Payback : Part 1
By:  Ace   idrinkulookbetta@aol.com 
Story about a girl that loses her friend to a killer, and is given special powers to seek out her revenge.	


Denise Garlet was an average 18 yr. old girl that lived in Miami, FL. She had
a great body. Nicely toned and tanned. She was about 5'3 and weighed in at
108ibs. She worked out occasionally with her friends at the gym, but she stuck
mostly to cardio. She worked as a waitress at the local Outback Stakehouse.
Her friend, Laura Steinbeck was 19 and she too was a fitness freak. She worked
hard to get in a slim, healthy shape. She was a meter maid at May Fair on
weeknights. After a day at the gym, Denise gave Laura a ride home. On the way
a news bulletin hit the airwaves. Shocked by the emergency late breaking news,
Laura raised the volume on the radio.

-- -- --"Good afternoon ladies and gentleman. Today a notorious serial killer
has escaped from South Beach prison on Collins Dr. and Washington Ave. The man
known as 'Monstro (Monster in Spanish)' or Mark Glaude was shecduled to be
examined by doctors on a heart disorder he claimed to have been having. When
police arrived to pick-up Glaude, they found a 45 yr. old Dr. Lawler dead on
the floor along with 21 yr. old Nurse Judy Lane. Both of them stabbed and
their necks slit. Police are on the look out and the F.B.I. will take legal
hold of the case within the next 24 hrs. Police are also asking for people to
be on the lookout and to stay home during the evening. Glaude is approx. 6 '2,
weighs 324Ibs, has brown eyes and blonde hair. A tattoo of a playing cards is
on his right shoulder blade. Be aware that he could be armed and dangerous. It
was only .........." -- -- --

Laura Lowers the volume and turns to Denise. "Goddamn...HE'S HUGE!", Laura
exclaimed. "But sounds kinda hunky don't you think Denise?" Laura Laughs out
loud.

Denise shocked replies "How can you laugh? The man has just killed two
innocent people and god knows how many before them."

Laura contained her laughter to minor giggles. The rest of the drive Denise
seemed very nervous and worried while Laura was busy singing her favorite
songs that were playing on the radio. Denise finally made it to Lauras
apartment.

"So I pick you up tomorrow to go shopping?" Denise asked.

Laura answered. "No can do. today is Friday. Got to work tonight. I'll be dead
tired by morning so you just go without me."

Denise still nervous from earlier "Hey..you be carefull..that guy is on the
loose and around. Just watch yourself ok."

Laura confidently said "Hey with my night stick and a can of mace, I like to
see any one even try to get next to them..unless its a tall, dark, and
handsome stranger. Hehehe."

Denise laughed and replied "Ok ok..just remember..be careful ok?"

"Will do..call me up after you go shopping see if we can go to the beach for a
tan."

"Ok" Denise replied, "Bye..see you".

Laura waved and shouted "BYE BYE!". Denise laughed and drove off home.

Denise arrived home. Her being single, she basically had nothing to do when
she stepped inside. She fed her 2 dogs Jojo and Grunt. Her apartment was a one
bedroom, one bathroom, kitchen/living/dinning room on the 8th floor. Her
window looked unto the beach. It always relaxed her to sit outside her patio
and read a box. After some basic chores, Denise grabbed a light snack and went
unto her patio for a night of reading under the stars. At about 11:32pm,
Denise fell asleep reading.

Meanwhile, Laura was hard at work. She was writing parking tickets to the left
and right. She worked on May Fair where teens now a days love to go to hang.
She picked up alot of guys working but she was just a tease so nothing
serious. At about 4:56am in a parking lot next to a restaurant, Laura found a
82' Chevy Monte Carlo parked sideways taking 3 - 4 slots. Laura disappointed
said, "Great, And I was soo close to going home too." Laura took out her pen
and pad to write the ticket. Oddly enough, No license plate or owner was
found. She tried to look inside but the tinted windows denied her. She grabbed
her walkie-talkie to call a tow truck to clear the automobile. As soon as she
was about to give her call sign and location, she was knocked out from behind.

Dawn came and the sun rays hit Denise's face and woke her up little by little.
Denise yawned and stretched her body. she out down her book and glasses and
went inside her house to have some coffee. She looked at the clock and noticed
it was only 6:23am. She thought to herself, "Well, Laura said later we'd go
shopping in the morning or early afternoon., so that gives me time to visit
Grandma." She sat down at the table turned on the radio and read the
newspaper. 2 hrs later Denise went to her Grandmas in Westchester. She talked
about her life, parents, relationships, etc. She ate lunch and played with her
little cousins that were there. Time flew by and with no word from Laura,
Denise thought to herself she must have been really tired and slept in. At
about 7:23pm Denise decided to go home and call up Laura. On the way home
Denise flattened one of her tires on the roads. She spent about 34 mins trying
to change the tire. When she finally got home it was already 8:46pm. "Damn",
she said. "Laura went to work already...I'll just call her up tomorrow." And
with that Denise sat down and watched some TV with her dogs.

Morning came and Denise was wide awake at 8:52am to go to work. She took a
shower, got dressed and got inside her car. She drove for about 20 mins when
all of the sudden the A.C. in her car brakes. Smoke came inside the car and a
burning aroma could be smelled. "Fuck!" she yelled. "Stupid car...something
new everytime." Denise just sighed a very hard sigh and went on driving. She
arrived at work on time like always. She began to wait her tables and collect
her tips.

By mid afternoon, Denise was off work. Her daily routine was to go meet Laura
at the gym, so with no wait she drove to the gym. Thinking she was early,
Denise changed to her baby blue shorts and white sports bra. She went over to
the treadmills to begin her workout. About 1 hr and 23 mins later there was
still no sign of Laura and Denise was getting worried. She asked an employee
if she could use the phone. The guy said yea and Denise was dialing the
numbers with no wait. When the 20th ring came alone, Denise hanged up the
phone. "Where is she?" she whispered to herself. "Maybe she left me a message
on the machine at home, but then why didn't she page me? Not like her at all."
She continued her afternoon workout and left home at around 7:20pm. She
checked her messages. One from her mom, cousin, real estate company, but no
Laura. She called Laura again and still no answer. "Let me take a bath and
relax" she told herself. Denise Hopped inside her tub and began to calm her
nerves. She dosed off for an hr. She got out and wrapped a towel around her.
She walked over to the counter to grab her blow dryer and comb. She then stood
in front of a mirror behind the bathroom door. She looked at herself with
disappointment. "Why can I look more like a model. Look at my love handles.
And my flabby arms. No wonder I'm alone. What self respecting man would want
me." She said in a low voice. She sighed and continued to dry herself. She
always looked down on herself. But the fact is that Denise was a lean and
beautiful girl. She just didn't want to face it. She got dressed in her long
white Nike shirt and baggy black sweat pants and laid in her bed. It was about
9:30pm already. She was tossing and turning. She wanted to fall asleep so
badly, but her not knowing the where abouts of Laura kept her thinking and
worried. She decided to turn on the TV and watch it for some time. "Stupid
basic cable, not one good channel. I guess it the nightly news." She told
herself. She stopped on channel 7. First came a car accident on the palmetto,
then a robbery at WalMart, then a group of protesters at city hall. She was
about to turn the TV off when a News flash came in. She watched with
intriguingly.

-- -- --"Welcome ladies and gentlemen to the channel 7 News Plex, I'm Rick
Sanchez and this just in from our news team. A Brutally beaten body has been
found near May Fair today. Police are saying that the victim was a woman in
her early 20's with signs of rape and stabbing. The woman was found nude and
tied to a branch hanging upside down. Witness Ron Guerra who found the body
had this to say. "Well, I was with my nephew walking back home from the boat
show down on 16th. He was playing with his basketball when he lost hold of it
and it rolled into a patch of trees. I told him to stay back while I go in and
get it for him. Next thing I know I'm walking right into a pair of dangling
arms. I looked up and saw a bloody mess. So, ran out and grabbed my nephew and
called the police at that payphone right over there." Police are looking for
any clues and leads to who may have killed this young women. As of right now
the identity of this women is unknown. Police well have dental and finger
prints analyzed as soon as possible. Stay tuned for more information as we get
it. We'll be right back after a ........"-- -- --

Denise turned off the TV in shock. "My God! How can someone do that? I mean
she might have had a husband or children. Poor woman. What kind of a sick
asshole would do that? What has our world come to? Wait a second. May Fair?
Laura might have been there on the scene. Let me call..." She looked at the
clock before she picked up the phone. "Damn. Shes at work now. Bet shes
scared. With a killer on the loose and all. Oh my. I hope she's alright. I'll
hear from her tomorrow for sure. "With that said, Denise put down the remote,
laid her reading glasses on her night stand and fell asleep.

Morning came and Denise was fast asleep. By 10:23am the phone rang. Denise
opened her eyes slowly and looked over to her clock. She rubbed her eyes and
yawned.

"Man I was out. Great, I bet thats work calling to see where I am. Time for
some good lies." She picked up the phone and said "Hello?"

"DENISE?!" a heavy breathing voice said.

Denise puzzled replied "Yeah...Whose this?"

"OH MY GOD DENISE." sniffles and crying could be heard. "DENISE! THEY TOOK MY
BABY! MY BABY!"

Denise still confused, "Your baby? What? Who is this?"

"MY BABY!"

The sound of switching phones was heard, "Yes, hi and good morning. This is
Lt. Jospeh Green from the Miami Police Dept. Is this Denise Garlet?" the voice
screaming and crying before can still be heard in the background.

"Um yes" Denise answered. "Is there a problem officer?"

"Well maam, there's no easy way to say this. The woman you were talking to
before was Alice Stienbeck, Laura Stienbeck's mother. You know of her right?"

"Yes, is something wrong with either of them?"

"Laura was found dead yesterday at May Fair"

"No....No....NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Your lying! No! NO! NO!"

"I'm sorry maam. Results came back today and they matched Laura. Were still
looking for more evidence and clues to of whom may have killed her. So far we
have Monstro has our top guy."

"NO! YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND! I MEAN I SAW THAT GIRL YESTERDAY....AND
LAURA....MAY FAIR.... RADIO.....MONSTRO...WHY?? WHY??!?!!! OH GOD WHY??!!?!"

"I'm sorry. If there's anything we can do or if you get any clues, please call
us. Again, I'm truly sorry." Lt. Green hanged up but Denise was still crying
and shouting. "WHY?!" Denise shouted over and over again. Images of Laura kept
running though out her mind. She cried and cried. Then she curled up on her
bed holding her stomach tight. Crying more and more. "IT HURTS SO MUCH. WHY
DID SHE HAVE TO DIE?! IM NOTHING WITHOUT HER! OH GOD WHY?!" The pain in her
stomach grew more and more with her crys. "SHE WAS A GOOD GIRL. SHE NEVER DID
WRONG. AND ALL BECAUSE OF SOME ASSHOLE NOW SHES GONE! OH GOD!!" The anger was
beating out her depression. "THAT BASTARD. I HOPE THEY CATCH HIM AND GIVE HIM
THE CHAIR!" The pain was so intense but her anger was not letting her feel it.
She rolled over and placed her feet on the grown and sobbed with her head in
her hands. She clinched her fists and gave one final scream to the heavens.
"WHY!!!???!!!???!!!?HELP ME!!!!!!!" Then the pain from her stomach spread all
over her body. Her arms, legs, back, etc. She felt her every part of her body
pounding with pain. The waist of her sweat pants felt strangely tight. She
told up and cleared her tears to look down. She noticed that the cuff of the
pants were above her ankles now. She tried to roll them down put she was
stunned at we she saw next. Her once baggy shirt was beginning to shrink at
her very eyes. Her Abs can now be partially seen. The rope that was tied to
keep her pants up, was beginning to loosen by its self. "OH MY GOD! WHATS
HAPPENING?!" Denise asked out loud. She looked down and now the cuffs of the
pants were being pulled past her calves almost. She looked down for awhile
until she saw the calve it self bulge like a balloon. The cuff of the pants
ripped little by little as her calves were inflating with muscle. she rolled
up her pants fast so it wasn't ripped totally. as she rolled them up, she took
a look at her forearms. They too were gaining muscle and vascularity. She then
heard another ripping sound. "OH MY GOD. WHATS THAT NOW?!" She saw her left
arm and the sleeve of her shirt losing the battle. She stood in shock. She
rolled up her sleeves now so they too can be saved. She looked at her biceps
and triceps form. They were spectacular. She watched how they gained muscle by
muscle and how the firm they were becoming. The collar of her shirt was
getting tight now. She looked down and saw that now her breast were becoming
huge. She watched how they expanded and pushed against the shirt. A rip was
started in the center and continued all the way to her collar finally making a
brand new V- Shape collar. The waist of her pants .Now were surrendering to
her new wash board Abs. Her thighs were ripping the side of her pants. The
cuffs just broke off from her knee. Her ass was rounding out smoothly and
making rips. Her shoulders now shredded the sleeves and her back began to rip
the shirt in half. She was expanding everywhere. She was shocked but still
angry. Images of Laura still ran by. She was now about 5'11 and 186ibs. All
muscle. Not one slight of fat on her. The remains of a shirt covered only her
breast. Her pants looked more like daisy dukes or a g- string now. "HOLY SHIT!
WHAT JUST HAPPENED? OH MY GOD!" She walked over to her mirror in the bathroom
and saw what had happened. There in the mirror stood the amazon of all
amazons. She saw her new body and almost passed out. "I...I..I got muscle."
With that said she took both her arms and crossed them in front of her. "Wow!"
Then she hit a double biceps pose. Her biceps rose and ripped the remains of
the sleeves on the shirt. "JESUS CHRIST! THEIR HUGE!" She flexed them back and
forth. her biceps now most have been about 25in. She dropped the pose and
grabbed the front of her shirt. She pulled away the remains and saw her
breasts and Abs. Her breast were huge but perfect for her build. She grabbed
them to make sure she wasn't dreaming. "God. So nice and smooth." Then she
slipped her hand down her rock solid Abs. She felt the ridges and counted the
packs. "1..2..3......6. Wow! I got a 6-pack!" She continued to rub her Abs in
every direction. Then she moved down Thighs. "My God. I look like one of those
Muscle women on TV. HA!" She flex her thigh and saw every ripple and cut in
them. She stirred how toned and defined they were. Her calves too were
perfectly built. 18in can be the best guest now. "Damn. Great Legs!" She
turned around and took a look at her back. "Look at all those cuts and that
definition! Wow!" She flex her back and watched how it expanded with muscle
and she smiled. She then saw ass and how they made her pants look like shorts.
"HaHa" She laughed. "But its really annoying me. I wonder if I..." With the
thought on her mind, she quickly flexed her thighs and ass cheeks. The pants
ripped immediately on contact with her buns of steel. "Wow! This...This..This
is great! I look and feel fantastic!" She walked into her room with thoughts
running around inside her head all at once. "Better find some really big
clothes." She stumbled through her closet only to find a sweater and long
skirt. "It will have to do." The sweater was kind of tight but it concealed
her new body well. And the skirt was perfect. "Oh. What to do now with this
body?" She then saw heard the phone beeping like crazy on the floor. She
picked it up and looked at it. "Oh my God! Laura! Oh Laura please forgive me.
I know you had something to do with this. You made me change. Now I am
something. I can make a difference. No one will suffer like you did. I'll get
him for you. I promise!" With that said, she hanged up the phone and walked
out the door.

*****TO BE CONTINUED******