged. She didn't much care for the feel of strong
arms wrapping around her, but she didn't try to resist. David was strong enough to do that or
anything else he wanted to her.
For now.
David, for his part, was disturbed by the way Linda stood
limply in the circle of his arms. He
liked even less the blank look in her eyes, as though she'd just walked out of
a bomb blast and was still deep in shock.
Her body was very cold, and he supposed that she really was in
shock. He supposed further that he
should take her to the hospital. He
stepped back and examined her critically, still holding her by the
shoulders. Her nipples and aureoles
remained dark red, and her hair was still long and tangled, giving her a savage
look. Ironically, now she had the body
shape she'd always been pining for, slender yet shapely. So his machine had been a success'just in an
extremely roundabout way.
"Linda?" he said, and brushed the hair away from those
pale, unfocused eyes with a tender motion.
"Linda, honey, are you okay?"
Her eyes came into focus, and she looked up at him. She said nothing.
"I'll tell you what, Linda. Let's just get out of here, get the kids, and drive away." David spoke with increasing conviction as he
realized how much better of an idea this was than going to the hospital. Susan could grow as tall as Mount Everest
and rule the whole fucking world; for David, the only important thing was to
save Linda, to get her free and clear from this madness. "We'll get in the car, drive to Bosco, pick
up Billy and Cammie, and then just go on vacation. Okay? Linda?"
The faint booming sounds of Susan's footsteps stopped,
and then there was the sound of women conversing, amplified hugely. Linda looked up, and David looked as
well. To his horror, there was now a third giantess, facing off with
Susan. This one had black hair and
deeply bronzed skin, and as David studied her he realized that it was his
neighbor, Amy Reynolds. Somehow she,
too, had been exposed to his invention.
David wondered bleakly if even now curious women were streaming in and
out of his workshop, making themselves big and then going after each other,
avenging their petty jealousies and acting out their trivial rivalries on a
titanic scale. Then he heard Amy say
something to the effect that she'd destroyed the machine after using it, and
David relaxed a little. Maybe this was
the extent of it, then. As bad as it
was, maybe it wouldn't get worse. David
certainly wasn't going to build another machine, no matter how many fucking
dreams he had next time.
He looked back at Linda.
The late afternoon sunlight glimmered on her cheek, and he saw that she
was crying. She sniffled but didn't
wipe away the tears that beaded and then dropped from the edge of her jaw. He used his finger to wipe them away for
her. "Okay, honey?" he said in a low
voice. "Can we go now?" He put one hand on her soft arm and began to
lead her away. He'd lost some of his
muscle mass and even a little of his height to Susan, but he was still more
than capable of handling his wife.
For a few moments, she allowed herself to be led; then
she put both feet down, jerking David to a halt. The asphalt cut painfully into the soles of her bare feet, but
she ignored it. "No," she said quietly.
"Linda I think we should go now," David said more
firmly. He pulled harder.
"NO!" Linda shrieked, tearing her arm from David's
grasp. She clenched her small fists,
and as David watched, helpless to stop her, she turned red and began to
grow. Her body filled out with the same
muscle he had first seen in his workshop, her tits getting big and firm again,
and she grew to six feet, then seven.
When she was eight feet tall and he could no longer hope to intimidate
her, she allowed herself to stop.
Linda glared down at her fragile little whelp of a
husband. When she'd allowed herself to
get angry and grow, she'd thought it would give her the perspective she needed
to think more clearly, get her to a place where neither David nor anyone else
could force her to do something she didn't want to do. Now, too late, she realized how foolish that
was. Her anger fed her now, but as
always it also fed on itself; what had become her tool remained her
master. Going with David to get the
kids and then getting the hell out of Dodge might have been a really good idea,
from an objective point of view. But,
while Linda could do a lot of things at her new size, thinking objectively was
certainly not one of them. Her family meant
little to her. Her promise to that
fucking bitch Susan meant even less.
All Linda really wanted was to make the fucking bitch pay for what she
had done. But she supposed she should
give David an explanation first. She
supposed he deserved it. And it might
be fun, to rag him out one last time before she got down to work.
"Did you really think that would get me, talking about
the kids and my life with you? Does the
escaped prisoner run back to jail when he hears the sound of handcuffs? You can't imagine what it's like for me,
David, to have access to this power.
This mastery." She paused, savoring the word. "I still love you, I guess, and I'll take
care of you and kids'I'll be real good at that, once I'm as tall as the Empire
State Building and have the whole world under my thumb. But in the meantime you better stand back,
because I've got one seriously big homewrecker to take care of."
With that, Linda turned.
David was moaning for her to stop, but she ignored him, focusing instead
on Susan, who was now somehow growing bigger by sucking her own tits. Linda watched, began to get angry, began to
grow. Some of the people on the
sidelines began to cheer her on; for them, seeing the pretty redhead get back
into the game was like seeing Rocky get knocked down, stagger to his feet, and
suddenly come back with an unexpected flurry.
Linda watched Susan pick up Amy and began to molest her
tits as well, gaining a better vantage point on the battle with each passing
moment. Susan absorbed Amy's size, growing
again, but Linda grew right along with her.
By the time Susan stopped, she was a hundred feet tall, the tallest
thing in town. But Linda was still
getting bigger. Linda got bigger as she
watched Susan shrink Amy into nothingness and then pop her like a grape. Linda was even with Susan at that point, but
she kept herself growing by imagining the particulars of Susan's betrayal. Even when she was a head taller than Susan,
Linda wouldn't allow herself to calm down.
Susan's absorptive power made her dangerous at any size, even if she was
no bigger to Linda than a flea, and Linda needed to be big enough to put her
down with a single blow. It took a lot
of rage to get that big. But getting
and staying angry had always been Linda's strong suit.
four-four
The fist came at Susan just
as it had before, seemingly from out of nowhere. One moment, she was staring at the small smear of red on her
fingers; the next, there was a huge pain in her chest, and all the wind was knocked
out of her. Ribs broke with a sound
like redwoods being snapped in half.
She sat down hard, her butt landing on a five-story building as though
it were a piano stool. A modern
building might have been able to take her weight, but this one was old and
brick, and puffed out from underneath her in a cloud of dust. She dropped and landed again, this time on a
pile of rubble.
Susan was not very surprised to see Linda standing above
her; she was surprised, however, to see that Linda was now half again as tall
as herself. Apparently her former
friend didn't plan on taking chances this time. Susan was disgusted.
Again she had made up her mind to allow herself to shrink down and
rejoin Janey, and again she was being thwarted. What do I have to do to
catch a break around here'kill every woman in town?
"ROUND TWO, BITCH," Linda said in a voice so powerful
that Susan's hair stood on end, delineating for Susan who the new goddess was,
and then brought up one huge foot. The
foot came down, and if the blow had landed, it would have been all over. Susan was only barely able to roll away in
time, flattening an adjacent building with her body in the process.
Linda's foot went into the basement of the demolished
brick building, and even further, down into the sewers. She could feel cool water flowing between
her toes. She tried to pull her foot
up, to advance on Susan and crush her before the smaller giantess could get to
her feet, but her foot hooked on the lip of the hole and she stumbled and nearly
fell'she had just increased her size by thirty times in the space of a minute, and she wasn't used to the physics
involved in maneuvering this massive new body.
She started to straighten, but before she could recover fully Susan had
scrambled behind her. Susan jumped onto
the larger giantess's back, then hooked her arms under Linda's shoulders and
laced her fingers behind her head in a desperate full-nelson. It was a move that Susan's husband had
playfully shown her, back when they were younger and still somewhat in love,
and Susan saw it was the only way she could possibly save herself. Linda stood straight, then spun from side to
side, trying to shake Susan off. Susan
held on, held her grip even as the larger giantess strained mightily to pull
her arms back down to her sides. The
pain from Susan's broken ribs was immense.
Her feet were still off the ground, but they sank closer as Linda lost
mass and Susan gained it in turn, and Susan could feel her bones quickly knit
themselves whole again. There was a
forty-foot difference in height between them, then a thirty-foot
difference. "NOOOOO!" Linda howled, louder than any dinosaur, and, desperate to
get free, flung herself backwards.
Susan hit a nine-story office building and the combined weight of the
two giantesses toppled it. Susan was
sandwiched between the fallen building and Linda's still-larger body, but she
fared better than the building's occupants, all of whom were instantly killed.
Both giantesses had the wind knocked out of them this
time. Susan was unable to resist as Linda,
still a good twenty-five feet taller than her, pulled out of her grip and stood
up. But Susan had just gained mass
while Linda had just lost it, and Susan was the quicker to recover. She ran at Linda and hugged her. The height difference shrank quickly to
twenty feet, then fifteen feet, then five.
Linda began to try and fight her way loose, but it was too late. They were the same height, and then Susan
was the taller.
As she drained the size from her opponent, Susan wondered
how she would end it this time. Surely
not by letting the normal-sized Linda walk away again; apparently it was
useless to reason with her. But at the
same time Susan didn't think she could kill her, not after the way killing Amy
had freaked her out. She'd hated Amy
with a passion, but her death had still caused Susan deep feelings of
guilt. She didn't think she could mete
out such a fate on Linda, whom, even after all this, she still liked. But she didn't know what else to do.
Susan was ten feet taller than Linda, then twenty. A moment later it would have been too late,
and Linda wouldn't have been able to do anything but watch as she was reduced to a helpless little speck in the
amphitheater-sized palm of Susan's hand.
But there was one thing that she believed might save her, and she did it
then: ducking her head to Susan's
breast, taking one nipple into her mouth, and sucking it for all she was worth.
Immediately Susan threw her head back and moaned,
helpless to stop. Her golden aura
faltered, then went out completely; meanwhile Linda's skin went that
ultraviolet color and she began to catch up to Susan again. The two giantesses were the same height when
Susan finally started to reassert some kind of control over her body and began
absorbing Linda's mass again. The gold
glow returned. Linda began sucking
harder, gulping the sweet black liquid as though her life depended on it
(which, as she was perfectly aware, it did).
Susan's aura faltered again, and Linda began to gain ground, though only
for a few moments.
And so it went:
Susan would get her head above water, and start to rob Linda of some of
her mass; then she would get lost in her orgasm again, and Linda would drink
more mass right out of Susan's own tits.
Both giantesses were steadily getting bigger, but in relation to each
other they were at a stalemate. For
Susan, it was horrible, a never-ending orgasm that had become like a giant
stone sphere rolling around in her mind'she could get on top of it, but could
only stay balanced there for a few moments before she went spilling back
off. But Susan had taken Amy's magical
tits, just as blithely as she had used David's invention, and now she was stuck
with them. Linda, for her part, found
that having to drink out of the tits of her nemesis, however good the stuff
that came out of them might make her feel, was rather degrading, and wished
there were some way for her to gain the upper hand. Each giantess fully believed that the victory of the other would
spell her own death, and so would not give up.
Finally, Susan began to get frightened. Even if they could both keep this up
forever, eventually they would get so big that their heads would come above the
upper reaches of the atmosphere, or get
so heavy that the Earth would suck them into itself like quicksand. "Luh - luh - Linda," Susan gasped. Her
pussy was dripping freely now, and without any conscious thought on her part
her hips were slamming themselves spastically into Linda's, as though begging
her to stick something between them.
"We - wuh-we - Jesus! - We have - t-to - s-s-stop -"
Linda said something.
With her tongue curled under and drawing rapidly on Susan's nipple, it
came out muffled, but Susan made it out:
Don't trust you.
"I - d-don't tru-hust -
either. B-but - nnnuh - no choice -"
All at once Susan shoved Linda away, and Linda shoved
Susan at the same time. Their auras
disappeared and their growth stopped.
They looked around in wonder at how small everything was. As for Susan, she wasn't sure, but she
thought they must be around three hundred feet tall. The day seemed brighter again, though of course now they had a
much better vantage point on the horizon.
The streets below them were dimmer, and the office buildings looked like
toys. And while Susan knew there were
people down there, watching them, she could barely make them out any more.
The two giantesses continued to look around in wonder,
but eventually their gazes came to rest on each other. For a long moment they just traded glares,
each wondering when, and if, the other one would make her play. But neither made any move to attack. Eventually they began to relax a
little. For both, the cessation of
violence was a relief; they'd both been badly scared by their standoff, though
neither would allow herself to show it.
"So this is it," Susan said at length. "A cold war. If one of us attacks, she might get lucky and win; or she might
get unlucky and die. Not exactly easy
money."
"No," Linda agreed.
After having spent all that time fighting desperately for her life,
Linda could think more clearly now, and began to believe that she could go on
without being compelled to avenge herself on Susan. That she could live with'if not necessarily alongside'an equal. She wondered if Susan felt the same way.
"The army will be here soon," Susan went on. "Armed men, at any rate. They probably can't subdue us, not at this
point, but they'll sure as hell try. We
should split up."
"Yes," Linda said.
She wouldn't have believed it, not after all that had happened, but she
was actually beginning to like this woman again. Respect her, at least.
"We could hide, you know," Susan said. "Not around here, no. But the Saharan desert, the middle of the
ocean, someplace like that. You could
even allow yourself to shrink back down, if you wanted to."
Susan looked Linda in the eye, and saw that the other
giantess wanted no such thing. And,
Susan supposed, she didn't either. Even
if it meant that Janey would never be able to hug her mother again, Susan
decided she would remain as she was. If
she had been able to shrink down and reenter the world as it had been, a world
led by people who were essentially no better or worse than she was, that would
have been one thing. But to reenter a
world which was under the absolute dominion of as single goddess? A goddess who also happened to be Linda Carson? This prospect, she
couldn't bear to consider. She liked
Linda, but she didn't trust her, not one bit.
Not with the sort of power that came with being three hundred feet tall. At this moment, Susan was a goddess, and a
goddess she would remain.
So this is what it had come to. Susan no longer thought that Janey would run screaming from her,
however'a girl would know her own mother, no matter how big she was. Kids always thought their parents were big
and powerful anyway; so what if Janey's mom was bigger and more powerful than
usual? Plus, Susan would be able to
provide for Janey in a way she could never have hoped to before.
"So this is goodbye, then," Linda said, as warmly as if
they'd been friends all along.
"Good luck," Susan said.
"Same to you," Linda returned. The two giantesses would have shaken hands, maybe even hugged, if
they were able. But both knew that
Susan's body would begin absorbing Linda's size again, whether Susan wanted it to
or not. So they exchanged one last
glance, then went their separate ways, Susan to her house, Linda to her kids'
camp.
Susan walked carefully between the buildings, most of
which weren't even knee-high to her.
Her feet sank into the asphalt like soft dirt. She almost couldn't make out individual people at all anymore,
just shimmering little blobs where a group of them had gathered together. They scattered out of her way, but slowly;
what was normal walking speed to her was as fast as a race car to them. She turned her eyes ahead. She had a very miniscule yet very special
little girl to see. Then she had to
think about her next move. Even
goddesses needed a plan. Susan couldn't
hope to rule the whole world, not while Linda was still somewhere on it. But she supposed that one hemisphere would
be enough.
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afterword
This has been my second
rewrite of a Gribble tale, and I sincerely hope it will be my last. Not to say that I haven't enjoyed it, not at
all. But, as with "Power Juice," when
the writing bug came, it came like a sickness, a delirium, to the point that
the world of David, Susan, Linda and Amy seemed like reality and the rest of my
life a hollow dream. "Power Juice X"
ate up about two weeks of my life. This
time around, knowing what I was in for, I buckled down and managed to crank out
the rough draft in four nights. Four
very long, all but sleepless nights,
I might add.
The original "Dream Machine" was actually the first story
I read on this site, and for me it remains one of the best. As with all of Gribble's yarns, the
narrative is stripped down to the bone, all stage direction and characters
drawn in big primary-color strokes, almost like a children's fantasy book with
not-so-subtle erotic overtones, but the engaging symmetry is there: one way to get big, three women dying to
have it. One's got the upper hand, then
another; reversals of fate abound.
One key difference is that the device only works on women
this time. In "Power Juice" (as in
"Super Dense," another one I may, heaven forbid, be compelled to rewrite at
some later date), the serum works on men and women equally, so it's interesting
to see how the men in the story huff and puff about their bureaucratic
business, while the women drop everything and flock to it like kids running
after the Popsicle man. Everything else
is erased in the mad dash to get power:
the scientist forgets her morals, the spy forgets her country, the wife
forgets her husband. The implication is
obvious: men already have power, so why
should they want to become giants? For
the women, it's the ultimate way to get up, get over, and break free.
I made alterations to Gribble's original version as I saw
appropriate. It didn't seem right to me
that David'to say nothing of Susan'should be as innocent as Mary's little lamb
in all this, nor did it seem right that he should set everything into motion
and then get thrown away like a used hamburger wrapper. At the very least, I wanted to give him that
last chance to try and talk Linda out of what she was doing. And I didn't want the battles to be quite so
lopsided, so skewed in Susan's favor. I
liked her the best out of the three, and I still meant for her to survive, but
she was going to have to work for it.
Most importantly, there was the way Gribble's women react
to their power, by going instantly mad with it. As I've said before, that dynamic has its own lurid appeal. But I wanted to take it farther, to see what
was really underneath. Thus, the fact
that Susan goes from unassuming single mom to heavyweight bully in four stages
instead of two, more clearly mapping the arc of her madness. Further, giving Susan a daughter to worry
about seemed like the perfect way to open up her insanity and give it context,
to give her a grounding that forced her to recognize her play-acting for what
it was and remain essentially human, however little she may have wanted
to. And it seemed more exciting to me
if the Bongiovanni-like blonde bearing down on David was more fooling around
than seriously intent on doing damage.
I've written before about the essential nature of the
female growth genre, about what makes Gribble's stories different from the
suffocating BDSM epics of Mark Newman, and I think I now have an answer. To wit, female growth stories have a very
potent erotic symbol at their center, one which is actually'gasp!'masculine. They focus on women, yes, but in a very
phallic mode. In my version of "Power
Juice," Amy Raibe starts out small and soft and silly'like a limp member,
nuh? Then, through a process which is
scientific yet incomprehensible to the lay person, she all at once becomes big
and hard and powerful, not to mention voracious. See the parallel? The
bigger the contrast between the normal woman and her muscular alter ego, the
bigger the increase in size from flaccid to erect. In Newman's "The Transfer Student," Wendy derides men for being
preoccupied with their cocks, yet it is precisely this preoccupation that drives
growth stories. Having such delicate
creatures grow into indestructible engines of mayhem seems pro-feminine on the
surface, yet when viewed in terms of this symbolism, Gribble's stories become
quite pro-masculine. Even Newman, with
his profound fem-dom bent, seems to offer a backhanded confirmation of this
theory in the final image of "The Spell":
a man who has shriveled in all respects except his penis, which is
massive and engorged.
The great sense of flux that I touted becomes another
parallel. At the end of "Power Juice
X," Amy is back to her soft, silly self again.
Can she transform back? We don't
know, any more than any man can be certain he'll be able to make iron at the
forge the next time he needs to. But I
have the feeling that, for growth fans at least, the tales of Amy and Susan
will help.
Leonard Thrope
l_thrope@hotmail.com
Seattle, Washington
May 2001